**ll{BA}FF-An Unknown Bondll**Pt.6 Pg12 *Updated* - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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<<SNIP>> I can't read Hindi 😭 Would it be possible, maybe, please (😃) to add some "english subtitles"? I would really love to read (and understand) the story as it goes along. 😳 <<SNIP>>
[QUOTE = Seebz ]...don't worry I edited it in english also.....hopefully it will help....... [/QUOTE]
It Did! It Did! 😊 ⭐️ Thank you! Thank you Seebz! ⭐️
I appreciate so much your taking the time to go back and edit in "english subtitles"! 🤗 Now I really can't wait for the next update! 😉
Edited by fire_woman - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow.. great start.. i m not an avid fan of BA.. but now i think thats the only track that brings the life to dulhann.. continue soon hunz.. u have the talent.. will b waiting for ur update 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi seebz, it is really great that u are writing a BA FF, it is surely a great news for all BA fans, thanks alot and u are doing a great job! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys, I'm happy to see that u guys liked it.😃....many read but they didn't leave comments😔.......I hope I wud receive more comment this time😊...So here it is a second part....hope u like it...
*PART-2*
Many days passed by....and his struggle continue and got stronger....he has gone to many places to find the job that he thought he deserved....First he started to get worried...how would he take care of his siblings and father figure 'Jagat kaka' who were his family and how would he show his face to Amar Bhaiya who had a faith in him let him take Anju and Saahil along with him with a hope that their future will be safe with him and he will never feel alone with them....and most importantly his late father 'Aniket Singh' whom he promised he would take care of them as his kids...and then he thought of leaving everything on god...as he knew..he is being tested through rough time of his life ....
Jagat Kaka told him to go to temple on thrusday and ask of any wish he had...Jagat kaka had a full faith that his wish will be fulfilled soon..... Bharat was not sure but he just went...he, himself had no idea why but he went there as he was called to be.....he had a great feelings he could not tell.....He did not have any feeling like this before....which he had this time and it completely made him feel better...when nothing seemed to go right..he didn't feel this way before when he had his best time of his life.....first he just thought his inner self is playing a trick then he prepared himself for any situation.....he was happy that he was facing reality of his life...and he would be the one to find a way to get out of it. He started to walk on the temple's stair and took his shoes off to enter the temple....he went to fornt line and prayed .....he did not know how but any how some kind of presence made this easy for him and he prayed for his and his family's good future.....which was important to him....he didn't know but a while passed and he started feeling better....he kneeled and asked for his wishes for the last time....
..something around him made him feel restless...and he felt some kind of cloth on his face....he opened his eyes to see someone's dupatta on his face...his hand move to remove it....but it was too late to do..as the figure with the dupatta moved forward...and got 'Prasad Thaali' from pandit ji....She took it and greeted....Pandit ji replied..."Sada khush raho aur tumhare man ki saari ichcha puri ho.."(May you be Happy and all wishes of yours be fulfiled..)...She cut in between..."aur un sab ki jo yahan dil se ...kuch na kuch maang rahe hain"(..and all of theirs...whoever is asking for any wish heartedly)...she took his Pandit ji blessings and took some steps back and He stood up to see her going.Her dupatta slipped away from her head as she bowed to pray....and revealed her simple-looking face with a beautiful smile...Her friend called her from behind.." Aditi...jaldi kar...kitna waqt lagaeygi"..( Hurry up! Aditi...How long r u gonna take?)....Aditi smiled and left....He didn't move for a moment....until.."ye lo prasad..beta"(take the prasad dear)..said Pandit ji..he took it and came out of Temple with a glow on his face...he didn't remember any of his tension anymore...
...Jagat kaka started to get worried as there was no sign of Bharat. He couldn't stop himself as he saw him coming...."kitni der laga di...kya baat hai..beta..sab theek to hai"( you took so long..what's the matter..dear..Is everything okay..).."Ji kaka Sab theek hai...mandir gaya tha...aap to jaante hain"...(Yes,Kaka everthing is fine..I went to temple..u know that)he explained.Kaka saw the glow on his face and asked..."kya baat hai beta bahut khush nazar aa rahe ho..Kya job mil gayi" (what's the matter dear..u look so happy..did u get the job)..Bharat placed his hands on Kaka's shoulder and said .."kyo fikr kar rahe hain...koi job to mil jayegi"( why r u worrying..I'll get some job)...He said in a tension free tone... and left. Kaka was surprised seeing him happy and tension free...he was wondering what happened all of a sudden to Bharat.....he was so worried past days..and he looked as he has nothing to worry about.
..His phone started ringing..he looked at caller ID...the number seemed familiar to him....as he recalled a scene...He went for a job interview at some place...they looked through his resume and said..."aap to kaafi qualified hain is job ke liye..phir aap ye job kyon karna chahte hai"(U r well qualified....Why do you want to do this job)..."..Mere pass koi expeirence nahi hai...Sir that's why mein yeh job karna chahta hoon"(I don't have any experience that's why I want to do the job)...."We're sorry we need somebody with exact requirements...and u r well qualified" ....they told him their decision. They offered him a better job...but he didn't take it as he thought he was inexperienced and he left the place.........He had a confused look on his face with seeing their number....he recieved it and they said they had a job for him and wanted to see him anytime soon. he didn't say anything just agreed to a meeting..and hoped he wouldn't come back empty hand this time....Jagat Kaka noticed his easy-going behaviour with Anju and Saahil and hoped it will remain permnantly..as it suited him....Bharat enjoyed his dinner with Anju-Saahil...and they had fun with their BB.....he left them in their bed....and went to his room to finish his official work for the morning meeting...
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So here I stop guys😊....please comment and share ur views....I'll b glad...😃
Edited by Seebz - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shobbybee

wow.. great start.. i m not an avid fan of BA.. but now i think thats the only track that brings the life to dulhann.. continue soon hunz.. u have the talent.. will b waiting for ur update 😉

...thank u so much...u guys r amazing....keep incouarging...me...I jst pdated i hope...u like it..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: hotchocolate08

Hi seebz, it is really great that u are writing a BA FF, it is surely a great news for all BA fans, thanks alot and u are doing a great job! 😊

...Hey thank u so much😊...and I'm hope that BA fan wud glad to rea my ff.........😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: khakshan-aa

hey nice one, plzzzz continue asap...

thnx

thank u ....I updated the next part ..I hope u'll like it..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Enjoyed reading ahead as well
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ur ff is really goin good.. I know how it feels when u don't really receive lots of comments.. i am n ff writer too.. but lookin at ur post.. U shud b proud.. U made many fans here.. I m one of them.. continue ur great work😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great going..i loved how aditi's presence made Bharat happier..
waiting for the next part,take ur time and thanks

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