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Posted: 15 years ago
Sanju,
Reallllllllllllllllllllly Guuuuuuuuuud concept. Keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice sanju...I am glad at least you are proving bacteria was not DM's son... I don't want Maulik to be DM son either
Can we wipe him out of the scene along with Airhead and Moti
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 2
Hiten drove Maulik home in utter silence not knowing what he should say or not.. when the two reached home they heard Moti's voice bellowing across..
Moti: Enough Naanka.. Enough.. We don't want anything to do with that evil woman so it is best that you do what we are asking..
Baa:Im just fed up with these arguments every single day... You need to make a decision and end this issue for good...
DM: Nothing will stop, because I live with a bunch of self obsessed people who will do anything for their own happiness..
Both Hiten and Maulik walked in unknown to what was happening..
Hiten walked over to Toral, who explained that Khemi wants DM to get rid of everything of Santu's as her bad saaya has ruined the happiness in the house..
Babuji:In every decision of yours we have stood with you Dharamraj but today I agree with Taru.. Just because one person has gone you can't stop living...
Moti:We are only saying for your good...
DM:I know my good and bad, im not a child...
Babuji:We can't see you suffering every day..
Baa: What do you want us to do?? Santu accepted it herself that she killed Arjan so why this arguments everyday??
DM: I know my Santu could never do that!!!
Moti:Nannka you are only seeing it from the perspective of a husband.. The woman killed your son.. and she admitted it so what else is there to prove??
DM: SHE DID NOT KILL MY SON!!!!! She is taking the blame on her head..
Hiten:Then dad that means you think one of us killed Arjan??
Baa: Dharamraj just go to your room... I think we should leave this conversation here before anything else is said..
Khemi: No Baa!! Let papa talk.. So papa you think Santu is taking the blame but for who?? Hiten?Toral?Kaddu?Shashank?Maulik?Baa?Babuji?Benbaa?Me?Champakali? or maybe Birwa and Suraj?
Hiten:Khemi leave it.. this is only going to get worse and you are pregnant so just go and leave it out..
DM:No, Hiten you are all right and I am wrong...
Maulik was still stood waiting for the whole negativity to stop but no.. He had enough of listening and decided he had to speak up..
Maulik:Papa, i know you are right.. and i support you..
Moti:Maulik beta.. when did you come??
She turned to welcome her son but Maulik stopped her in her tracks..
Maulik: Enough mom.. Up until today i always thought that you love me but no.. I was wrong, all you love is money, your arrogance, your status....
Moti was shocked to hear the words coming out of her son's mouth and tears formed in her eyes..
'I loved you, prayed to you as a goddess as it was you who showered me with mamta but little did I know that behind your love was your evilness... Mamta is what Santu gave us.. She was never selfish and never wanted anything in return of her love.. She only knew how to give'Maulik continued.. 'I was unaware of my father because of your hatred and now this.. Santu is a maa and therefor I will address her as my maa and you as phuii'..
Moti was dumbfolded she didn't understand what had hit her, she looked at Maulik but he looked away.. The whole family was shocked at Maulik's behaviour and didn't know what to say..
Maulik:Papa, lets go from here.. he walks up the stairs with DM...
There is weird silence in the house and that stayed for many years the same... with time relationships got worse.. Hiten, Toral and Kaddu also distanced themselves from DM as they didn't know what to do or say...
DM began spending more and more time alone in his room with only Maulik spending time with him both reassuring each other that Santu would come out.. Moti and Khemi took charge of the house with DM being so inactive...
*Present day*

Maulik stood in the kitchen remembering the years flash by.. It had been 9years that Santu had been in jail and her sentence time was only a couple of years away...
Elsewhere.. Santu released from jail because of good behaviour is greeted by Gayatri and her son Aman..
Gayatri is Santu's friend that helped her and encouraged her to get an education.. Gayatri had seen Santu praying in the jail and instantly took a liking to her. She had been imprisonated for her husband's death... Her son Aman was a few years older than Santu and ran a business in Delhi which had spread quite far out...
Gayatri insisted that Santu should live with her but Santu needed to get a place of her own as she didn't want to be a burden on anyone... Aman asks Santu to come along with him as he has flats that Santu could rent or buy...
The End
Precap:Aman confesses to his mother that he has fallen in love with Santu but knows that their union maybe impossible if Santu doesn't agree and Santu wants to see DM for one last time...
Enjoy..x
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow what an episode..............why cant CV's take some ideas from this forum............anyways loved the story and idea of having bacteria as Moti's son rather then DM's.............keep it up................
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aaaw glad you enjoying it...
@Ayushi.. So much is yet to happen and mee to wish that CV's would write some good scenes.. Thanks for the feedback..x
@Vidu.. This is for you dear..🤗...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sanju tooo gud yaar,
this is for story 👏 & this is for u 🤗
keep it up 👍🏼

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Posted: 15 years ago
Glad you enjoying it Leena.. Big Hug for you dear..x
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Posted: 15 years ago
You ordered us to enjoy...Thanx 4 letting us!!..it really was amazing...such satisfying words coming out of Mauliks mouth....WOW!.....what a slap in MB's face!..(ouch! it must've hurt...maybe killed...coz shes sooo full of herself...🤢she really thinks everything revolves round her)....Motibhen...time to sort your act out n start asking 4 forgiveness now....i hope no one forgives her so easily!...she should get a taste of her own medicine!! 😈
Edited by sanrajlover - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Goodone Sanju.. wonder why the CVs doesnt get any of these ideas😕 why do they want to stick to that Arjan is a Mahiyavanshi
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Posted: 15 years ago
Im still wanting to hear that he wasn't DM's son at any cost...plz i want this to be revealed...i hoped for this long ago...when he had his hospital check-ups...but thers not much hope left now...specially after the 10 yr leap!!...but i guess it would still make a hell of a difference in the M mansion....

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