Ansh FF - Behind the veil - Part 7 and 8 - Updated on Page 19 (14/3) - Page 14

wonderful update Hiral ..

hero heroine thinking about each other...

Originally posted by: radhika_kiran

wonderful update Hiral ..

both of them thinking about each other

what happened to shiv's mom??

Will be waiting for your next update

Thanks Radhika😊

Originally posted by: blushing

hero heroine thinking about each other...

I love this line...The atmosphere was beautiful. While the skies were busy exchanging warm and cool colours and merging into a fast appraoching night, the sun and moon almost seem to be converging into themselves. What a bizzare sight, she wondered.

Hiri...I don't how to explain you...but whenever you wrote automatically I got image of each every scene of your FF / OS in front of my eyes...like this line...I could feel exact same whether around me...Power of Words...Hiri amazing...⭐️

oh hoo Hero ne yahan par bhi sab par impression jama diya except Anandi 😆

Awww Anandi plying with kids...

oye yeh Hero ki mummy ko kya hua...hailaa...this one total 70' BW...Hero ki mom sick 😆

this one is very small update 🤔..nxt update shd be bigger one...😎

wow Hiral...long wait was worth it...but the update was too short😆. i am loving this build up ...and all latoo over Shivjee except Ajee...nice...now Shivjee will have to do lot of pataoing for his Ajee...😉

Beautiful !!! Beautiful !!! Beautiful !!!

Hero-Heroine both thinking of each other...

Awesome update. Once i start reading your story i go into different world...

Then stop and you are gayab for god knows how many days...😆

But when ever you are back it is with a bang 👏

You write beautifully...👍🏼

Originally posted by: rdjha

wow Hiral...long wait was worth it...but the update was too short😆. i am loving this build up ...and all latoo over Shivjee except Ajee...nice...now Shivjee will have to do lot of pataoing for his Ajee...😉

Originally posted by: onlinebuddy75

Beautiful !!! Beautiful !!! Beautiful !!!

Hero-Heroine both thinking of each other...

Awesome update. Once i start reading your story i go into different world...

Then stop and you are gayab for god knows how many days...😆

But when ever you are back it is with a bang 👏

You write beautifully...👍🏼

Thanks buddy❤️

Read all the parts of the FF In one go ! So beautifully written that I could actually imagine the happening vividly ! Its such a unique story too ! Continue soon ! 😊 👏

Originally posted by: TANTAN27

Read all the parts of the FF In one go ! So beautifully written that I could actually imagine the happening vividly ! Its such a unique story too ! Continue soon ! 😊 👏