Fanfic: Tera Intezaar hai aaja...part 4 on pg 9

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Reena

@jaanlover

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

Tera intezaar hai aaja...

Tera intezaar hai aaja is a story about two childhood friends ? Amar and Divya. In their childhood they have shared everything with each other...they laughed and cried together. They helped each other at college and they made a promise to each other that they will always stay together...but they seperate.

But no matter where they are they are always thinking of each other...and waiting for that one moment when they will meet each other again.

Will they meet each other...can they tell each other that they love each other..and will Amar's family accept Divya..?

Read this wonderful story about two childhood friends who will make you laugh and cry.

Characters:

Amar Singh: He is sweet, caring and very understanding. He was born in Mumbai but after 8 years he moved with his family to Melbourne. He belongs to a very rich and powerfull family..however he don't care much of money. His family is very important for him but more important for him is his childhood friend Divya. He can do anything for her..he loves her a lot.

Mr. Alokh Singh: Father of Amar...he is a very rich business tycoon and want that his son Amar will continue with his company. For him money is more important than love. He doesn't understand Amar..and most important he don't like Amar's friendship with the poor Divya.

Mrs. Kamya Singh: Mother of Amar...she really loves her son Amar but she has to choose always between her husband and her son which is very difficult for her.

Divya: She is a very simple, beautiful, sweet and very traditional girl. She was born and raised in Mumbai. She lives with her mother who is very important for her...her father left them when she was only one year...She had to face a lot of problems in her childhood but there was always one person who always supported her in each way...her best friend Amar.

Nandita Sharma: Mother of Divya...she loves her daughter very much and she loves the dosti between her daughter and Amar. She see Amar like her own son..but she is very scared that Divya will be hurt because Amar belongs to a rich family and she is poor.

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( In the story there will come some new character..whenever a new character will come in the story I will introduce him/her in the start of that part )

Hope you all like it guys...write your comments and tell me what you all think about the story. I will post the first part very soon. ( my laptop has been crashed so I have to use the computer of my di when I get the chance but will def try to post the first part really soon)

Reena

Edited by jaanlover - 16 years ago

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Reena

@jaanlover

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

Part 1

It was a bright sunny morning when a sweet little boy woke up. He walked on his toes to the bathroom...because he doesn't wanted to wake up his parents. He took a quick shower and he wore his school uniform. He went carefully down the stairs and went to the kitchen...there he took fruit, paratha and milk. He had took from everything two..he had done everything in his bag. He went to the door but before he could open the door he heard his mother's voice...

Kamya: Amar beta...where are going so early in the morning...?

Amar:
Hmm maa...mein college jaa raha hoon.

Kamya:
But Amar you have still two hours till college will start

He wanted to turn around but his mom hold him by his bag and everything fell from his bag. She saw two apples, two paratha's and two bottles milk...she looked at Amar. Before she could say anything she heard her husbands voice from the bedroom...Amar quickly grabbed the box with food and the two bottles milk and walked out the door. Kamya told her husband that she will come right now...she turned quickly to Amar and saw that he already left.

Kamya went to the bedroom...she took a business suit for her husband at the wardrobe and put it on the bed. She just wanted to leave to prepare the breakfast for her husband when she heard a high voice...

Alokh:
What were doing downstairs..?

Kamya:
Hmm..I was just...

Alokh:
Don't lie to me Kamya...where is Amar...?

Kamya:
He left already for college...I was packing his lunch

Alokh:
But it's so early..he is not gone to that poor girl..what's her name..hmm..that Divya...?

Kamya looked down and thought how she saw the food for two persons in his bag. Alokh asked her again the same question and she told him that Amar went to the libary to make his homework. Alokh smiled and told her that she should make his breakfast now.

At sharma's house

A little girl in a pink salwaar kameez was to sweep the floor of a small livingroom when her mother came. She saw her daughter and felt really bad..she went to her and took the broom.

Divya:
What happend maa...?

Nandita:
I will do it Divya beti...get your books because you have to go at college. I have not much money so you have to walk today.

Divya nodded her head and left to her bedroom...she took her books and went to the small house temple where she was praying for her mother and ofcourse for her friend Amar.

Nandita was to sweep the dust when Amar came inside and touched her feet. She wiped her hands to her saree and hugged him..she gave him a kiss on his forehead. She told him that Divya will come in a minute...she was getting her books. Amar put his bag on the ground and began to sweep the dust together..when Nandita saw this she ran to Amar and took the broom.

Nandita:
What are you doing Amar beta...? I will do it...your hands will get dirty

She took his hands and wiped clean with her saree...Amar told her that he can do anything for her. Nandita had tears in her eyes and hugged him again. Divya who was standing at the door and saw everything smiled.

When Amar saw her he smiled...he told Divya that they must leave now. Divya looked down and Amar saw that there was something wrong...he went to Divya and took her hands.

Amar:
What happend...?

Divya looked at her mother who had now more tears in her eyes.

Divya:
We can't go together at college today...because I don't have money to buy a ticket for the bus.

Amar was stunned when he heard it...he gave Divya a soft blow on her head

Amar:
Bas yehi problem hai...arre pagli mein hoon naa..I will buy a ticket for you.

He took Divya's hand and they took together the blessings of Nandita and left from there.

When they were sitting in the bus Divya was asking Amar how his weekend was...he started to tell her that he had to attend with his parents two parties..Divya who have never been to a party was asking about each detail of the parties. When he had told her everything he asked her how her weekend was...

Divya:
You are asking me this each week again...and you know that each week my answer will be the same. I was the whole weekend at home...but yes I went outside..to help my mother sell vegetables on the market.

Amar saw that Divya was very sad..so he did his hand around her and gave her a hug.

After some minutes they arrived at college...they went to the class and they were sitting next to each other. They were always together...the other kids couldn't understand why Amar was always with the poor Divya and especially the other girls.

During the lunch break Amar and Divya were sitting in the park...he took the box with food and told her that he had also took something for her. Divya had tears in her eyes...she told him that he gaves her so many things and she can't give him anything. A small tear fell from her eye...he wiped her tear off and told her that he only want her friendship and her love. She smiled and promised him that she will always love him. She took the food and started to feed Amar with her hand..and than Amar feed her also with his hand. They had a great time together but than suddenly they heard a very angry voice...they looked up and saw Amar's father in front of them.

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To be continued

Sorry for the mistakes...hope u guys will like it !!!

The first few parts will tell u all something about their childhood

Reena

Edited by jaanlover - 16 years ago

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

Oooo hehe, sounds very interesting !
Am looking forward to it ..
update soon ..

( You've got yourself a bugger 😆 )

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Reena

@jaanlover

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey
Oooo hehe, sounds very interesting !
Am looking forward to it ..
update soon ..

( You've got yourself a bugger 😆 )

Thanks dear...

will try to update very soon 😃

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Di !

Wonderful start !!!!!

Yiipppeeeee....another FF !

I'm sure it'll come out in flying colours !!!!!!

Waiting for the first update !

Vidya 😊

Edited by Vidyaa - 16 years ago

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Reena

@jaanlover

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidyaa
Hey Di !
Hey my sweet little sister

Wonderful start !!!!!

Yiipppeeeee....another FF !

Thanks a lot dear...I'm happy you liked the intro

I'm sure it'll come out in flying colours !!!!!!

That's very sweet of you 😃

Waiting for the first update !

I'm writing right now the first part so I hope I will finish it today in the evening so that I can post it today

Vidya 😊

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shobbybee

@shobbybee

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

my laddoo jaan.. great to c u with a fresh FF.. continue soooon meri laddoo jaan =)

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titly

@titly

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Jaanu...........its gr8 that u also started a ff................amazing intro..loved it already........nice title yaar....................update soon dear...