Fanfic: Tera Intezaar hai aaja...part 4 on pg 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saniiii

Awesomeee start.. lovedd it very much.. I wonder what Amars dad will say.. 😲 .. hope its nothing bad.. pleasee continuee soooonn,,

Thank u so much dear...I'm so happy you loved it !!!
Right now I'm writing the new update so I will post it very soon 😃
With lots of love...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'm writing the new update now...so I will update very soon jaanu
I thnk I will def finish it today 😉
love u....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2
When Divya heard the voice of Amar's father she was very scared...the food in her hand fell on the ground. She was slowly walking backwards..but Amar stopped her..he took her hand and looked at his father. Alokh was furious..he went to Amar and grabbed his hand. He had pulled his hand so hard that Amar had to leave Divya's hand.
Alokh: Get in the car...right now Amar
Amar: No...I want to be with Divya
Alokh looked at him very angry...he took again his hand and took him to the car. Amar was shouting but it didn't help anything...when he was sitting in the car he made his window open and looked at Divya. Both had tears in their eyes..
At Singh mansion:
Kamya was preparing the diner when she heard Alokh shouting at Amar..she went directly to the living room. She hugged Amar and asked Alokh why he was shouting at Amar.
Alokh: You know very well why I'm shouting at him...today I saw him in the park with that poor girl Divya...
Amar: She is my best friend...
Kamya was suprised to hear that Amar said that...he never said that before to his father..especially when he was so angry at him.
Alokh: I know this girls very well...
Before he could say anything else Kamya had told him to be quiet...Amar went to his room and Alokh started to scream at Kamya that it's all her fault. She tried to tell him that Amar and Divya are just kids but Alokh doesn't want to hear anything and left from there.
At Sharma's house:
Nandita was to sell some vegetables in front of her house when she saw Divya...she saw that she was crying and walked inside the house. Divya threw all her books on the ground and started to cry louder.
Divya: Why is this happening with me...? What can I do that I'm so poor..?
When Nandita heard this she knew already what must be happend. She went to divya and hugged her..she felt very bad to see her daughter like this. She wiped her tears away and gave her a kiss on her forehead...
Nandita: I have tell you many times dear...Amar belongs to a very rich family...I know he is your best friend but you have to realise that besides this friendship there are also other things what matters.
Divya told her that she didn't want to hear anything...Amar is her best friend and that's the most important thing for her. Nandita tried to talk with her again but Divya ran to her room and let herself fall on her bed. She was thinking about Amar..and aftr a while she fell in sleep.
It was midnight when Divya heard something outside...she did her eyes open and she saw Amar climbing by the window. She was so scared..but before she could scream Amar came close to her and did his hand for her mouth. He whispered in her ears...
Amar: How are you...? I'm so sorry about what happend today in the morning..
Divya smiled and told him that she is very happy to see him...he took her hand and told her that he has a suprise for her. He took her gently to the roof..and when they were on the roof Divya saw two candles and some food.
Amar: I know you haven't eat anything today after what happend...so here for you my Divya a candle light diner...
Divya hugged him very tightly and gave him his beautiful smile..they were feeding each other with their own hands and together they were looking at the beautiful sky with stars.
Divya: You won't leave me naa...?
Amar: Never...Today I promise to you Divya that no matter what will happen I will never leave you...
He did his hand around her and after a while they were sleeping on each other shoulders.
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To be continued
I know it's not that good but I hope u all with like it
It's not too long..I'm very sorry for that..actually my laptop has been crashed so I have to use the computer of my di now..but she also need it now that's why I couldn't write a longer update...
Edited by jaanlover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
jaanu that was a awesome update....cant wait for the next
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
Woww Di !
Wonderful update !👏

Aww.....Amar is such a sweetheart !!! Itna pyaara hai..............
Superb di...just fantastic!👏
Loved It
Thanks for the update
Vidya😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
awww.....jaanu....its too good....i really love it.....wow Amar Divya r really the perfect example of best friends...i really hope this friendship would turn into sumthing special very soon....plz continue soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: THERUSHA

jaanu that was a awesome update....cant wait for the next

Thanks a lot jaanu...I'm very happy you liked it
I know it was short but next time I will try to write a longer part !!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
fabulousss update... really loved it.. you are a very talented writer.. pleasee cont soon. cant wait.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
how can u say it wasn't good???? it was fantastic?? and length?? well, thats no prob, alteast you upatted........itz quality not size.............i luved it!! wow!! that was soo sweet!! i luv your writing!! youre a fantastic writer!! luvyou!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

what are you saying!

thatr was wonderful

i really love the story line

nice

but that ugly alokh!

continue soon!

Edited by kirancanada1 - 16 years ago

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