FF: Woh Pal.. Upd: Page 16 (Aug 11 2008) - Page 14

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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG!! I found it!! lol I finally found my old FF!! lol I'll update soon you guys... sorry for making you wait so long. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
😛😛wow,,, your FF has a awesome storyline please continue soon..........
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Posted: 17 years ago
please update 😳 cnt wait any longer
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG....just as u found ur ff i have eventually found it as well!
wow da storyline is amazing and i must also say ur an amazing writer as well!
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi
i am new
i hav been reading ur ff frm da beginning and i had to make an account to comment about it so i did.
u r an awesome writer.
plz continue soooooooooooooon.😃 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
plz update soon angel
i cant wait anymore!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Guys I'm going to update in a few hours, so all you lovely people who are online right now.. if you could wait an hour or so I'll have the update up for you. Thanks for all your patience! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg....cnt wait 😃 make it long 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Okay guys, I'll update today since I have the time. Enjoy! =)

Part 11 (I think..)

After the big and small fight between Sindoora, Vidya and Saagar as well Vidya decided to take Saagar away from the scene to not cause any other commotion. And to her surprise, Vidya began feeling remorse and sad about what just happened. Sure, she wanted Sindoora's real face to be exposed, but knowing that Saagar would have definitely been deeply hurt would've just made her think it was not at all worth it. She kept thinking that as of now, we both simply think that Sindoora is the reason for separating us. But when Saagar finds out the rest about his own sister, the one sister who he thought of as a mom after his real mom, how would he react to that? Vidya got terrified thinking how his world would shatter after knowing the whole truth. She was worried that this may cause a really bad affect on him emotionally and began to think of how he'd lose his whole self.

As they both stepped into the room she began to feel more and more anxious about the future. What if he asks me questions? How will I answer them? Then suddenly, another set of questions came to her mind.

She knows that her husband loves and may still love his sister deeply. Therefore he didn't react much to the truth about the letters she had written to both of us causing our separation. But what just happened right now, he had really snapped. He made Sindoora cry! So if she told him all about her behaviour towards Vidya, how she had treated her when he was mentally ill, how she had treated her when she was in no state of taking tension, how she had driven her out of the house forcefully when she was 8 months pregnant and having to go through a horrible delivery... Would he believe her? Or would he shake it off asking for evidence? She thought she should make an attempt at the least, if not expect him to believe every word.

After all that confusion, she built the courage to tell him all the truth. If he didn't believe her right now, she would try again. But eventually the truth had to certainly be out. She turned towards her husband who was facing the window right now with his hand resting on the ledge, looking as if he was simply staring into space, looking for answers. Vidya put Esha in her crib and said, "Suniye..". Saagar didn't turn his face but he replied with a "Hmm?" which for Vidya was the signal to start. (lol) "Humein aap ko kuch bataana hain." Saagar suddenly became worried and came and stood in front of Vidya, "Kya baat hain.. are you okay?" "Hum theek nahin hain... aur jahaan tak hum aapko yeh sachai nahin bataa tein, hum kabhi theek ho hi nahin saktein." Vidya's voice sounded tensed and Saagar became more and more interested in what she had to say.

Then you see Vidya saying something that is muted and Saagar become worried and upset at the same time, and then a flashback of a scene where Vidya and Sindoora are standing in the hallway with the camera going around them in circles. Vidya is crying while Sindoora says, "Tum kabhi iss ghar ki bahu nahin bann sakti!" and the flashback ends with Vidya's back facing Saagar where she ends that. She still looks a bit worried and so does Saagar. Slowly Saagar steps a bit forward and places his hands on her shoulders, trying to say that don't worry, I'm with you. Pour your heart out to me. "Aur phir.." and the flashback starts again.

An eight month pregnant Vidya walks down the stairs looking a bit exhausted and notices no one downstairs except for a suitcase and Sindoora on the phone talking to someone. Vidya seems confused and when Sindoora gets off the phone, she asks her what the suitcase is for. The answer she gets is wierd.

Vidya: Di, yeh suitcase..
Sindoora (You gotta be kidding me look): Come on Vidya.. tum itni bhi bholi nahin ho.
Vidya (more confused): Mein kuch samjhi nahin.. (Sindoora sighs) Baaki sab kahaan hain?
Sindoora (sarcastically): Sab chutti manaa nein gaye hain, Shimla. (Vidya gets even more confused) Oh God.. yeh ladki bhi naa.. (looks fiercefully at Vidya) Dekho mein kuch nahin jaanti. Saagar nein yeh chitthi tumhe dene ko di hain.. bas. Tum abh iss ghar mein nahin reh sakti. Bohot waqt ke baad mujhe yeh moka milaa hain, isse gawaar na nahin chahti. (Begins dragging Vidya out) Ab tum yeh suitcase lo, aur Sameer ko bhi saath le chalo (takes Sameer who was sitting on the couch watching TV) aur yahaan se dafaa ho jao. (Sorta jerks her to the outside steps.)

Vidya (starts to cry now): Kaunsa mauka di...? Aur.. aur mein kahaan jaaoon......? Hum... (stops in between her sentences) She was just about to finish her sentence when Sindoora closes the door on her. Vidya is left surprised with nothing to say or do except for Sameer holding her left hand and the letter she gave in her right hand, and the suitcase beside her. Sameer looks up to her with questioning eyes and slowly she gathers the courage to wipe her tears and open the letter and read it. What she reads makes her even more upset and wanting to cry more, but she thinks about her unborn child and convinces herself to control her emotions, at least for now.

The next thing she decides to do is call. Call who? Tusshar. She slowly reaches for her cell and calls his number, and places the phone by her ear still sobbing a little. "Hello?" she hears, and after a few seconds she replies in a voice calling out for help, "Tusshar..?" The next scene shows Tusshar in the drivers seat and Vidya in the passenger seat sobbing and Sameer at the back. Tusshar was trying to console Vidya as he too knew that at this time if she was going to get so upset it would affect the child.

The trio got home and Tusshar immediately told Vidya to take some rest and forget what just happened for the time being, for good health for the baby. Even he couldn't figure why Saagar could have done something to her especially at a time like this. The next morning, Vidya comes for breakfast at the table. She is quit expressionless but Tusshar immediately cheers her up by feeding a healthy yet really delicious meal. They both talk a bit about the baby and all, but Vidya still seems a bit depressed.

The next flash scene shows Vidya in the hospital in her room close to her delivery with Tusshar beside her bed holding her hand trying to calm her down. Vidya seems like she's going to scream any minute. "Vidya.. take deep breaths... deep breaths (demonstrates for her and looks kinda cute and dumb too) like this.. (Breathes in.. breaths out)" Vidya slaps his arm saying at the same time stopping after every word "Chupp raho... tum yahaan humara hosla barhaaney aiye ho yah humme daraa nein".. (Still has a tight grip on his hand) "Fikar not Vidya... (Demonstrates again) ladki hi hogi.. mein tumhe pakka kehta hoon." Vidya tries laughing a little despite all the pain, and the next second you hear Vidya scream like nothing scaring Tusshar like crazy and the scene fades away.

The next scene shows Vidya resting on the hospital bed in her room and Tusshar holding sleeping Esha in his arms. "How cutee.." he whispers with a big smile on his face. Vidya wakes up and turns her head to the other side and notices Tusshar and smiles to herself, but then realises the happiness that she expected to share with Saagar (father of her baby) she is now sharing with her best friend.

Now the whole flashback ends with Saagar sitting on the side of the bed with his blazer coat lying on the bed and his hands are folded on his face and a tear drops from his eyes. Vidya has her head rested on his shoulder and she too is crying.

Okay guys.. it took me an hour and half to post that lol and its extra extra long.. enjoy! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Amazing update. It was very emotional.. but i still don't get it.. does sagar believe vidya? hmmm...continue soon!

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