FF: Woh Pal.. Upd: Page 16 (Aug 11 2008) - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
completely understand!!!
but at least we know when to check for updates
take ur time
ur FF is so gud that its worth the wait
i never seen such fast moving love story lol i wish the real BMTD had a fast love story b/w SV
lol
keep it up

luv, rabiah
ps. ill be waitin for part 9
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Posted: 18 years ago
yes that was really fantastic😃😃😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
ye ur really good and its really nice of u to tell us besides ur doing a real good job lol we are still waiting for sv to come together in the show so urs is much better lol keep it up...cant wait:d
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey you guys! Sorry for the LOOONGG wait. Here's the update. Enjoy! 😳 😊

Part 9


So in the last update, we say that Saagar brought Vidya home and all the misunderstandings were cleared between the two. Now it was Sindoora's turn. Both Saagar and Vidya wondered why Di would do such a thing. But before all that, there was so much introduction left to happen. Vidya entered the home with Sameer and Esha, and upon seeing them three everyone was so pleased to see them they just hurried over. "Vidya.." mother-in-law said, overjoyed by her presence. And then she noticed the little baby in her arms and was so delighted she immediately took her in her arms. Saagar too joined the rest and everyone else met with Sameer and Vidya and Esha. "Kya naam hai rakha hai iska?" Maaji asked. "Esha." Saagar said diligently with a smile. "Bohot pyaari baby hai tumhari Vidya" Shalu said admiring the little child. Everyone was very very happy. The only member of the family that was seperate from the rest was Sindoora. She was still standing by the stairwell quietly with her arms crossed. Vidya amidst the happiness noticed this and her smile faded to a look of confusion. "Arre, didi, aap wahan kyun khari hain? Aaye na yahan." When she said that everyone's attention was turned towards her including Saagar. Thus she put a soft smile and forwarded towards the rest. At this time Saagar was holding Esha. "Really, you have a very cute child Saagar." She said caressing Esha's head.

After all the introduction was done everyone retreated to their own ways. Saagar headed to the study room to go over some things and Sameer headed over to Bharat and they both went to play. Vidya headed upstairs to her room with Esha in her hand, a few moments later Sindoora saw the perfect opportunity and followed her upstairs. When she was at the door she noticed Vidya was making Esha change into other clothes. She stepped inside with her arms crossed and an evil smile on her face. "Kahan....Kahan janam huwe tha..iss....Esha ka?" Vidya noticing her presence simply looked back at her and then disregarding the fact simply continued on with her task. She picked Esha up from the bed and proceeded to the cupboard.

Sindoora noticing her silence continued on with her taunts. "Zaroor kisi galee ya sadak par peda kiya hoga tumne isse.... Haan, zaahir he ke ghar chod ne ke baad, tumhe koi bhi jaga nahin mili hogi apna sar chupa nain. You probably couldn't even afford going to the hospital."

"Didi!" Vidya said as she closed the cupboard door. She went and stood in front of her bravely ready for anything she said or did. 'Meri bachchi kisi sadak ya gully mein peda nahin hui thi. Hospital mein janam huwa uska. Aur jahaan raha sawaal tumhara, tumhara plan to nakamyaab raha. Kya huwa apne "plan" ko?" She then paused looking hre into the eyes. "Satyanaash." she said and her voice echoed like it does in the movies. 😆

"Vidya!" Sindoora yelled. And then, all you heard was the sound of a slap. Who got slapped? Vidya? or Sindoora?
Edited by angel.41 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
i hope its sindoora and i hhope SAGAR SLAPPED HEr!
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Posted: 17 years ago
fab update ...loved itt 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
yeah, please Saagar stand up for yourself and your family for once! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG saayma!!!!!!!!!!! i didnt know u write sooooo sooo well!!!!!!!!!! i didnt even no tat u had this FF!!! i just read it from the beginnin n its super duper good!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait 2 read sum more!!!!!!!!!! hehehe... satyanash!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 really, saayma.. i luv ur ff!!!! btw... hows were ur exams.. u hav one tomm rite??? good luck on tat!!!!! plz continue wheneva ur free!!!!!!!!!😛 ~niti~
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: infiniti1215

OMG saayma!!!!!!!!!!! i didnt know u write sooooo sooo well!!!!!!!!!! i didnt even no tat u had this FF!!! i just read it from the beginnin n its super duper good!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait 2 read sum more!!!!!!!!!! hehehe... satyanash!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 really, saayma.. i luv ur ff!!!! btw... hows were ur exams.. u hav one tomm rite??? good luck on tat!!!!! plz continue wheneva ur free!!!!!!!!!😛 ~niti~



Hey yaar Niti! 🤗🤗🤗lol Thanx for the compliments yaar! I will update tomorrow hopefully cuz my last exam is tomorrow (thanx for the good luck ! 🤗)

heheh Yeah, I like the "Satyanaash" part as well! 😆😆 I was laughing myself when I was writing this 😆

Anywayz....talk to ya tomrrow! Wish me good luck! Byeee! 🤗🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
Di, this is my firs ttime reading this FF, I just caught u[pa nad i read it in one go! it is soooooooo awedome! Plz continue soon!

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