Hum Dil de chuke sanam(ff)part36 april 28, page 28 - Page 20

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Posted: 16 years ago
Wooooo.....fab update once again man.....so he thinks its Vishal baby..he will die of jealousy.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wonderful update, Priyanka Di!!! Oho Amar getting made at the point that Vishal's the father...I love it!!!!! Plz continue soon...and keep up the great work!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
what!!!!!
this stupid person said it's vishaul!
urgghhhhhh
continue or i'm going to burst my bubble
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 34
Divya POV
I just kept looking at the door that Amar slammed on his way out. I know I told him a lie about Vishal being the father but if he knew his relationship with Christina would end. I didn't want him to take all the misery that I'm giving him but what can I do, if he wasn't with Christina I would have told him the baby is ours. But I can't, it would reck him.I saw Saniv and Aditi's concerned faces. I wiped some of my tears and looked at them. "ma, see what papa did if he found out that baby was his he would be happy, and you lied mom. why?" Aditi asked. "no, I don't know how to say this but your dad has a girlfriend and it wouldn't be fair to him or to her" I said. "OH" Saniv and Aditi said. I saw their faces drop. "kids go to bed, I;m going to the hospital ok" I said. I needed to meat papa. They left the room and I looked at ma with a reusering look that I was alright. I left the house and started driving, everything was going on through my mind. What is going to happen? I parked my car and went inside the hospital. I went to papa's room. "hello papa" I said. "hello beta, Amar just came here a few seconds ago really upset and he told me about you and I can tell that you lied" Papa said. I smiled he read my mind sometimes. "papa I am pregnant but I told him the baby wasn't his although it is. He has a girlfriend andn I didn't want to destroy his life like that" I said. He took my hand and kissed. "beta I think he wanted to be the father" He said. "maybe but I don't know" I said. "how are the kids at home?" he asked. "fine, but they seem to be getting clever day by day. " I said. we both laughed. "papa I was thinking of moving somewhere for a while with the kids for the time I;m pregnant" I said. "oh you don't want Amar to know at all, or you don't want him there" he asked. "neither, I just need for things to fix up a little and to think" I said. "as you wish" he said. "bye papa I have to leave" I said and I left the room. While I was outside I saw Amar but he didn't see me. I saw him pull something out of his pockets.A cigerette!?! Now he's going to start smoking because of me. Please god do something. so he won't start. Suddenly it started raining real hard and he just dropped it on the ground and left. Thank you god. I went home. I sat on the couch with a phone in my hand. "yes please 3 tickets no sorry 4" I said into the phone. "okay mam" ...."okay thank you bye" I hung up the phone and let out a sigh, I was leaving tomorrow, I know fast and on short notice but I needed this really bad. Saniv and Aditi came downstairs. "you aren't asleep yet?" I asked. "mom are we leaving?" saniv asked. I nodded. He looked angry. "this isn't fair!! Mom, I meet my dad and this is what you do?" saniv said. He got up and left. I looked at Aditi"pack for your brother and youself okay.. I'm sorry but we'll be back real soon. tell him that" I said to aditi. she nodded.
NO POV SANIV'S ROOM
Saniv is on the phone with sanvi
Saniv: yes and we're leaving tomorrow
Sanvi: oh what about the baby
Saniv: you need to tell dad that hes the dad because mom didn't tell him because of Christina
Sanvi: but they broke up
Saniv: WHAT! but just tell him
Sanvi: what about the promise
Saniv: I'm following it and you didn't make any promise so you can tell him
Saniv: okay then I'll tell him
saniv hung up the phone and turned to see a stunned Aditi
Aditi: bhaiya your so smart, I never thought this day would come!
Saniv: well it came
They both of them hugged.
Precap
Amar is sitting down in the Limo with Sanvi who are on the way to their mall or maybe not
Sanvi: Mom's baby is also your baby, your the daddy saniv told me that she lied because of christina
Amar immediatly spits out the water on his pants making it look like he just did and accident.
Sanvi: yeah and mom,saniv and aditi are leavng today as well
Amar spits out some more water on his pants
Amar: what!!!
Sanvi: Saniv told me
Amar: driver, to the airport please!
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Edited by loveisreal222 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wonderful update, Priyanka Di!!!! I loved it!!! I love the precap tooo! Hopefully things get cleared out in the next update! Keep up the great work and plz continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
One more for today na please...please....they will reunite at the airport..like JTYJN....
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Posted: 16 years ago
ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
amar going to go after his lover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please contin ue~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 35
Divya POV
This is it, this is happening, this is real. Me Saniv, Aditi and Ma were on our way to the airport. Leaving all Amar behind, but not for long, just for a while. For a while. I let out a sigh as we were nearing the airport. "ma" a familiar voice said. I turned my head and pulled the brakes to see Aditya here. "Aditya why are you here?" I asked."I'm here to tell you Dad loves you" he said. I sighed. "shouldn't you be with him?" I asked. " I want to go with you mom, one chance I get to meet my mom and it goes away, I wouldn't forgive myself" he said. "what about dad?" I asked. "he knows" he said smiling sheepishly. "okay" I said, as I parked the car.
With Amar
Amar is sitting down in the Limo with Sanvi who are on the way to their mall or maybe not
Sanvi: Mom's baby is also your baby, your the daddy saniv told me that she lied because of christina
Amar immediatly spits out the water on his pants making it look like he just did and accident.
Sanvi: yeah and mom,saniv and aditi are leavng today as well
Amar spits out some more water on his pants
Amar: what!!!
Sanvi: Saniv told me
Amar: driver, to the airport please
Amar POV
My heart was beating crazy fast, the baby is mine. I was happy real happy but scared if Divya goes. She can't go its our destiny. She can't leave. I looked at Sanvi and realized something was missing, I just couldn't put my finger to it. "Aditya" I said. "where is he?" I asked. "he was with us" i said. "relax, he's with ma but she deosn't know, it's all apart of the plan so she wouldn't leave and would be busy with giving him back" Sanvi said. smart girl. "Driver faster please" I said as we were nearing the airport. The driver parked the car right near the departure area. I took Sanvi's hand and jumped out the car-not literally. I ran inside looking around for Divya, then I saw Ma. "ma" I yelled running to her. "where is divya are you leaving as well?" i asked. " no I decided never mind you know, anyways Aditya was with me so....yeah but don't worry he isn't going." ma said. Then I saw the kids. "kids wheres your ma?aren't you going?" I asked. "no we aren't going anymore but mom is" they said. "keep sanvi with you, let me go find your mother" I said. I started running around looking for Divya. People were staring at me why? I stopped and looked at myself-my pants! They were wet. Gosh I must look like some man who never learned the meaning of potty training. Goodness, I didn't have time for this. I kept runninf. I saw a paper bag on the floor and picked it up to cover the wet area. this will do. I started running again, scanning the crowds of people. "Divya!!!" I yelled. Suddenly I bumped into someone. "divya" I whispered. She looked at me and smiled. "hey, fancy seeing you here Amar" she said. I understood right away. "you aren't going?" I asked. "nope, you know our kids are really smart, but it would be a whole lot better if you got off of me" she said. "I like this position" I whispered back. "but other people don't" she said. Oh I looked around and got up helping her up as well. I kissed her immediately with all the passion inside of me. I kissed her with all my heart and sould. "I love you" I said. "I love you too" she said. the words that I wanted to hear, the words that I was hungry for. "I love our baby" I said. "You found out?" Divya asked. I kissed her answering her question. "I love you" we both said at the same time
3 weeks later
Amar pov
After that me and Divya got married and we're back to living in India. Where our love story began. But this isn't the end, theres a baby on the way and this time I want to be there for her pregnancy. Papa got his last wish and left us to go to another world. Mama was upset but she started a dance school with Divya and named it after Dad. As of for the kids, they are super ecstaitic of having another one along the way and they do lots mischevious things. I looked at Divya who was sleeping beside me. I bent over and kissed her on the cheek. But as people say happiness travels alongside grief and sorrow.
Comment and Criticize and if you think the story is over no it's not but in 5 more updates maybe it'll be over , because I want to start a new ff because I have this whole new idea which is molested inside of my head and won't come out.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Yay!!! They're together again!!! I'm soo happy!! Wonderful update, Priyanka Di!!!! I loved it!!! Awww, man I don't want this one to end..you can do both of the ffs, though...😉...Plz continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Noo dont end it..i love this FF...aww..happy family now..so sweet....cant u do both FFs

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