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Posted: 17 years ago
loved the updaate...so cute, continue soon pelase
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Posted: 17 years ago
Recap: SV go out, and Vidya gets scary fone call.
NOTE: i just realized i made Vidya's salwar kameez white...well its not entirely white..its really light pink too. (with embroidery)
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Vidya is crying, and Sagar is in a deep sleep he is really tired u see.
Vidya looks at him. She sniffs.
Vidya: (quietly) No Sagar. I can't lose you. I just can't. I'll go.
She gets up, and fixes her dupatta. Vidya is not thinking of anything right now, except for Sagar's life. She doesn't care about her own. She has to save Sagar. Vidya's salwar kameez is see through, and she didnt realize that. She just kept on walking down the hall. She went over to the elevator. She lifelessly (is that a word?) pushed the button to the second floor. She was shivering and the tears rolling down her cheeks just wouldn't stop. She went over to room 205. She was crying all this time so she could barely talk. She was about to knock on the door when she saw that it was open. She opened it and walked in. She looked all around the room, and she saw no one there. She was scared. She leaned against the wall and slid down crying. She pulled her knees up close to her and burried her face in them. Just then the door opened.
Vidya looked up. She saw Rohan standing there. She got up with support of the wall.
Vidya: (face is red from crying and she is still crying) K-k-kya jaate ho tum?
Rohan: Aur kya ho sak ta hai?
Vidya: Chi! Kaise ladke ho tum?
Rohan: Ye koi poochne ki baath hai Vidya? Tum to aachi tara se jaan ti ho main kaise type ka ladka hoon.
Vidya put on a disgusted face and looked away. Still turned around, she decided to say,
Vidya: Kitne paise jahiye tumhe? Kitna bhi maanglo, main de doongi. (not crying now, she's angry) Lekin tum yahan se chale joa ge. Mujhe aur Sagar's ki zindagi se hamisha hamisha ke liye.
Rohan walked up behind Vidya, and Vidya didn't know. So that when Vidya turns around, she would be close to him.
Rohan: No darling. I don't want money. Mujhe tumare saath kuch waqt bitane hai.
Hearing this, Vidya whirled around and put up her hand to slap him. But Rohan grabbed her hand and threw her on the bed.
Vidya eyes were filled with tears now and she was crying. She turned her head and scooted back on the bed.
Vidya: No--N-Nahi!!! M-M- Mere paas mat ana!!
Rohan: Aaj mujhe koi nahi rok sak ta Vidya. Koi bhi nahi.
Vidya: HELP!!!! MUJHE BACHO!!!! HELLLLPPPPP MEEE!!!! PLEASE KOI HAI!!!!!!
She got up and ran to the door. She was about to open it when Rohan grabbed her hand from behind and pulled her close to him. She tried getting out of his grip and on hand did. She slapped him HARD. Rohan was now FURIOUS and he threw Vidya down really hard. Vidya screamed.
***(back in SV's hotel room)
Sagar wakes up stretching his arms. He looks aorund for Vidya. He doesn't see her.
Sagar: Vidya!!
No answer.
He gets up and opens the bathroom door. She's not there. He check on the balcony, because she like to sit there and drink tea. She's not there either.
Sagar: Vidya kahan chali gayi? She never leaves without telling me. He walks back into the hotel.
He sees a note on the table. It was from Vidya.
NOTE: Vidya did not write that. It was dropped into the room by one of the goons hired by Rohan/
It said:
I am really srry I left without telling u. U were sleeping so I decided not to wake u up.
I went to the the store to pick up some stuff. Forgive me
--yours, Vidya
He smiled at the note. Then he sat down on the bed. Just then, a thought occured to him. Vidya never leaves to go anywhere without telling someone. In any condition. Even if she's home alone she would call someone up and then go. He went down to the receptionist and asked if she told anyone anything. She said no. Sagar got worried. He was walking back ad then he thought of something.
Sagar: Excuse me, but has anyone by the name of Rohan booked a room here?
Receptionist: Yes sir, Mr. Rohan Mehra. Room no. 205.
Sagar: Thank u.
**BAck in room 205
Vidya was on the floor crying, and Rohan was walking towards her. Vidya was scooting back.
Vidya: N-Nooo!! Dont do this to me! Dont touch me!! KOI HAI??? BACHOUU!!!!!!!!!
Rohan: Koi NAHI HAI!! SHUT UP!!
Just then, Sagar slammed the door open. Rohan looked back. Vidya was sitting there crying. Rohan ran out the room past Sagar. Sagar would have beaten him up, but the only thing on his mind was Vidya.
Sagar ran over to Vidya. He knelt down beside her.
Sagar: Vidya?
Vidya took one look at him and buried her face into his chest, crying.
Vidya: (sobbing) Kyun? Kyun isne mere saath ye--(cried)
Sagar looked at her arm. It was red from how Rohan squeezed it. Sagar was FURIOUS AND BURNING MAD. (seriously, i ahd to write in caps lock thats how mad he is)
Sagar: Chalo apne room me.
Precap: SV go back home.
Edited by sharad+divz4evr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh my gosh! Awesome update! Yes sagar to the rescue! Thanks 4 updating again! continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome update! Omg Rohan can just go and die! Poor Vidya.
Can't wait to read your next update
Tariii thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
awsome update..darmm sagar should have beaten the LIFE out of that guy seriously..great upd..continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
Greaaat update.. i reallly loved it.. pleaseeeeee updateee sooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow....err i hate Rohan why dont he just die 😳
anyways...update quick
..Naz..
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Posted: 17 years ago

i was thiking that rohan would ruin this beautiful honeymoon...but still LOVELY UPDATES...i really enjoyed them

poor vidya..sagar is so smart...anyway continue soon😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome update....
please countinue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
MooMoo-thnx!! i mite post an update today...let's see
Mushtari- oh dont worry. ROhan will get his lesson =)
Sonali di- thank u!!
Saniiii- thanks and i will update soon
Naz--haha u can kill him if u want
Kalee-thank u hun i will update soon
Narmz- thnx!! i will update soon

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