Ansh FF - Behind the veil - Part 7 and 8 - Updated on Page 19 (14/3) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was lovely... dil maange more.. waiting for next one 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hiral a FF 😲😲
great...ur taking up to write a FF and the FF itself!! 😃
its different and refreshing...and i love the setup and suspense element...do update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the story is getting more gud...the poem is awesome...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Payali09

Res res res!

--edit--

I was just merrily going about my business when I saw you had updated the story...and then this happened...



Another wonderful update. I'm a major theatre fan and I loved how you captured the apprehension, excitement, anticipation and adulation one gets from being on stage 👏

Totally unexpected appearance of Gulli. In fact everything about this story is proving to be very unpredictable. Me likey!

And where did this come from?

Girti hui baarish ki bundon ko apne haton me samet lo,
jitna paani tum samet paye utna yaad tum humen karte ho,
jitna pani tum samet nahi paye, utna yaad hum tumhe karte hain..

My halwa is a kavi as well! 😲



I'm just so happy I could gush!!!! Which I am totally doing! *phangurling*

Cannot wait for another wall-slamming update!




Thank u🤗...aa gale lag jaa jaaneman😛😆
theatre...used to be my passion tooo...in school days😳
shayari is not my own creation😆..kahin se chhapaa hai😛😆
waise m totally ☺️ over the appreciation...thank u so much...it really means a lot😳
lets hope the next one is a good one too...ahem...gulli was a cameo...my fav will make an appearance tooo😉😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: radhika_kiran

loved it...

your writing is brilliant...
update the next part soon :)

Thank u radhika🤗
next part coming up soon😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Mithi_vani

Awww ... Hiri .. Kya kamal kar rahi hai tu ... 🤗 .. ⭐️ .. Ananadi a briliant theater actress ... Wow .. Nd Guli immress with her ... Wtever u said about theater .. I totaly u/s nd agree with u .. As me too in my school clg days done many drama .. So i can u/s that feeling .. Uska ek alag hi maza nd thrill hai ... Its wonderfull experiance .. .. ❤️ .. Nd that sayari .. 'Girti hui baarish ki bundon ko apne haton
me samet lo,
jitna paani tum samet paye utna yaad tum
humen karte ho,
jitna pani tum samet nahi paye, utna yaad
hum tumhe karte hain..' ... Maasa alah Hiri ... Kya bat hai ...dil ko chhu gae yeh bat.. .. Kya sayari hai ...
😳 .. ⭐️ ... By each part .. U amaze me yar .. 👏 nd yar now u made me more curious about anandi's past ... Aisa kya hua hai??? ... Nd most imp que... Where is our Hero yar ... 😳 .. 😉 .. Hume intezar hai uska ...again superb part Hiri ... Waiting for next update .. ...

Thank u thank u🤗
Theatre - same pinch...u know once I played the role of a corrupt politician😛🤣
kya jootey padey the audience se...but I was happy...it meant they really associated me with that character😉😆😆
next part - will have some part of her past...and thank u again for all the love❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: love.sid

Nice part you are making it more interesting

Thank u love.sid😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: adi2512

Hiral...🤗

Heart warming, dil ko choo lene waala update...❤️
Got a very pleasant surprise, that the setting is theatre..
Theatre artists are the " True Artists" ., unfortunately, there are given neither due recognition , fame nor money.
An actor, who is just a telly or a movie actor can never stand in their league.
Overwhelmed that your story focusses on one such artiste...😃
and then your shayari...take my bow...⭐️
So., this is what you actually do hiding behind trees in secluded places, in full perview of nature...Hmmm...😛😆
Awaiting next update...😳

Thanks Uma🤗 its always a wonderful feeling to get a compliment from an accomplished and gifted writers like you⭐️⭐️
I concur...the theatre actors do not get their due...they invest so much into a character...and oh man, performing live without retakes...without inhibitions...its undoubtedly tough...not taking away the credit from the ones in other medium...but for me...what they are able to convey in 3 hours timespan right in front of my eyes...is nothing short of gifted talent...
haha...shayari...😆 not my own😛...behind the tree, I actually...umm...ohh...check out the tree😛🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: suzzane22

It was lovely... dil maange more.. waiting for next one 😊

Thanks suzzi❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rdjha

Hiral a FF 😲😲

great...ur taking up to write a FF and the FF itself!! 😃
its different and refreshing...and i love the setup and suspense element...do update soon...

Thanks rashmi❤️ hope I keep up the elements😊

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