My Valentine--SS--Part 2 (Pg 4) - Page 2

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noodles thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Omg this was toooo cute.☺️ I'm surprised you actually wrote it. 😳 😆 Well your 1 week FF went on for over a year so I hope this does too. 😳 Me loves your writing. 😛

Wonderful job! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shaili: Hope you like it dear!😳

Roshni: Thank you so much dear! You're too sweet!😳 I hope you do get to sleep. i know how restless SD/SV can make me. Hehe.

Neha: Darling, I wrote it for you and Nishi first...then SD!😳 So glad you liked it. No point of emailing zee...woh sunte hi nahin!!😕 V's teased him a FEW times before...I hope she does it again soon. Makes the scene even sexier!😛

jaanamjaan: Very happy to hear that I brought a smile on your face. I'll have to update tomorrow evening. Busy day tomorrow unfortunately.

Rushvi: Thenkoooooo darlin! I know you were one of first FF readers so your comments mean alot. Thenkoo!😳

LoveSharad: I try my best to keep the characters as imaginable as possible, especially their dialogues. Thats one thing I can do decently. Thank you!😳

Ananya: Cho chweeeet! Thank you!😳😳 Im glad you can imagine the scene, mera kaam hogaya!😛 Well i dont knw abouyt besharmi coming up next...im very innocent u see!😛

patelzz: Thenkoo to you too!! I hope you enjoy the next part!

Nishi: You lost it or something?? sab do baar? But if thats how much you loved it then im SO relieved. I had huge pressure because you're such a fantastic writer yourself. So THANK YOU for liking it hunny! Too happy to see that reaction from you!!😳😳😳

Noodles: Yeh...please stop me NB from not doing what I did with the 1 week FF which is still on going.😛 No but time hi nahin hai to carry on with this one or the other one. Enjoyyyy!!!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I know she has teased him before.. but like you said this time it will be much sexier. They both want each other soooo much. I feel so special now.. you placed me before SD.. hehe 😊

Ab jaldi next part please.. Thenkoo
Edited by nehlove - 17 years ago
noodles thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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No way yaar why would I stop you? 😛 (wait... me confused you want me to stop you from stretching this, or the other way around? 😆) I'm enjoying it myself. 😆 Your old FF brings back some good memories. 😳 😆

Thats true Neha, both of them are dying for each other right now. 😛 It would be soo cute if V teased him abt that.☺️

Yeh RB, please continue soon. 😳
Edited by noodles - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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What do you mean pressure from me? I am not even in the 100 meter radius of your skills...
I just loved it...you do have a gift...you don't need to be modest...truly a gift from God...As I said before no one can depict these teasing scenes like you..they just come to life..I can see SV doing/saying these dialogues...

Please don't just end it because its crossed your limit of three parts...please continue...
I know how busy you are...whenever you have a lil time, please write for us? For SV? Please please please...

I am so glad you wrote..I was craving this...thanks for putting Neha and Me before SD..OMG....Thanks....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Reema.....WOW...u've left me speechless....tht was soooooo good...each character feels sooo real...I could totally imagine this scene....like Neha said...pls pls email Zee and see if they can ever put this in..its soo amazing..

btw u said u wrote this for Neha and Nishi na? lekin...ab hum sab ke liye....pls write the rest SOON....and it doesnt have to be 3 parts...u knw us....humara kum se ji kabhi nahi bharta....so the longer the better... 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
AAAAAAAAAAAAh

Matlab....usne galat gaye....(makes rolling actions with his finger)

^^I actually imagined him rolling his finger...chooo cute!!

It was fantastic, Reemz! I can actually see this whole thing happening...so true to the characters and completely believable 😳

continue soon!! 😳

waise...it's i love you, right? I've never heard the song 😭 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!!! that is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am so tired from wrk but this made the tiredness all go out! 😃 i hope this will be longer than 3 updates!i luvvvvvvvvvvv ur writing it's beyond amazing 👏 👏 i'm oficially in lala land 😍 what i luv about ur wrting is...everything lol! what super-duper luv about ur writing is that u actually make the other people imagine wat the person is doing etc. it's marvelous! 😛

luv shamila 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW REEMA!!
👏 👏 👏
that was very well written and concieved!
i mean not only was the plot brilliant but you did complete justice to the characters aswell. truly great!
im desperately waiting for the next part!
do write soon ... 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
You've never heard it Sravi di?? It's a classic...go hear it! 😉 😆 😆

Reemz di....first of all....I want to thank-you soo so much!!! Whenever you write a FF, all us other writers are put to shame!!! 😳 😳

The way your characters come alive so easily is so commendable, and the way you cud see everything happening as though watching it on TV...too good!! This whole part really transported me back to my childhood when MPK was my fav movie....now I realize....It's so much more! 😳

Thanks again! and Please post soon!!

Luv ya loads di,

Meera 😳

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