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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok from ushi's part,,,
in the morning...
DM wake up first and saw santu slleeping on the met without blanket and looking very beautiful like a morning flower...he get up and put blankrt on her..
he goes back to his bed lie down but still watchindg her..
santu wakeup open her beautiful eyes and think who put blanket on her!!! thn she realises its malik...she smile a bit and look at him,,DM closes his eyes when santu watching him...
santu wake up folded her sheet and met go to DM ,touch his feet and say- i dont know why but i m really happy u care for me..
DM who is pretending as he is sleeping also say to himself that i also dnt knw why i care 4 u sooo much....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I still feel that Santu was more confused than having any other feeling. She might be frightened. At that stage of her life she had no idea of LOVE of a man with his Lady
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok ushmi I will try my best to write atleast a few lines..hope u all like it...

here is d continuation from sakshi's part.....

DM was in his thoughts....santu comes with his favourite tea...
santu: malik ur tea
Dm who was still pretending to sleep didn't wake up....
santu calls him again..and says I m sorry for my yesterday's behaviour plz dont b upset wid me...
Dm doesn't open eyes now also
santu turns back and was about to go
DM : ye santudi...
she turns facing dm with hope in her eyes...
santu: ji malik ...
DM : tea has no sugar in it....
santu wondered hw it is possible...
s: malik plz give it to me I will bring u another one....
DM gives cup back to santu in this process his hand touches santu's he feels something strange...it was really warm....
ye santudi u r having fever...I told u not to wet in in d rain....
no malik its nothing..
wat nothing...I m calling d doctor u just take rest.....
but malik....
don't u obey ur husband....
DM just said it in a flow...he stopped when he realized wat he just said 'her husband'
santu was left speechless...
they hv a eyelock....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: hbuy

ok ushmi I will try my best to write atleast a few lines..hope u all like it...



here is d continuation from sakshi's part.....



DM was in his thoughts....santu comes with his favourite tea...

santu: malik ur tea

Dm who was still pretending to sleep didn't wake up....

santu calls him again..and says I m sorry for my yesterday's behaviour plz dont b upset wid me...

Dm doesn't open eyes now also

santu turns back and was about to go

DM : ye santudi...

she turns facing dm with hope in her eyes...

santu: ji malik ...

DM : tea has no sugar in it....

santu wondered hw it is possible...

s: malik plz give it to me I will bring u another one....

DM gives cup back to santu in this process his hand touches santu's he feels something strange...it was really warm....

ye santudi u r having fever...I told u not to wet in in d rain....

no malik its nothing..

wat nothing...I m calling d doctor u just take rest.....

but malik....

don't u obey ur husband....

DM just said it in a flow...he stopped when he realized wat he just said 'her husband'

santu was left speechless...

they hv a eyelock....


awwww.... Its beautiful :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks ushmi...it was u who make me write, among u mindblowing writers...
Edited by hbuy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: hbuy

Thanks ushmi...it was u who make me write, among u mindblowing writers...


oh nothing like dat hbuy...trust me wrote 4 d first time abt sanraj frm this thread only... Its ur own creativity n i cn tel love 4 sanraj dat u wrote such a brilliant piece...
U realy write auesome... By d way cn i knw ur name? U knw hbuy is nt so comfrtable 2 write...
Edited by ushmi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
Thanks for ur appreciation...
& yes u can call me summi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
wow well done summi..👏
ok from summi's part,,,
eyelock...
after sometime...
DM- i m calling doctor u wait ok..
santu smiles and say ok..
both r hesitating to look at eachother coz wats DM said just now..
DM calls the doctor,doctor comes..
doc-omg she is having high temperature..
dm is worried and shout on santu but in a caring way..
santu also felt gud but dont know why..
doc-stop fighting mr mahiyawanshi ,i m giving her injection..
sanraj look at eachother....santu 's face is pale after hearing injection, DM can feel that she is afraid of injection,...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice sakshi....
make me remember of that injection scene....such a nicescene it was....santu holding dm hand.....
write next also...
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Posted: 14 years ago
😊😉 hey nidhi its your turn now....😉

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