Dulhann FanFic note, pg 13 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: india9

wow really nice part u updated
i liked the part where sindoora bosses her kids around.
poor sindoora she doesnt know what to do 😆
really enjoyed it
thanks
im looking forward to the next part



Thanks for commenting. I think the last delay in updating made me lose the few readers I had. 😭

Wait and Watch what happens to Sindoora.

-Rimpy
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
gud stuff honey,its so interesting 😃 its awesome and getting more gud 😃 keep up the gud work
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

Preview:
Its seems that Sagaar and Vidya have sold their part of the house and property to these strangers. Sindooras not happy.

-Rimpy

ooooooo what will sindoora do???? cant wait to find out....i really likes this story from other stories because u said it was a real one...please make it as real as possible bcoz i like reading true stories

thanks ..even if its not real its still really good😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
ya plse come back soon im dyin to read next part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5

Sindoora storms inside after the girl and rest of her family follows. The boy supervises the servants bringing in the luggage. He didn't want anything to happen to their precious luggage, he didn't care if the got a scratch on the car but even he would kill them if they dropped the luggage, he even told them that. After the servants have made their way inside and have careful placed the luggage in the corner, he goes to join the Girl.

The Boy to the Girl: The luggage has been brought inside, so what rooms are ours?

The Girl to Chinnu: Mr. Chinnu Sangina, please have the servants show us what rooms are, or should I say were Mr. and Mrs. Sagaar Sangina's rooms?

Sindoora: Nobody is going to show you anything. You can't even be in this house, its private property. I want you to leave MY house. (turns to her nephews) Please show them the way out.

The Girl: Mr. Sangina, I would like to request you to tell your sons to stop before the come to regret listening to Sindoora.

Sindoora: I am the lady of the house, this is my home so talk to me!! You are leaving this house and none of your empty threats are going to change that.

The boys began to apporach the girl, when suddenly they hear a bang. The Boy, the stranger, had pulled out a gun and shot into the roof. The boys that were about to attack the girl, ran and hid behind Sindoora. The servants that were trying to spy on the family, ran away to hid. The Girl opened her purse, took out a couple thousands ruppees and throw them at Sindoora.

The Girl: Use it to fix the roof. Now can we please get back to business.

Mr. Chinnu Sangina, in a shaky voice: You can't stay in this house with force. This is our house and you can't just come in and claim it as yours.

The Girl mumbles: this house is our birth right

The Boy, before anybody has a chance to comment on what The Girl just said: I am Mr. Kapoor and this is Ms. Kapoor. We bought a piece of this house from Mr. and Mrs. Sagaar Sangina.

Sindoora: That is bull crap, Vidya would never sell her share of the house. She has always claimed equal right on this house, she wouldn't let it go this easily.

Ms. Kapoor, smirking: We have offical documents to prove that we own a part of this house. And Sindoora, Mrs. Sangina has left this house before....remember? You kicked her out.

Sindoora: that is none of your business, and Vidya choose to leave this house. Infact it was my husband that had brought her back. Now let me see the papers.

Ms. Kapoor opens her bag to reveal three sets of documents. She hands one to Sindoora and other to Chinnu. Lets just say their mouths hung open after they saw the papers. Ms. Kapoor couldn't help but laugh at them. She knew they would fall for their trap, it was too easy. Mr.and Mrs. Sagaar had handed over their share for free without any hesitation but Sindoora didn't have to know that.

Mr. Kapoor: We bought their share for a cool 2 Core. You see it was always our dream to restore this house to its rightful owners and let everyone live in harmony here.

Sindoora: 2 core? rightful owners? what are you talking about, we have always owned this house. I have always been the lady of the house.

Ms. Kapoor: Don't worry you can still me the lady of the house of your share of the house. And Mr. Chinnu Sangina, I would like to offer your 2.5 Core for your share of the house.

Just then Ms. Kapoor's phone rings and she smilies really big and picks it up.

Ms. Kapoor, on the phone: Phase 1 is almost complete....... Don't worry everything well go fine.......You just get things ready to bring the house down.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
oooh awesome part Rimpy 👏 👏 👏

sindoora...your days of misery are here 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😛The Girl: Use it to fix the roof. Now can we please get back to business.😆

The Boy to the Girl: The luggage has been brought inside, so what rooms are ours?

The Girl to Chinnu: Mr. Chinnu Sangina, please have the servants show us what rooms are, or should I say were Mr. and Mrs. Sagaar Sangina's rooms?

Sindoora: Nobody is going to show you anything. You can't even be in this house, its private property. I want you to leave MY house. (turns to her nephews) Please show them the way out.

The Girl: Mr. Sangina, I would like to request you to tell your sons to stop before the come to regret listening to Sindoora.



OMG these part are really funny 😆 wooooooooooow

nice part5 i loved it more....please update soon

thanks!😛

Edited by india9 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i cant wait for the next part
plz update soon
luv,india9
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: india9

😛The Girl: Use it to fix the roof. Now can we please get back to business.😆


The Boy to the Girl: The luggage has been brought inside, so what rooms are ours? The Girl to Chinnu: Mr. Chinnu Sangina, please have the servants show us what rooms are, or should I say were Mr. and Mrs. Sagaar Sangina's rooms? Sindoora: Nobody is going to show you anything. You can't even be in this house, its private property. I want you to leave MY house. (turns to her nephews) Please show them the way out. The Girl: Mr. Sangina, I would like to request you to tell your sons to stop before the come to regret listening to Sindoora. OMG these part are really funny 😆 wooooooooooow


nice part5 i loved it more....please update soon


thanks!😛



thanks India9. I am trying to make it funnier and more enjoyable to read. And believe me part 6 well only get better. Thanks for great feedback.

-Rimpy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: inavars

oooh awesome part Rimpy 👏 👏 👏

sindoora...your days of misery are here 😆 😆



Thanks, Inavars.

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