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leena

@leena04

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

SRD,
u write just what we want. 👍🏼
tooooooooo gud keep it up. 👏

this is 4 u 🤗

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s000

@s000

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

i have just read all of your parts today - they are truly amazin - felt like crying when ofund out they separated - i can feel whta they probabaly felt for two years(thats how well you expressed ) and this last part where DM held his ears and told her next time he wouldnt make her wait...i can just imagine his fface -awwwwwwwwwwwww - and then DM kissing santo - cna just imagine it

please carry on - dont stop begging you- i love these sanraj soo much !!!!!!!!

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vrsharma

@vrsharma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Really Amazing Santu.👏

Gud Keep it up👍🏼

But DM would have taken her into their room once she breaked her fasting yaar. Bcz from the mrng she was in fasting

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-SilverFlames-

@-SilverFlames-

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: vrsharma

Really Amazing Santu.👏

Gud Keep it up👍🏼

But DM would have taken her into their room once she breaked her fasting yaar. Bcz from the mrng she was in fasting

Yeah i kinda meant that when Santu did pooja and he broke her fast 2(missed that out😉).. poor girl was hungry but the truth is that secretly DM was fasting for Santu too😳😳

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anna

@anna44

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Amazing Sanju dear...

I had tears of joy while reading your FF due to current track. ...

Thank you very much

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svmi

@svmi

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

very good ,SRD. Please keep going. The current track is very disturbing.your writing more that make up for it.

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-SilverFlames-

@-SilverFlames-

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Thanks everyone for enjoying my SanRaj scenes.. Its upsetting that we cant see them becuz of the current track so using my imagination..

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anu_cooldude

@anu_cooldude

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Thanks to you too !!!!!!For giving us releif from the current torture.

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Aashi

@sanrajlover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Wow...what a blast n a hlaf!!..Thanx SanRajDeewani ...kya kamaal kar diya aapne!!..zabardast piece hai ji...MASTERPIECE hega eh!..boti vadya!! its brought tears in2 my eyes 2...kaash ke DM or Santu jald az jald phir se aik ho jaaein...my heart bleeds tears of blood seeing them apart!!...its lyk saying Heer Ranjha,,,or Layla Majnu...or Romeo n Juliet have been seperated..It dont make sense henna?!..issi tarah Sanraj ko bhi mat judaa kiya jaye!!..(Soz luv this aint a shouting @ u..its just a point i HAD 2 make)....☺️

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-SilverFlames-

@-SilverFlames-

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

So (Un) Romantic😉

Santu sat on her bed twiddling her thumbs, she was bored and hadn't got anything to do. Her and Toral had finished all the work.. She was looking at DM who was sat in his armchair reading a newspaper not paying any attention towards her. She got up and sat on the floor near him but still his focus was solely on his newspaper. She got up frustrated and stood behind him placing her arms around his neck.

DM: What are you doing Santudii.. What is wrong? You keep walking this way that way..😲😲

Santu: You always say i'm unromantic and today im in a loving mood and you are Busy..😭

She walked and sat on the bed sulking that her attempts to distract DM had failed and instead she had shouted at him..

She lay down and felt a hand tugging at her sari, she knew it was DM trying to pacify her but she didn't look and pretended to be asleep.

DM kissed her back up to her neck.

She turned around and looked at him but still didnt speak.

DM:What's wrong? Turned unromantic again?😉

Santu grabbed DM by the collar of his kurta pulling him close and placed her lips on his...😳😳😳