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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey just read your FF...great story!! its really nice...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part11-Life at stake

Six months have passed since the wedding and Anandi and Shiv were enjoying there lives as parents.Even tough they both had very tight work schedules they didn't miss every chance to see there little girl. Amoli was growing fast.She said her first words a couple of days ago.Anandi and Shiv were both there and were both really happy that they made a little celebration for it.Today Anandi came from work early to hear her little girl crying.
Anandi: Oh,my baby is crying.She must be hungry,but were is Shivani ji?Shivani ji?!Shivani ji?!
There was no answer.
Anandi:That's odd.
She rushed in Amolis's nursery so fast that she forgot to close the door.Inside Amoli was sitting in her crib crying.She took her in her hands and started singing her a lullaby so she would stop crying.
Anandi:What's wrong sweety.Why are you crying?Are you hungry?
Suddenly she heard foot steps.She thought it was Shivani ji.When she turned around she was dumbstruck.Sanchi was holding a gun to her forehead.Ira was right next to her.
Ira:Oh Anandi Anandi...So dumb of you thinking that I won't get what I want.
Anandi:What are you doing here?What do you want from me?
Ira:Oh from you,to give my granddaughter to me.
She reached out her hands to take her but Anandi took her away.
Anandi:Never...Over my dead body.
Sanchi:That could be arranged.
She said putting the gun on her forehead.
Anandi:Fine kill me but how will you explain to your granddaughter and niece that you killed her mother.
Sanchi:Oh like we were going to tell her.
Anandi: Ok you won't need to explain anything to her,but what about your son?
She said to Ira.
Anandi:He already hates you.
Ira:Oh just shut up!We won't kill you,at least not yet.
She pulled her out of the house.Anandi was holding Amoli real tight.She didn't want to let go.They put a blindfold on her eyes and pushed her in a car.They drove of to some unknown place.It was some kind of abandoned warehouse.Anandi was really scared.Not for herself but for her little girl.
Meanwhile...
Shiv came back from the office finding the door open.
Shiv:That's weird.Anandi must have forgotten to close the door.
He went to the room and nursery finding no one there.He went to the kitchen finding Shivani ji laying there unconscious.
Shiv:Shivani ji!Shivani ji wake up!
Shivani gained consciousness.
Shiv:Shivani ji what happened?Where are Anandi and Amoli?
Shivani:Oh no!Sir your mother...she came with your sister here and hit me in the head with something.I think it was a gun!
Shiv:A gun?!Oh no!
He quickly called Anandi on her cellphone but she wasn't answering.He decided to call the police.
Shiv:Hello...I would like to inform a kidnapping.Yes,a kidnapping...of my wife and daughter...I don't care how much work you've got!I want you to find them now!...You know what I'll find them myself.Thank you...for nothing!
He decided to call his mother.There was an answer.
Ira:Oh look who finally decided to call his mother?
Shiv:I don't have time to play games with you!Tell me,what did you do to my wife and daughter!?
Ira:I have no idea what your talking about.
Shiv:I told you no games!Where are they?!
Ira:They're fine,for now.
Shiv:What do you want for them?
Ira:From that idiot of your wife?Nothing.I just want my granddaughter.We'll probably get rid of her.
Shiv:Just shut up already!
Ira:Oh really?Make me!
Shiv hung up on her.An idea came to his mind.He quickly drove to the police station leaving Shivani ji home.When he arrived her rushed inside.
Shiv:Excuse me can I talk to the chief inspector?
Receptionist:I think he has an interrogation.He will be done soon.
Shiv:But this is an emergency it can't wait.
Receptionist:Just tell me your problem and I'll see what I can do.
Shiv told her everything about the kidnapping.
Shiv:...And that's why I need you to locate this number...
Receptionist:Oh my god...I'll see what I can do.
They took him to the inspector on duty and after half an hour they located them in the old warehouse.
Shiv rushed there with a police squad right behind him.They broke in there and saw Anandi sitting in a corner holding Amoli in her arms and Ira and Sanchi with a gun in her hands sitting at a table drinking coffe.
Police Officer:Don't move!
To Sanchi he said:
Police Officer:Drop the gun!You two are under arrest!
Shiv:Anandi!
He rushed to her and helped her get up.He took the blindfold of of her eyes.
Anandi:Shiv!
She said hugging him tightly.She let him go seeing the police officers.
Shiv:Thank you officer.I don't know how I can thank you.
Police Officer:There's no need for a thank you.We were just doing are jobs.
He said and left in the police car with Ira and Sanchi in handcuffs.
Shiv:Anandi are you okay?
Anandi:We're fine.
She said hugging him tightly.He held her like that for a while not wanting to let go.



Edited by Nevena99 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
ira ans sachi criminals...that too with a gun..🤣
nice one...waiting for next...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
OMG u made ira and sanchi criminals 🤣
nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: geet005

OMG u made ira and sanchi criminals 🤣

nice update

Thanks 😊 Well aren't they?Ok maybe not Ira but Sanchi is one for sure .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Part12-Start over

They hugged like that for a while when Shiv said.
Shiv:Anandi we should be going home.It's getting dark outside.
Anandi:You're right.Come on sweety let's go home.
She said in a calm,but stressed voice.They got in the car and started their way home.They were in the middle of the road when Anandi started to feel sick.
Anandi:Shiv can you please stop the car.I'm not feeling very well.
Shiv:What's wrong?
Anandi:Nothing,I'm just getting a little carsick.
He stopped the car and she rushed outside and started to vomit.He went near her.
Shiv:Are you okay?
Anandi:Yeah,I'm fine.Let's go home.
So they went back in the car.When they reached home they were surprised to see the whole Shekhar family there.
Choti ma:Anandi beta are you two okay?We came as soon as we heard everything from Shivani ji.Shiv why didn't you call us?We were worried sick.
Anandi:Choti ma we're fine.There's no need to worry.
Shiv:I'm really sorry I didn't call I was just so worried that I forgot about everything else.
Dadu:That's alright beta.I just can't believe they did all that.
Anandi:Everyone please excuse me I'm gonna put Amoli to bed and go rest a little.I'm feeling a little sick.
Choti ma:Of course beta,you go rest.
Anandi went to the room and Shiv and the rest sat in the living room.
Choti ma:She's been trough a lot today.It all just seems so impossible.How could they do all that?
Shiv:I don't know Choti ma but what I do know is I won't let them get out of it that easily.
Alok:Of course not beta.We'll make sure that that won't happen.
They had a long chat for a couple of hours and they finally left at 22:00h.That night Anandi could't sleep that night.She had nightmares all night.All she could do was scream:
Anandi:No!No!Leave me alone!No!
But she wasn't the only one who couldn't sleep.Shiv was up all night watching over her.
Shiv:I will never let anyone hurt you again.(he thought)
The next they Anandi slept in.She woke up around twelve.
At the time Shiv was playing with Amoli.When Anandi woke up she felt sick again.She got dressed and went to see where her husband and daughter are.When she saw them playing together she felt so warm inside.She had a wide smile on her face.She started to feel dizzy.Shiv turned around and saw that she was about to faint.He quickly caught her.She was unconscious.He quickly took her to the doctor leaving Amoli at Kesar Bagh with Choti ma.When Anandi woke up she was in a doctor's cabin.The doctor has already examined her.
Anandi:How did I get here?
Shiv:Anandi you fainted.How are you feeling?
Anandi:Alright ,just a little dizzy.
Shiv:Doctor,could this be 'cause of stress?She was under a lot of stress lately.
Doctor:You shouldn't be worried Mr Shekhar.In fact you should be happy.
Anandi:What do you mean doctor?
Doctor:Mrs Shekhar you are pregnant.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Part13-Future in our hands

---Seven years later---

Anandi:Amoli!Satya!Don't make me run after you!
Anandi was running after her two little angels.As time has passed they've grown so fast.Amoli was eight and Satya was seven.After having two kids Anandi realized that she finally had what she always wanted.A perfectly happy family.She and Shiv did there best to make there kids into good people.Shiv,even though he had work,was always there for his kids and wife.He didn't miss a single birthday,school play,anything.As time has passed Anandi has slowly forgotten about those unhappy times in her life.She was finally at peace.
Finally she caught them.
Anandi:Come on you two.It's time for dinner.You will play later.
Amoli:But Mommy can we just play a little longer?We even finished our homework early.
Anandi:Amoli beta,you can as long as you want after dinner.Okay?
Amoli:Promise?
Anandi:I promise.
They finally got into the house.Shiv was sitting in the dining room and was waiting for them.As soon as she entered Amoli rushed and sat in his lap.
Amoli:Papa papa do you promise to?
Shiv:Promise what sweety?
Amoli:Mommy promised we could play as long as we want after dinner.Do you promise to?
Shiv looked confused at Anandi who gave him a look.He just smiled to that and said
Shiv:I promise to.
After dinner Amoli rushed to the backyard yelling
Amoli:Come on bhaiya!Hurry up!
Satya was still sitting in his chair.He was looking sad.
Anandi:What's wrong beta?Why don't you go play?
Satya:Mommy,papa can I ask you something?
Shiv:Of course beta.Ask.
Satya:Does everyone have a future?
Shiv:Of course they do.
Satya:Then why did my PE teacher say to me that I have no future 'cause I'm bad at sports.
Anandi:Honey no one can tell you you have no future.And no one can decide that for you.Remember your own future is in your hands.And you're the only one who can change it.
Satya:Really mommy?
Anandi:Yes,really.
Satya ran from there really happy.
Shiv:How come your always so wise?
Anandi:I don't know.I just comes to me.
Shiv:Well you do a pretty sweet job as a mom.
Anandi:Thank you.
Shiv:No,thank you.So do you wanna go play with them to?
Anandi:Just try to stop me.
Two days later it was time to get a family picture.The whole family arrived to take the photo.And when it was taken it was just as the name said.A family.A happy family.That has no one in the past and them in the future.
The End




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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
read all the parts
very nice FF
gr8 job dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Nevena enjoyed your FF to the core. The simplicity and the boldness of Anandi gave a realistic touch to the story. Keep it up.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
wow Nevena its really superb but u ended it i am felling sad for that
but hope u start another one soon😉😆

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