Ansh FF : Future in our hands-Part13 on page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi!I've been a silent reader of this forum for a while and sooo wanted to write a FF but was busy.'cause I only speak hindu a bit the dialogues are going to be in English.
Note:This story follows the time of the court case,except on court day Payal and Shiv show up and explain everything,but Ganga doesn't play anything,so Ira doesn't believe anyone.And nobody talks to her and Sanchi.


Part 01-How it all began


It was after the court case.Everything was normal,everybody apologized to Anandi for their behaivoir(except Ira and Sanchi).In the past few days Anandi saw Shiv being very busy and not having any time for her.She wanted to talk to him badly about something.One morning Shiv was working on his laptop before going to work when Anandi approached him.
Anandi:Shiv I need to talk to you
Shiv:Ok,just please wait a little I really need to finish this stuff for work.
Anandi:But Shiv,it's really important,I've been trying to tell you for days but you always seem busy.
Shiv:Whatever it is,I'm sure it can wait until tonight.
He was about to exit through the door when Anandi yelled
Anandi:Shiv I'm pregnant!
Shiv couldn't believe his ears!He just turned around and looked at her with a big grin on his face.She responded with as big as a smile.
Shiv:Anandi are you sure?
Anandi: Yes,I've been sure for a while but you seemed like you didn't have time for me to tell you.
Shiv: Anandi I'm so sorry but I really had so much work to do and I also had a little surprise for you,but this surprise is so much bigger and more important than anything else in the world.
They hugged each other tight.They hug for a while then Shiv breaks the hug and says
Shiv:I have to go now I'll be late for work.
Anandi put his hand on her stomach and says
Anandi:See baby,your daddy is such a workaholic.
Shiv:Maybe but that doesn't mean that he doesn't love you or your mommy.
He kisses her stomach
Shiv:I have to go now,so we will have to tell everyone tonight.Remember don't stress yourself.
He kissed her on her forehead and left.How could he know that something terrible was going to happen.
In the afternoon nobody was in the house except Anandi,Ira and Sanchi.Anandi was making dinner when Sanchi came into the kitchen and pulled her by her wrist and took her to the main hall where Ira was standing.Anandi was confused.She couldn't understand what was going on.Ira came near her and sad
Ira:Finally I have a chance to talk to you without anyone else criticizing me.I can finally tell what i want.I can finally tell you that this is all your fault!It's your fault that my own son and family won't talk to me.You filled their heads up with lies so they won't believe anything I say.I want you out of my life and the lives of my family!!!!
She took her wrist and pushed her out of the house.
Ira:Don't you dare come back here!
Before she pushed her out Anandi quickly grabbed her phone.She was seriously confused and didn't know what to do. She just wandered of somewhere and found herself in the middle of the street.Suddenly she heard a car approaching.There was a crash and then everything turned silent.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nevena great start dear hope it continue like this only
and hope A is well 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmm...beautiful start loved it...
will be waiting for next update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just wait and watch what will happen.I am glad you like it. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'll see if I can update today,if not than I'll update tomorrow for sure.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 02-The Consequences
Shiv was sitting in his office working but all he could think about was Anandi and there future child.
Shiv:I can't believe I'am going to be a dad!Thank you Kanha ji for giving me and Anandi this gift of life and be sure that we'll cherish it.(he tought to himself)
Just then his phone rang.It was Anandi's number.
Shiv:Hello Anandi,is something wrong?
Person:Hello is this Shiv?
Shiv:Yes,who is this?
Person:Sir, this is Dr Singh from the Hospital of Udaypur.A woman with this phone has been submitted here.She's been in a car crash.
Shiv:What?Oh no!That is my wife's phone!I'll be right there.
Ten minutes later in the hospital.
Shiv to the receptionist:Excuse me,a woman has been submitted here,she was in a car crash,I think she's my wife.
Receptionist:Oh yes,a woman has been submitted 20 minutes ago.She's in the operation room,she's been badly injured.
Shiv was on the verge of a nervous breakdown.
Shiv:Oh no,that can't be my Anandi!
Two hours later Shiv was siting down near the reception.A doctor came?
Doctor:Excuse me has the husband of that woman from the car crash come?
Shiv:That is me?Doctor how is my wife?
Doctor:She has been injured badly,but she is out of danger.
Shiv:And the baby doctor,did the baby survive?
Shiv said not knowing how he is going to tell Anandi if the baby didn't survive.
Doctor:Don't worry sir,we have managed to save the baby.It looks like even thought she was unconscious she did her best to save the baby.
Shiv was feeling a little relieved but still nervous.
Doctor:Miss Naina take his wife's and his information.Sir when your finished meet me in room 26b where your wife is.
Shiv quickly gave his and Anandi's information and went to the room.In the room Anandi was laying unconscious.He just sat next to her and took her hand in his.
Doctor:She was hit by a car.The driver brought her here saying that she was looking lost and walking in the middle of the street.She has a broken right arm,an injured hip and her right knee is injured.But there is nothing to worry.She will be fine soon.She just needs to rest.She won't be able to walk for a while.
Shiv:I don't know how this could have happened.She was always very careful.
Suddenly Anandi opened her eyes.
Anandi:Shiv...
Shiv:Anandi are you okay?!How are you feeling?
Anandi:I am alright,but Shiv,the baby?
Shiv:Don't worry the baby is fine.
Doctor:Misses Shekhar,you are very lucky to be alive.You should have been more careful.
The doctor went out.
Shiv:Anandi you scared me to death.Tell me what were you doing outside the house in the middle of the street?
Anandi:Shiv...I...
Shiv:Never mind that,I don't want to upset you.I'll just go out for a minute to inform everyone.Don't move.
Shiv called the family and everyone(including Ira and Sanchi)came to the hospital.
Everyone:Shiv,is Anandi ok?What happened?
Shiv:You tell me what was Anandi doing outside the house all alone.She didn't have any work today,and there was nothing she needed to do.
Choti ma:I don't know Shiv.The only ones in the house were Anandi,Didi and Sanchi.
Shiv:Ma tell me what happened?
Ira didn't say a word at first.
Ira:Shiv...I...I...
Shiv:You what Ma?What the hell did you do to her?
Ira:I...I...
Shiv:ANSWER ME!!!!😡
Ira:I...asked her to leave the house.
Shiv:YOU WHAT?With what right did you do that?Did you even think that you have put two lives at stake?
Alok:What do you mean two lives?
Shiv:For your information Anandi is pregnant!
Everyone:PREGNANT?!😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow..superb..nice that shiv shouted at ira...looking for more update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what ever u r wirtten is good...
shiv shouting on Ira...
wow.. dat can never happen in serial good it happened here... but I want saachi's bashing also...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 02b-The Consequences(b)

Everyone was shocked by Shiv's words.They couldn't believe their ears.
Choti ma:Well is the baby alright Shiv?
Shiv:The baby is fine.Now if you excuse me,I'm gonna go sit with my wife.
Sanchi:Oh my God,I can't believe she's getting all your intention!Anandi this,Anandi that.All you ever think about is her.Everything that's happened to us is her fault,and now she is paying for it.
Ira:Sanchi that's enough...
Sanchi:No mom,how can he not get that she has control of him.He does everything she tells him to,and every time she's in trouble he has to fix everything.She is just using him.How can we know that she's not lying about the pregnancy to get attention...
Shiv:Enough!!😡With what right are you saying that?!She's the one at fault,huh?Every time something happens you blame her!Don't you get it Sanchi?!You can't keep blaming her when something you didn't want to happens!The world doesn't go around Sanchi and her wishes!The only thing you can think about is yourself and your own good!I can't believe I trusted you even for a second!Now shut up before I forget your my younger sister!
He went then stopped and turned around.
Shiv:Oh,and Ma if you don't wan't Anandi in your house anymore,she won't be there,and neither will I!You can go now.You caused enough damage.
He went inside the room and saw Anandi asleep.She was just lying there looking like an angel and Shiv couldn't stop looking at her.
Shiv:How can someone want to do something to hurt her.(he thought)He was just sitting there when she woke up.
Shiv:Anandi,do you need anything?
Anandi:No Shiv,with you here I don't need anything else.
There was a knock at the door,it was Choti ma.
Choti ma:Can I come in?
Shiv:Sure,come.
Choti ma:Anandi beta,how are you feeling?
Anandi:I am fine Choti ma.
Choti ma:Beta why didn't you tell us you were pregnant?
Anandi:Shiv and I wanted to tell you tonight,when he came from work and then this happened.
Suddenly Anandi looked at the door and started breathing heavily.
Shiv turned around and saw Ira.
Shiv:What are you doing here,I told you to go!
Ira:I wanted to see how my daughter-in-law was doing.
Shiv:She is doing fine now go!
Ira:Alright I'll go.
Choti ma:I'm going to. They both went away
Anandi:Shiv
Shiv:Yes Anandi?
Anandi:Remember this morning when you said you also have a surprise for me?
Shiv:Yes..
Anandi:Well what was it?
Shiv:Oh that,you will soon see...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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too good...such fast updates 😲 👏
plz continue and even write more FFs on ansh...looking forward to update 😃

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