R v creative..... Continue d story... - Page 9

hey, where all r writers r missing???
...making us crazy for next part....

Plz someone continue..

As Santu body touches DM''s..... Santu also feels something and is blushing so much..... She quickly undoes the button and takes her hand away and move back from DM.

Hose lovely.... True ur a chupi rustam... <3 <3

Ok so dis is 4rm me...


Dm turns n moves towards d mirror to brush his hairs....................
Santu had already turned her back towards him n was quickly moving out of the room.....
Her face was of deep shade of red....
she was stil able to feel the heat.... the excitement which she felt after touching his body this closely for the first time...
She reached til d door n turned to move out of d room...
When her eyes caught sumthing...
She saw him brushing his hairs, his face was looking so cute in those ruffled hairs...
Santu herself was not able to understand why Bt she moved from d doorway..... n hided beside d door...
Yes she was watching dm... Her malik... her husband
dm was d most handsome man she had ever met...
The kurta dat dm had worn was little wet...
Santu wanted or unwantedly lowered her eyes...
From his hairs to his face den his broad shoulders....
She was checking her husband from top to bottom...
Her heart was beating heavily... Loudly...
Dis unknown feeling was getting over her... She wanted to be near to dis man... To touch him... Feel him... Love him...
Santu was lost in her deep thoughts... when dm who had finished dressing turns n looks at d door....
He see her.........

Originally posted by: hbuy

hey, where all r writers r missing???
...making us crazy for next part....

Plz someone continue..

hbuy y dont u give it a try.... Write few lines na... Would love to read dem....

Ok Guys I am gonna give writing a shot ... hopefully it turns out as good as you all... so here I go from Ushmi's part

DM sees Santu staring at him lovingly and goes out of the bedroom and sees Santu lost in her own sweet dream world😳😳

DM: eh chokri why are you looking at me like that... I said to you before also Subhadra is my wife and no one else can take her place

Santu: Malik I also don't want to take Malkin's place and now she is speaking to DM in angry tone Malik change your kurta as it has gotten wet otherwise you will get cold

DM: eh Chokri Dharamraj Mahiyavanshi won't change his Kurta just because it is bit wet and you ubhi ubhi maru modhu chu joyeche suvanu nathi tujko bolatha na jab Megha aur Rasik aayenge to tu mere kamre mein hein sona

Santu is going back to room but accidentally she loses her balance and DM tries to steady her they have major eyelock😳😳😍

Guys please continue from this part

i am continuing :

Dm tries to steady her n, they have a major eye lock........................
Santu looks into his eyes bt then moves her head... Tears had formed in her eyes..
Dm let her free and wait for her to say something, to shout or to say even she is his wife
but she does not utter even a single word...
She looks at him, tears starts falling from her eyes... N she moves away...
Dm goes n sit on his bed n picks d newspaper to read bt was stil waiting for her to do sumthing or to say sumthing....
Bt santu quietly picks d mat from the corner of the room n the pillow n blanket...
She makes her bed for the night ready, stil crying, her tears where flowing continously.....
Dm was watching all dis from the corner of his eyes, a pain amerges from sumwhere in his heart to see dis...
Santu lays on the mat, n sleep...
Dm also do the same thinking she slept...
But soon in the silence of night, he heard sum sound....
When heard closely he recognisd it was non other than santu...
Santu had nt yet slept.. She was stil crying her heart out, her sobs were heard in d now silent room....
He saw her getting up n sitting on the mat...
Santu slowly sat on mat making no noice n den she looked up at the ceiling n at last let the strom break...
She opened her mouth n scremed...
Dm saw dis bt it seemed he had sum prob. In his ears bcz he saw her screming bt didnt heard nething...
Santu had nt let a sound cum out of her throat, bt tears were running down her eyes...
She turned n looked at dm who had closed his eyes when saw her turning...
She stares him n yet again lay on the mat...
Dm opens his eyes their were tears nw in his own eyes, he saw her laid on d mat
but
Only god knw whether she slept dat ni8 or nt

Ushma, it was beautifully written..... so emotional......

Originally posted by: bishop22

Ushma, it was beautifully written..... so emotional......

thnk u hose :)

wow hose the chupi rustam,,ushi wah wah and gr8 effort cuterosy...👏👏👏