Reena - such a touching & endearing update! 😊
I just love how wonderfully poignant Amar and Divya are together. So young, but already they know they are meant to be in each other lives. Their sweetness towards each other is so very heart warming! I just want to hug them both! 😊
That Alokh - ooohhh! I want to strangle him! 😡What a cold hearted, wicked man he is to want to harm a child! 🤢 And to have such a burning hatred for Diyva, simply because she's poor? HA! That man should fear Karma! Cuz it won't spare him the day he sees his son choose Divya over him!
Reena, you portrayed all their emotions so unbelievably well. I could feel myself angry at Alokh. My heart wrenching with Nandita as she cared for Divya. Tearful at AD being separated. Fearful as to what that scheming devil Alokh is planning. Proud of Amar for standing up to his father, even tho' he is just a young boy. And frustrated that Kamya probably won't be able to do more than wring her hands as Alokh plots away.
Whew! You sent me through a gamut of emotions with that one update meri dost! I can't express how wonderfully & beautifully you write Reena! Your FF is just fantastic! 👏👏👏
I enjoyed it so very much! I can't wait until you have time to update again! 😊
Edited by fire_woman - 16 years ago