Dulhann FanFic note, pg 13 - Page 9

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Posted: 18 years ago
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After reassuring her caller that the house well be brought down, Ms. Kapoor hangs up and returns her attention to Mr. Chinnu Sangina.

Sindoora: you can't tear our house down. We aren't going to sell our portions to you and Sagaar's porition is right in the middle. You can't tear my house down.

Ms. Kapoor, laughing: who said I was talking about your house or a house at all. I am hosting a party in my portion of the house tomorrow. We were talking about having a happening party

Mr. and Ms. Kapoor are ready to roll over they are laughing so hard. Suddenly they hear a clock announce its 6 o'clock and they both quiet down.

Ms. Kapoor: Mr. Sangina, we know you are in debt and that you desperately need money. Just imagine what you could do with 2.5 core. You could send your kids to college, buy a new house and pay of your debt. Its a deal of the life time and don't you let anybody tell you otherwise.

Sindoora: we aren't going to sell our a porition of the house to you. We aren't sell outs like Vidya.

Ms. Kapoor, getting angery: I am nooot talking to you. I was talking to Mr. Sangina, I don't want your portion of the house. Who wants to pay a couple core for a place where you live. I wouldn't pay a couple thousand.

Sindoora: Shut your trap....we are not selling anymore peices of this house. You can live in Sagaar's portion but you can't have our protion.

Ms. Kapoor: Think about what I said but don't take too long. You have 24 hours to sell you portion and after that it'll be to late.

Suddenly Ms. Kapoor starts to cough voilently, her nails dig into the coach and her face is goes red as she is having difficulty breathing. Mr. Kapoor rushes towards her and grabs her purse. He takes out a bottle with some sortof funny looking green liquid and makes her drink it. She manages to spill half of it on herself and drink the other half. But whatever that liquid was has managed to make her stop coughing and she starts to breath a little bit more normally.

Sindoora and her family look at Ms. Kapoor, they are shocked out of their wits. They were suprised to see a girl that seemed so strong and mean to seconds a ago become so fragil. Ms. Kapoors hair was a mess, her dress ruined and suddenly she was looking so fragil. They didn't know what to say or do, so they just stared at Ms. Kapoor trying to figure out whats wrong. Nobody dared to say a word the property, money and anger were all forgotten. It was Mr. Kapoor that broke the silence....

Mr. Kapoor grimly: Rimpy....Rima, its time for your medicine. Lets go have a bite to eat, we can strick a deal with Mr. Sangina later.

Sindoora: did you just call her Rimpy? Thats Sagaar's daughters name........
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
wonderfull part rimpy
i loved reading it
thanks
👏
i have a suggestion
please do a small recap b4 everypart
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: india9

wonderfull part rimpy
i loved reading it
thanks
👏
i have a suggestion
please do a small recap b4 everypart


well do starting next part

-Rimpy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: punjabi#1


well do starting next part

-Rimpy

thanks😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooooh nice part!! gripping...i wonder what'll happen next!! Ahah...named his daughter after yourself huh?! 😉 😆 great part hun 👏 👏 I hope Rimpy/Rima's okay!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: inavars

ooooh nice part!! gripping...i wonder what'll happen next!! Ahah...named his daughter after yourself huh?! 😉 😆 great part hun 👏 👏 I hope Rimpy/Rima's okay!



hey, I am Sagaar's daughter in a way. Plus, I do have a heart condition. I don't know it fit. Also, I didn't want to make any of you sick, even if it was in a fanfic.

Her mysterios illness well really help in the next part.

-Rimpy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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can't wait for the next part 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow... awsome part - continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesum part rimpy! 👏 👏 👏 Plz continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i love it i love it i love ittttttt....
nice fanfic..you know I am on the computer just read all the update of the fanfics i love and wnt miss any part,.......love readin alll fanfic and as this is the only one i saw in BMTD...i loooooove ittt 😉

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