FF: Sucha Pyaar NOTE page 56 - Page 17

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Posted: 17 years ago
wonderful update! continue soon. 😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
thank u everyone!! all ur coments r really nice, and thank u all for reading my ff....
actually i am kinda lost with this ff, as in idk what to write! :(
so please if u have any ideas, feel free to pm me!
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Posted: 17 years ago
i dont mind one of um loosing there memories and like starting to fall in love all over again or something...i think that'd be pretty cool...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Recap: the party
It was morning now and SV were getting ready. Vidya was putting on her blue dangly earings to match her salwar kameez, and Sagar just came outa the shower and was combing his wet hair. Sagar looked at Vidya who was having trouble tying the string on the back of her dress.
Sagar: Need help?
Vidya looks at him with a helpless/frustrated look on her face and nods her head. Sagar goes over behind her and Vidya stands up so he won't have to bend down. Then Sagar smiles and notices that Vidya isn't really paying attention. He ties he string, and then runs his finger down Vidya's back. Vidya shruggs.
Vidya: (still with her back to Sagar) Kya kar rahe ho? Aur hogaya?
Sagar: Kuch nahi! Aur no.
Vidya: Jaldi karo!
Sagar: Han Han ok!
Sagar then slowly brought his finger down to her waist and tickled it. Vidya turned around with a mad face and her hands on her hips. She moves her head so her hair falls behind her. (she moved it to the side because she was tying the string)
Vidya: What are u doing?
Sagar: (sarcastic face) Nothing!
Vidya squints her eyes at him. Then she turns her head, her hands across her chest. She turns her head so its not facing Sagar.
Sagar: I'm sorry!
Vidya: Hmph!
Sagar smiles. Then he leans in and kisses her cheek.
Vidya looks at him smiling. She kisses his cheek too and runs outa the room laughing.
(NOTE: they are alone in the house, coz everyone is out busy)
She runs downstairs, and Sagar is chasing her. Then he finally catches her and spins her around and Vidya is laughing hysterically aand then they both fall back onto the sofa. Vidya is breathing heavily and still kinda lughing. Sagar is staring into her eyes and she puts her head down on his chest and brings it back up smiling. Then she stops and stares into his eyes. They have a ever so long eyelock and then when both lean in, Chinu and Shalu walk in and Shalu is talking away when Chinu loks at the sofa and his eyes widen. SV are stil laying there in the same position staring at each other. Shalu looks to see what Chinu is staring at and then her jaw drops.
Shalu: Ahem!
SV both look at them and then at each other, and Vidya bites her tounge and they both get up. Vidya is fixing her dupaata nad Sagar his jacket.
Chinu: Dadda aap to-- [him and Shalu start laughing when Vidya raises her hand as if to hit them.
Shalu: Ok baba we are leaving!!
THey both run out, laughing.
Vidya looksvat Sagar and smacks his arm. Sagar looks at her, confused.
Vidya: U dummy! Y did u spin me around?
Sagar walks up to her and he says, "What?
Vidya takes a step closer. She taps his nose.
Vidya: Yea---dummy!
Sagar takes another step.
Sagar: U didnt jsut call me a dummy.
Vidya: (takes another step) What if I did?
Sagar takes another step, so now they are so close that they cant go any further. Vidya looks at how close he is, and she feels uncomfortable, ot knowing why. She kinda feels shy. She moves to go ahead, but Sagar moves with her. She looks up at him, and he is smiling. She moves to the left, and so does he. Then she gets mad and hits his chest saying "Move!"
Sagar: No!
Vidya: Yes!
Sagar: No Vidya!
Vidya runs away, laughing and Sagar is going after her. (looks like the two love to play tag)
Then Vidya stops at the door. She is shocked to see whose there. She runs over to the door and jumps nto this persons arms and they spin her around. Vidya releases.
Vidya: Sameer!!! [yes the Sameer from Teen Bahuraniyan, Manish Raisinghania. (dunno how to spell that)]
Sameer: Yea its me!
Vidya turns around and sees Sagar who is standing there shocked.
Sameer laughs.
Sameer: Dont worry man! I'm not her ex or anything! he laughs and so does Vidya.
Vidya: This is my brother Sameer. Yea he's 2 yrs older then me.
Sagar: Brother? What??? U never told me u had a brother!
Vidya: He was in America and he tried to come for the wedding, but he couldn't. He was busy. (she smacks him) To busy for his sister's wedding!
Sameer: I said I'm sorry Vidz! Ur gonna be happy when I tell u the news tho.
Vidya looks at him: News??
Sameer: Prachi said she's getting married to her 2 years boyfriend.
SV: WHAT????????
Sameer: Yea its----
Vidya: Wait!! she pulls him over to the couch and makes him sit. Then she grabs Sagar and they both drop down on the loveseat. (perfect 4 them)
Vidya; Ok who is it?
Sameer: Some guy named Jay.
SV's jaws drop and they both looks at each other.
No Precap srry!!
Sorry fot the short update guys..Im a lil busy
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg!!!!!! loved it!!!!!!! hahaha it was hilarious...whn SC walked in on SV...esp in tht position...anyway awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!! cant wait for ur next update...UPDATE SOON PLZ=]
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Posted: 17 years ago
So sweet,i love their games,continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Recap: Vidya's bro comes.
SV are shocked.
Vidya: WHATTT??? Prachi...2 years??? She didnt tell me?? Oh my god...
Sagar: Jay hasnt evr had a girlfriend...he must really like Prachi..
Sameer: U know this guy?
SAgar: He's my cousin..
Sameer: Oh ok..well tehy aid that they're gonna go abroad, get married, and get settled there.
SV: Kya?
Sameer: Well yea..they dont want a grand wedding and everything here, they said that they dont want to waste their parents movey and then just leave u know?
Vidya: Oh..ok...well have u gone home yet?
Sameer: No, I am going.
Vidya: Chalo main bhi aati hoon!
Sameer: Nahin Vidya. Tum yahan raho. I think that ur husband would hate me if I took u away even for an hr.
SV blush and Sameer laughed.
Sameer: Ok main chalta hoon.
Vidya: Han ok.
Vidya drops him to the door and gives him a quick hug. Then she closes the door and sees Sagar staring at her.
Vidya: Kya?
Sagar: Come.
Vidya: Where?
Sagar: (smiles) With me.
Vidya: (confused) Ok.
Sagar takes her hand and takes her to the car. Sagar is driving while Vidya is wondering where they are going.
Vidya: Hum log kahan jah rahien hain?
Sagar: That's a surprise.
Vidya: Ok then. (smiles)
Sagar: Ok we're here!
Vidya looks out and sees a house.
Vidya: Hum...yahan..
Sagar laughs.
SAgar: We are gonna drop off Prachi and Jay to the airport. What did u think?
Vidya was a bit dissapointed because she thought that they would stay at the farmhouse.
Vidya: Nothing...
They go to the house and then meet Prachi and Jay there. Vidya gives Prachi a tight hug. Then they drop off Prachi and Jay to the airport.
***(Back at home)
SV are in their room, its now nighttime. Vidya is trying to sleep but she can't. Sagar is sleeping like a baby. She goes down to the kitchen ato get some water, and then her eyes widen. She screams.
Ok guys I am really sorry for the short and boring update. The thing is I ahve a terrible cold and my brain is just not working right..I am thinking of ending this FF...its getting boring and I cant think of anything..but if anyone has ideas please feel free to pm me..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Mushi--thankoo!!
Kalee--aww ur too sweet...
MooMoo--thankooo!!!
Divz_fan--thank u and whats ur name?
kmishra thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
first!!!!!!!
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omggg SUSPENSE!!!!!! NOOO...awesome update...IT WASNT BORING AT ALL.....I LOVED IT!😊😊😊
nooooo plz dnt end the FF....if i ahd ideas iw ould give them to u...but i already used them on my FF....ughh....plz noooo😭
Edited by kmishra - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
^^ aww kalee
thankooooo so much...i think the reason im so frustrated and cant think of anything is becuz i have a cold...and skool is ughhhh
so dont wory..i say alot of thinks wen i am tensed..i am feelin a bit better, since i just ate some chocolate icecream..lol chocolate makes me feel better😆

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