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Posted: 14 years ago
okkk this new scene
DM just sit on his study room wait and wait for her chai
but nothing it is almost hours since he saw her she just not appear in front of him since last night
DM here call
DM: santooooo santooooo
chapmo .....yes malik
DM: where u malkin???
ch: she left from so early morning not know where
DM: okkk
since she in other room and he just not yet accept her he feel lonelyyy when she went
DM laugh in him self helie on whom
he accept her his heart do
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKSHIGOEL

wow well done summi..👏

ok from summi's part,,,
eyelock...
after sometime...
DM- i m calling doctor u wait ok..
santu smiles and say ok..
both r hesitating to look at eachother coz wats DM said just now..
DM calls the doctor,doctor comes..
doc-omg she is having high temperature..
dm is worried and shout on santu but in a caring way..
santu also felt gud but dont know why..
doc-stop fighting mr mahiyawanshi ,i m giving her injection..
sanraj look at eachother....santu 's face is pale after hearing injection, DM can feel that she is afraid of injection,...........

the moment dr says injectn santu competely pale.....thinking what to say...what to do so that she doesnt get injectn....prays hey kodiyaar maa pls do sumthing....u know naa how much i feaar frm injectn...
she was abt to say....whn speaks....dm...
dm:::injectn???????
dr...ya injectn...
dm::but why???
dr..coz she is havng high fever...
dm::ya i know that but cant u give her sum medicines.....i mean whats the need of injectn....she will take medcns n will get ok...
dr..::but mr.m medicines will take longer tym to show their effect,,,n injectn will bring temp down immediately...
dm:::so what...let them take tym....n..
baa::dm what hapn beta why r u syang no for injctn ,,,it will be gud for santu....
meghna::ya babhi is havng so high fever,,,n u r refusing for injectn...
dm:::ya i knw her fever will get relived but how much pain will she have coz of that do u have any idea of that...no u dont have!!! thats why u r sayng so....but i have ...i know she will have lots of pain...n i dont want her to suffer any kind of pain...so...((dm sayng this in 1 flow)))
dm stops n realises everyone n santu r looking at him surprisingly....
n santu just lost in his words...forgetten every pain or fever.....cant believe the words of dm...
even dm himself cant believe...
n thn dr.says::ok mr.m i m giving these medicines...her fever will come down in 1 or 2 days....but u have to take lot of careof her in this tym......
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice SHAKSHI & NIDHI
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part sara di u continue...
fab fab nidhi,,
ok from nidhi part,,
doc leaves after giving med sub to DM..
DM calls shambhu and gave him the med sub and tell him to bring med and thn give it to me..
moti- but nanka he will give it to this santudi only..
DM raise his hand and stop moti and leave..
santu blush and also leave..
moti angry and talking to herself,that what happened to nanka?? why he is behaving like that??
santu go in kitchen and hug champa..
champa- wat happened malkin??
why r u blushing??
s- i dont know but i m on cloud 9 today..
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Posted: 14 years ago
here is d cont from sakshi's part....

dm is shouting santu santu
santu run to Dm's room
dm: where were u .. just take d medicine and sleep

he gives her medicine and ask her to sleep on d bed...santu smiling obey him...

now its night time ...all sleeping in their rooms .. Dm and santu in Dm's room

santu is sleeping and Dm is standing near d window loking outside and thinking of something....suddenly santu starts to make some sounds....she is feeling cold...
Dm run to her and put blankets over her....
she is still feeling cold...

Dm does't know wat to do everyone sleeping.

he takes santu's hand in his hands and started rubing it ..santu in her sleep hold his hand tight....he is not able to release his hand...continuosly stares at her...lost in her pretty face...

after sometime...
Dm is sitting on d bed and sleeping with santu's hand holding his .....

santu open her eyes and surprised to see this......


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Posted: 14 years ago
fab summi..
ok from summi part
santu is surprised by this ,,
she is blank and dnt know what to do now??
s- may i wake him up,,,no no,,let him sleep like that only,,no no he get cold,,,
DM wake up and look into her eyes deeply..
sanraj magical eyelock..
after sometime,,,
DM- r un ok santu or u need somethi ng??
santu is surprised but very happy by his gesture..
santu- why r u sleeping like this malik??
dm leave her hand and look at oither side..
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Posted: 14 years ago
all excellent...keep it going 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love2211

okkk this new scene

DM just sit on his study room wait and wait for her chai
but nothing it is almost hours since he saw her she just not appear in front of him since last night
DM here call
DM: santooooo santooooo
chapmo .....yes malik
DM: where u malkin???
ch: she left from so early morning not know where
DM: okkk
since she in other room and he just not yet accept her he feel lonelyyy when she went
DM laugh in him self helie on whom
he accept her his heart do

NOT FAIR SOME ONE CONT :(
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love2211

NOT FAIR SOME ONE CONT :(

oh dont be sad di....
he was lost in the memories of him with santo,he was remembering when she was with him in his room when meghna was there..
after sometime he cme back to reality and was amazed to think that what he was thinking,,how is that possible???he only loves subhi but why he was sooo attracted towards santu??
DM- ey champakali
champa cums-ji malik..
DM- send that chowkri in my room when she will be back..
champa-ji malik...
champa leave..
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Posted: 14 years ago
HERE SANTU SMILES N SAY
S:THKS FOR CARING ABT ME......
DM DOESNT SAY ANYTHING N JUST GETSUP
N MOVES 2WARDS HIS BED
S:MALIKK
D:WAT
S:WEN WILL U EXCEPT ME??......
WEN DM GETS ANGRY
D:JUST BEC I SAID FEW GOOD WORDS N HELPED U DAT DOESNT MEAN I WILL EXCEPT U
DONT U EVEN DREAM SUCH THINGS
U R HERE JUST BEC
S:WITH TEARS JUST BEC MEGHNA N RASIK R HERE
N WEN DEY WILL GO U WILL THROW ME OUT OF D
DIS ROOM RIGHT
SANTU WAS STILL IN FEVER
SHE GETSUP N MOVES OUT OF D ROOM SAYING
S:PLZZZ STAY AWAY FRM ME

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