My Valentine--SS--Part 2 (Pg 4) - Page 3

Eeeeee, you have no idea how happy I was to see that you've written something here, you're cho long overdue!!

It was too lovely Reemz, I love the way Vidya taunts him... im waiting for some sizzling scene next, maybe?? ☺️ 😳 😳

Dil khush kardiya aapne... cant wait for the next part, and I wont stop you from writing so keep going 😃 *grin*

And..and..I can't wait to read the next part, you've really left us hanging...such grip had your story on me whilst I was reading it...that I stared at the end in disbelief...almost disbelieving the part already ended..

Please do post the next parts soon...I loved Shalu's dialogues, they were in perfect Shalu ishtyle and also you introduced the story in such a sweet, novel manner, that can't wait to see how you depict Valentines for SV...and if Vidya says those magical three words...knowing how you depict romance in your other fan fiction, I'm certain this one would be just as fabulous if not more😳😳

Keep smiling..

Love

Soni

I read Sagar's first dialogue and I was like ooooh what is he saying but than something hit on my mind that it was for Shalu not the other thing. 😕 😆

Sagar will def make her say those three words later. 😳

Fabulous waiting for the next part now...

Do continue asap Reemz di!!! This story is just too addicting!! 😉

Reemz ji!!! Please continue!!! Desperatly waiting for the update 😳 😳 😳

V Day is already here.. and there are 2 more parts to go.

V day is on thursday. Mujhe banaa mat! 😛 Yes yes...next part will be up today. Hopefully soon! 😉

Reema....before we give u an ultimatum....u might wanna post it SOON... 😛 😳

yeah.. but see if we hadn't reminded tu thursday tak part post nahi karti.. aur waise bhi V day is almost here..

Im getting kicked off so I cant spell check...sorry!

PART 2

Next morning.

Sagar is cheerfully walking through the passage way, when he stops listening to Sindoora's phone conversation. He hides himself behind the door...

Sindoora: (frustrated) Mr mathur, aap yeh sab abhi kyon bata rahe hai. Pura din tha aapke paas office mein aur jab mein ghar aayi hu tab ab bata rahe hai ke mujhe poona jaana hoga. Itni short notice par ticket milegi bhi ya nahin.....(Mr mathur says something) Bahut meherbaani hogi. Main tumhe sidha aiport par hi milugi. (She slams the phone on her bed and makes an irritated face) What nonesense.

Sagar has his cheeky james bond smile.

Vidya is in the kitchen making the breakfast. Maaji is on the side helping her out. Vidya looks up through the archway and sees Sagar coming towards her. Her eyebrows raise instantly and she quickly shakes her head at Sagar,hinting at him to go away. Sagar frowns for a second but ignores her anyway and carries on walking towards the kitchen.

He walks up to the arch and does not notice that his mum is on the side. Vidya's eye widen.

Sagar: (in his seductive voice) Happy Valentines Day.....

Maaji comes in to his sight as she walks towards Vidya, his face drops.

Sagar: (shocked) Maa! (SM looks up at him and Sagar changes back to his kiddish voice) Happy Valentines Maa. (SM smiles and does a slight shake of her head)

Sagar takes baby steps past the archway and in to the kitchen, he walks straight past Vidya and gives his mum a hug.

SM: (comes out of the cuddle and puts her hands on his left cheek) Happy valentines beta...

Sagar grins like a baby, Vidya is sniggering slightly on her hand.

SM: (looks towards Vidya) Acha vidya...jab khana hogayo ho, bula dena.

Vidya: (sweetly) Jee maa...hum buladege.

SM prods out of the kitchen leaving the two lovebirds on their own. Vidya's eye follow her out but as she turns slowly to her left, she jumps as Sagar has come closer to her. His eyebrows jump once.

Vidya: (unconsciously puts her right hand on his chest as he's coming closer) aap phir se aagaye. Aap chahte hai ke sindoora didi ko sab pata chal jaaye?

Sagar: (rings his arms round her body rightly) I dont care. Aaj valentines day hai...mujhe yeh din apni patni ke saath hi guzarna hai...bas.

Vidya: (makes very little effort to move out of the tight lock) Bache mat baniye na. Maa aajayegi...

Their faces are a few millimetres apart, Sagar has his arms wrapped around her body so firmly.

Sagar: (looks intently in to her eyes) Aisa karo ke tum maa ko abhi bulao...

Vidya: (trapped by his deadly stare) Hum...hum buladege (her voice goes quieter)

Sagar draws her face closer and closer, her words are barely recognisable as she begins to close her eyes. The tip of their noses brush against each other and his lips talk to hers...

Sagar: (whispers) aaj raat ko...dus baaje (silence for a split second as she gently opens her eyes to look at his again)

He moves his face towards her left ear and silently...

Sagar: ...humare kamre mein aana...(she moves slightly at the feel of his bare touch on her cold ear) ek surprise hai...aapke liye.

He tenderly pecks her ear, she tilts her head to the left and smiles with her eyes closed. Sagar lets go slowly,leaving her in a trance. He leaves the kitchen and she regrets seeing him go.

In the living room....

Shalu is writing a letter and in between giggling and blushing to herself. Bharat comes from outside and notices her not so irregular behaviour

Bharat: .... yeh aap kya karahi ho?

Shalu: (giggles) main hai na....chinuji ko love letter likh rahi hu.

Bharat: (rolls his eyes) Oh...(begins to walk away)

Shalu: (has a bright idea) suno bharat....ek kaam karoge mera? Yeh chitti....tum chinuji ko dedoge...

Bharat: (takes the letter from her) deduga..lekin aap kyon nahin de sakte?

Shalu: (bites her nail and giggles again) tum nahin samjhoge bharat...jab tumhe lowe ho jayega..tab tum bhi yehi karoge.

Bharat shrugs her shoulders and moves on. He goes towards the kitchen, puts the letter on the work top as he opens the fridge to take out a drink for himself.

Sagar: (shouts from far in his kiddish voice) Mr Indiaaaaaaaaa!

Bharat quickly takes his drink bottle but forgets the letter on the work top. He rushes out...

After a while, Vidya comes in and notices the letter next to the fridge. She frowns but decides to open it after some hesitation.

The letter reads....

"Meet me at 11.50.....just me and you".

Vidya is confused.