Koi Tumsa Nahin--FF! Updated! pg 15! - Page 2

wow Gauri! it's great yaar!! 👏 do continue 😉

Aww thanks everybody! I guess I will have to continue then, I don't mind though. If it means getting such sweet comments, I'll write a book! 😆 😳 😳

Okie... I'll try to get another part up today! Thanks for commenting!

With luvv🤗🤗🤗
_Gaurie

Here's Part 3!!!


"Tushar! Beta, koi phone pe hai. Tumhi se baat karni hai!" called Maaji. Tushar grinned. It's probably Mahi. They had been talking around this time for about 2 weeks now. Tushar was starting to feel so comfortable around her and was pretty sure she felt the same. Nowadays, he was starting to get restless around this time because he needed to talk to her. Everybody was noticing, especially Vidya.

"Yeh kya halat banarakhe ho Tushar?" she asked before. "Aisa lagta hai ki aap humare saath baat bhi nahin karne chaate."

"Nahin Vidya aisi koi baat nahin hai," Tushar wanted to tell her, but wasn't sure how she'd react.

"Phir kya hai?" Vidya looked hurt. "Agar koi baat hai, to aap humse baatadete naa?"

"…Haan," Tushar said finally. He was starting to feel confused too about his feelings. Vidya was an expert on knowing the right thing to do. If he couldn't talk to her, who could he talk to? "I think… I mean, mujhe koi milgaya…"

"Tushar? Kya baat hai? Kya aap…" Vidya looked half amused, half worried.

"Mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe shyad pya…" Tushar couldn't get himself to say it. Okay, control youself Gollu, he thought to himself. He was starting to call himself Gollu more often. "I think I'm in love,"

"Kya baat hai Tushar?" obviously Vidya had not gotten it. "Aap aise ho rahe ho jaise ki aap paagal ho gaya ya…" Vidya's eyes lit up. "Aapko pyar hogaya!" At this, Tushar had nothing to say and just blushed.

"Arre vah Tushar! Inko batadia to kushi se paagal hojayenge." Vidya gushed, indicating that he should go tell Sagar. (A/N Sagar is better, btw 😆).

"Koi baat nahin Vidya, maine sab kuch sunlia…" Sagar emerged from behind the door. "Yeh kya hai Tushar? Tune pyar karlia and you couldn't even tell me? Kaise dost ho yaar?"

"Aise koi baat nahin hai bro, bas, I'm not even sure." Tushar looked away.

"What do you mean not sure?" Sagar grinned at his friend being so shy. "Dekho, ya tum pyar karte ho ya nahin. Mein Vidya se itna pyar karta hoon…" he grabbed Vidya from behind. Vidya blushed and slapped his hand gently. "Ki sawaal bhi nahin uttha. Aur tum kehreho ki mughe nahin pata? What's wrong with you?"

Tushar frowned at his supposed friend who was giving him such a hard time. He turned to Vidya. "Vidya, tumhi batao, muge kaise pata hoga ki mein suchme pyar hoon?"

"Hmm…" she walked away from Sagar, smiling at them. "Jab aap har waqt unhi ke baare mein sochthe ho, aap unke saath rehne chahate ho, unko har waqt kush dekhene chahate ho… Shyad isi ko pyar kehte hai."

"Check, check and check. Uh-oh Tushar, I think I'm in love!" Sagar winked at Tushar and kissed Vidya's cheek. "Uhh, I've got to go… One more thing…" Sagar was about to leave when he turned back and pulled out the pin that was hold Vidya's hair in a bun. "Mujhe tumhare baal kulowe acha lagte hai. Bye!"

Vidya touched her hair in shock, but then smiled. "Aap usko batane cheye,"

"Kaise Vidya? Mein yeh bhi nahin jaanti ki voh mereko…" Tushar sat down. It hurt to even think that.

"Voh kaise ho sakta hai huh? Aap itne ache ho, usko kise better insaan ko nahin milsakti." Vidya smiled and left the room.

"Thanks Vidya…" Tushar whispered.

"Hello? Mahi, dekho tum chup chap raho kyunki mujhe tomko kuch zaroori baat karni hai. Mujhe nahin pata ki yeh kab aur kaise hua par…" Tushar was interrupted by an older, manly voice.

"Kya hua beta? Aur yeh Mahi kaun hai?" said Tushar's dad.



*A/N What did you guys think? Most of it is in flashback so that you could see how Tushar was feeling. I probably should have made an extra chapter on Tushar/Mahi conversation… Oh well! Hope you all like it and please comment, review and/or criticize! Varna...😈😆

Originally posted by: stargirl345

wow! it's really good. 👏 👏 👏
you're a talented writer! continue soon and keep up the gr8 work!

-Ruchika

aww thanks Ruchi! I was beginning to think no one was going to comment!

Gaurie

Wow Gaurie just read the 2nd and 3rd parts!!!

I'm gonna comment on Sagar's behaviour first before I forget, he sounds so sweet....yaar assa ladka mil jaaye... 😆 ok anyways....on to Tushar, he's so cute....gollu.... 😉 😆 😆 I really hope he and Mahi meet soon.... 😃 😃 Why did you end this part so quickly?? I wanna know what will happen now that Tushar's dad picked up the phone!!! 😳 😳

continue soon,

Luv ya loads,

Meera 😳 😳

issi to kehte hain suspense my dear! thanks for commenting! it's getting kind of late here so i'll try to continue tmr

Gaurie

hey guys tell me one thing, is this the only forum where i see so much talent or generally in every forum is it like that? i never have read FF's of any other serial, but I dont think i would see such huge ocean full of talent except BMTD any where 😛

How sweet!!! My ff is nothing compared to others like Meera's, Nabibah's and Reemz... There are others too, just not coming to mind right away 😆

Gaurie

Here's part 4!

Part 4

"Kuch bolo beta…" said Tushar's father again.

"Dad, aap. Hi," Tushar was so surprised, hje could barely say anything. "Kaise ho?"

"Ab theek hoon beta, tere aawaaz sunke theeke hoon."he said.

"Dad aap kahan ho?" Tushar said hurridly, he was supposed to call Mahi soon.
"Darwaaza to kholo pehle…" He laughed. Tushar looked at the main enterance and opened the door slowly. There, a pudgy man with two full suitcases and a cell in his hand. He was wearing a shirt and tie and smiled at Tushar. He put down the phone. "Mou dekhar kya karreh ho? Chal samaan lo!"

"Tushar beta yeh…" Maaji walkied in along with the rest of the family.

"Maaji yeh mera Dad. I mean Pitaji." Tushar explained and put down the phone. He grabbed his stuff and ran to put it in the guest room. What am I going to do? I guess I can't call her today… He thought to himself, worried. When he got back to the hall, he saw that everybody was seated and talking.

"Kya baat horaha hai?" Tushar asked, taking a seat next to Vidya.

"Arre beta, tumhare baare mein baat kare the. Poocho kya." His dad smiled at him. Tushar gave a tight one back. He wasn't comfortable with his dad being there.

"Kya, Dad?" Tushar picked up a glass and took a long drink. Whatever his dad wanted to talk about, it better be important.

"Tumhare shaadi ki baare mein!" Hid dad grinned so widely while Tushar choked on his water. After much coughing, Tushar finally said something…

"Yeh aap kya kehre ho Dad? Mein aur shaadi?!" Tushar had to restrain himself from shouting.

"Isme kya buri baat hai? Tum jawaan ho. Shadi ki waqt aachuka hai." He gave his son a stern look. "Mujhe pothe ya pothi ke saath bhi kelenhe hai,"

Tushar could not handle it any longer. This is why he came? "Yeh aap kya kehre ho Dad? Matlab ki app yahan mere liye nahin par apne aap kiliye? Aur yeh kya baat hai ki bache ke saath keloge? Aap to mere saath nahin kelene paya to grandkids ke saath…. Choro. Just forget it" Tushar shot a quick look at Vidya and then stormed to his room.

"Tushar! Come here right…" But he was already gone. His dad looked at everyone else quickly, then followed his son.

"Yeh kya hora hai? Tusharji theeke kehra hai, usko shaadi nahin karna chaiye," Chachi said, frowning.

Back in Tushar's room…

"Tushar! Yeh kya tamasha kar rakha hai?" Tushar's dad shouted at him.

"Mein tamasha? Aap yampe kyun aayeho?" Tushar stared at his dad.

"Tumhare shaadi karne kiliye. Ab mujhe aur kuch nahin suna chahate. Maine ek ladki ko pasand karlia, hum usko milne kal jaare hai and that's final!"

*A/N I didn't mean to make Tushar's dad so mean but it's all part of my divine design 😆 just kidding, but it has something to do with the story. Didn't think I'd fifnish a chapter tonight but I'm up watching FilmFare anyways so yeah… Again, please comment/review/criticize… Varna!!!