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khulh

@khulh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#271

i liked sagar and vidya ka scenes sooooooo much , the beach scene , the car and the flying kiss , i loved soooo much

and i'm soo happy that she trusts her love so much yaar , i love it

and in the last scene you made me sooooo worried bidu really , i thought in many ideas that can happen to him

and please update the next part soon , very very soon , please bidu we are all so worried

Edited by khulh - 14 years ago

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#272

Hi friends! First of all, Happy Holi! So, here's my next update! Enjoy!

In a dark room, Sagar is sitting at a corner on the floor and is crying continuously. He's crying so much that his eyes became red. He gets a flashback.....

Flashback (Thakur Niwas)
Sagar is happily walking towards his room in his house. His mood is really good today. Suddenly he stops and says to himself, "Mom dad ghar par honge. Unse pehele baat karke aata hoon. Par pehele kuch kha leta hoon. Bohot bhukh lagi hai yaar!" Telling this to himself, he goes to the kitchen and searches for the servant but finds him no where. He thinks, "Shayad kaka kisi kam se bahar gaye honge. Theek hai, woh jab aayenge, tab unhe kheer banane ke liye kehe dunga, kyuki mujhe toh khud ke liye coffee banani bhi nahi aati, kheer kaise banayunga." Thinking this, he laughs to himself. Playfully hitting on his head by his hand, he says to himself, "Sagar beta, aab khud pe hasna bandh kar aur bravely mom dad ke paas jaa. Vidya ke baare mein unse baat karni hai naa!" Telling this to himself, he walks towards his parents' room. When he finally reaches in front of his parents' room, suddenly he stops because he have heard that his parents were discussing something about him. He doesn't go inside and stands right behind the door. Sagar's dad (SD) was saying to Sagar's mom (SM), "Kyuki abhi koi bhi available nahi hai, hume yeh kam Sagar se hi karwana hoga." Sagar seems confused and thinks, "Kaunse kaam ke baare mein baat kar rahe hai dad?!" SM replies to SD, "Par yeh koi aisa waisa kaam nahi hai. Kya Sagar yeh kaam kar payega? Kya woh drugs aur hatiyaar safely India ke bahar le jaa payega?" Sagar is shocked. He thinks to himself, "Drugs aur hatiyaar?! Iss ka matlab mom-dad smuggling ka business karte hai? Yeh nahi ho sakta!" SD replies to SM, "Agar usne yeh kaam karne se mana kar diya toh phir hume usse marna padega, theek waise hi jaise uske reporter baap ko mara tha humne, 20 saal pehele! Aur yeh mat bhulo, Sagar ko humne apne faaide ke liye hi iss ghar mein leke aaye hai!" Hearing what SD said, Sagar is very shocked. Tears began to roll from his eyes and he becomes silent. He couldn't even stand on his own feet as he was totally broken down. While Sagar looses his balance and falls on the floor, his parents sense that someone was hearing their discussion. They starts walking to the door. Sagar notices this and somehow escapes from there.

Back to the present
Sagar tells to himself, "Maine aap logo se itna pyaar kia, itna maan-shammaan diya aur aap dono ne mere saath aisa kiya? Kyun kia aap dono ne aisa?" Saying this, he cries loudly. Here, in Singhania Mansion, Vidya is really worried. She thinks, "Kaha jaa sakta hai, Sagar? Mujhe pata lagana hoga." Thinking this, she rushes from the house. VP calls out Vidya's name several times but Vidya doesn't respond and she goes. She is only worried about Sagar right now. She sits into her car. Just then, she gets a call from Sahil. Vidya picks up the call and says worriedly, "Haan Sahil bolo!" Sahil tells Vidya, "Vidya, tum kuch worried sound kar rahi ho. Pichli bar tumne phone kia tha tab maine notice kia ke tum kuch pareshan si sound kar rahi ho, lekin tab tak tumne call disconnect kar diya. Kya baat hai Vidya?" "Sagar ka kuch pata nahi, Sahil.", Vidya says with a worried and concerned look on her face. Sahil shockingly says, "Kya? Yeh kaise ho sakta hai? Sagar toh tumhare saath tha, haina? Phir..?" Vidya is very worried. Her eyes even became teary because of her worry. She says, "Haan woh mere saath toh tha. Par usne mujhe ghar chod kar apne ghar chala gaya tha. Lekin maine uske ghar call kiya toh pata chala ke woh ghar par nahi hai. Aur woh apna phone bhi nahi utha raha. Mujhe bohot tension ho rahi hai." Sahil consoles Vidya saying,"Vidya, tum fikar maat karo. Hum dono Sagar ko milkar dhundenge. Bas tum ho sake toh mere ghar ke samne aa jao." Vidya says, "Theek hai. Main aati hoon." Saying this, Vidya starts the car.

Vidya stops her car in front of Sahil's house, where Sahil is standing. Sahil gets into Vidya's car. Vidya says worriedly, "Sahil, Sagar kaha chala gaya? Mujhe bohot tension ho rahi hai." Sahil says, "Chinta maat karo, Vidya. Hum Sagar ko dhund lenge. Chalo pehele college chalte hai, Sagar shayad waha ho." Vidya says, "Theek hai, chalo." Vidya starts the car.

Sanju is in her room. She is lying on her bed. Her hairs are wet and she's wearing a pink t-shirt and a black pajama. She is smiling and thinking of the moments she shared with Sahil. She thinks, "Kahi sach mein mujhe uss weird Sahil se pyaar toh nahi ho gaya?" Thinking this, she blushes and hugs her pillow. She tells herself very sweetly, "Hai rabba! Yeh pyaar sach mein musibat hai. Itna confuse kar diya mujhe. Main aab tak sure nahi ho paa rahi hoon ke main Sahil se pyaar karti hoon ke nahi. Kya karu ke mujhe yakeen ho jaye ke main uss buddhu ko chahne lagi hoon?" Telling this to herself, she closes her eyes and sees Sahil's smiley face in front of her eyes. She shockingly opens her eyes and tells to herself, "Yeh filmy baate mujhpar kaise itna effect karne lagi? Aakhe bandh kia toh uss buddhu ke face! Hey bhagwan! Shayad sach mein, I'm in love with that weird Sahil!"

Vidya's car stops in front of the college. Vidya and Sahil get out of the car and goes inside the college. They madly searches for Sagar everywhere in the college but the whole college is empty. Sahil tells to Vidya, "Sagar college mein toh nahi hai. Aab kya kare?!" Vidya doesn't respond. She seems to be thinking something. Sahil touches her arm and says, "Vidya!" Vidya comes out of her thoughts and instantly says, "Mujhe samajh aa gaya ke Sagar kaha ho sakta hai. Chalo mere saath!" Saying this, Vidya runs to her car and Sahil follows her. Both sits into the car and Vidya starts it.

The car stops in front of a wooden house. Sahil confusingly says to Vidya, "Yaha?" Vidya says, "Haan! Yeh Sagar ka apna ghar hai, uska dream house. 10 saalo se usne ek ek paisa jamaakar iss ghar ko banaya hai. Aur usne mujhse kaha tha ke jab bhi woh bohot jyada khush ya udaas hota hai, tab woh yaha aata hai. Mujhe yakeen hai ke woh andar hi hoga." Sahil says, "Theek hai, andar chalte hai!" "Chalo!", Vidya says. Then both get out of the car and goes inside the house.

The whole house is full of darkness. Vidya and Sahil continuously call out Sagar's name. Sagar hears them and is shocked. He thinks, "Vidya aur Sahil.... yaha?" Thinking this, he wipes out his tears, stands up and walks to Vidya and Sahil. Sahil turns on the lights and finally, they find Sagar. Seeing Sagar, Sahil takes a sigh of relief and Vidya runs to him and hugs him tight. After a few moments of hugging, she moves back and says, "Tum kaha chale gaye the Sagar? Tum ghar par bhi nahi the aur tum apna phone bhi utha rahe the. Baat kya hai Sagar?" Sagar tries to hide his pain. He says, "Woh actually... main..." Vidya notices Sagar's eyes are red. She says worriedly to Sagar, "Tum ro rahe the?" Sagar becomes nervous and he looks to the other side. He says, "Main? Ro raha tha? Nahi toh. Main kyu royunga?" "Agar tum ro nahi rahe the toh tum mujhse aisa nazre kyu chura rahe ho? Kya hua? Aur plz, mujhse jhoot maat bolna." Sahil is standing at a corner and he thinks, "Inn dono ko aab kuch der akele chod dena hi theek hoga." Thinking this, he goes from there. Sagar is still looking to the other side. Vidya makes him turn to her, holds his cheeks and says, "Tum mujhse kuch chupa rahe ho. Bolo kya baat hai! Kya hua Sagar? Mujhe nahi batayoge?" Sagar couldn't hold his tears anymore. He breaks down. He looses his balance and falls onto the floor. Vidya is shocked and sits beside him on the floor. Tears began to roll from her eyes, seeing Sagar crying. She takes Sagar's hands in her hands and worriedly asks, "Kya hua Sagar? Tum aise kyun ro rahe ho? Tumhe malum hai naa ke main tumhare aakho mein aasu nahi dekh sakti. Baat kya hai? Batao mujhe." Sagar keeps crying and says everything what he heard from his parents. Vidya is shocked to know that Sagar's foster parents killed his biological father. She hugs Sagar tight and consoles him in every possible way. Sagar hugs Vidya tight and keeps crying.

Precap: Sagar and VP are face-to-face. VP tells Sagar to prove his love for Vidya. Sagar wipes out his tears and readily agrees to do what VP will tell him to do.

Here's the end of this part. Hope the confusions are cleared now. Hope you liked the another twist and this part as well. Waiting for ur comments. Love... Bidz!!! :)

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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Shilpa Sobti

@shilparoxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#273

Great job, Bidushy!!!!!
Happy Holi to you too!

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khulh

@khulh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#274

tum jaan the ho hum kitni parishaan the
ahhhhhhhhhhh

this part has alot of surprised things
i'm so sad for sagar
i liked this part sooooooo much bidu , really really really
waiting for the next

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: khulh

tum jaan the ho hum kitni parishaan the
ahhhhhhhhhhh

this part has alot of surprised things
i'm so sad for sagar
i liked this part sooooooo much bidu , really really really
waiting for the next

Now all worries are gone? 😛
So, which things did you like most in this part? You didn't tell that.. 😊
Yeah, I feel sorry for Sagar too
Hey, did you like the twists in this part? 😉

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#276

Awesome update !

Loved it !

Poor Sagar !

Feeling soo bad for him !

Waiting for next !

Update soon !

Thnx for pm !

Edited by Pumpkinn - 14 years ago

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baloSD

@baloSD

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Posted: 14 years ago

#277

sorry yaar i didn't comment because my stupid net problem!!!!!
i read the frist one it's soo beautiful i really loved it!!!
i loved SV beach scene!!!!in the car sagar said to vidya hamare angel ki khayal rakhna i really loved it and the flying kiss it's awsome yaar
in the last scene sagar crying soo much!!! i really worried yaar!!!!
in the second one it was awsome yaar!!!!
i loved the last scene it was amazing!!! suspense bi zabardast tha!!!!
Bidzz you're amazing!!! u r the best!!!! love u🤗
Happy holi bidzz!!!

Edited by baloSD - 14 years ago

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Sonia Rachel John

@awesumsonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#278

bidz.....i really feel taht this uodate was one of ur best updates.. i mean it was awesumm,gr8..

loved teh suspense very much.....cooooooooool job!!!!!

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khulh

@khulh

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#279

i don't know what to say bidu
yaar it was soooooo soooooo amazing
i liked every thing in this part and i mean that
how vidya was worried and searching and that she knew where she can find him
and sagar wasn't want to made her sad by telling her what happened with him
and that how she stay with him and really really that all is the true love yaar

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: baloSD
sorry yaar i didn't comment because my stupid net problem!!!!!
i read the frist one it's soo beautiful i really loved it!!!
i loved SV beach scene!!!!in the car sagar said to vidya hamare angel ki khayal rakhna i really loved it and the flying kiss it's awsome yaar
in the last scene sagar crying soo much!!! i really worried yaar!!!!
in the second one it was awsome yaar!!!!
i loved the last scene it was amazing!!! suspense bi zabardast tha!!!!
Bidzz you're amazing!!! u r the best!!!! love u🤗
Happy holi bidzz!!!

Arey thts okay 😊 Thank u so much!!! 😃 Glad u love it!!! Haha.. Thanks for the compliment!!! 😳 Love u too!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: awesumsonia

bidz.....i really feel taht this uodate was one of ur best updates.. i mean it was awesumm,gr8..

loved teh suspense very much.....cooooooooool job!!!!!

Thank u so much diii 😃 ur feedbacks mean a lot to me 😳 Love ya loads!!! ⭐️

Originally posted by: khulh
i don't know what to say bidu
yaar it was soooooo soooooo amazing
i liked every thing in this part and i mean that
how vidya was worried and searching and that she knew where she can find him
and sagar wasn't want to made her sad by telling her what happened with him
and that how she stay with him and really really that all is the true love yaar

Awww glad tht u like it soooo much 😃 thanks a lot!!! 😊 it means a lot to me!!! 😳

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago