Ansh FF - Behind the veil - Part 7 and 8 - Updated on Page 19 (14/3) - Page 12

Originally posted by: blushing

A tall, muscular figure was approaching closer. A chiseled jawline, a pair of deep brown eyes and an embracing smile greeted her.

wow kya description hain ☺️ & kya entry thi Hero ki 🥳

Hiral this theater backdrop look so refreshing wow Simply outstanding 👍🏼

A trap in fire ...hero ki entry lines Dream or Reality or Drama lines 😎

waiting for nxt update 🤗

Originally posted by: rdjha

wow Hiral..what an update!! ur intrest for theatre reflects very well in ur story...loved the way you set up the entire scene...⭐️👏

and as Aditi said...backdrop of theatre is so refreshing!!!

thnku for the hero ki entry...loved it and specially ur choice of words to describe our hero 😉😉

do update soon...😃

Originally posted by: Anjujag

Superb HERO wali entry👏 . You are a very talented story teller , you keep US mesmerized 👍🏼 . Your love for theater is portrayed very well in your story . Waiting for the next part .

Originally posted by: radhika_kiran

wow..beautiful update..

awww ...hero entered...

loved it..its out standing

update soon 😊

Originally posted by: Payali09

❤️

Thank you for constructing such a beautiful stage. Your words are delivering an intriguing narrative. One that I am enjoying more and more with every single update.

Loved this section, in particular;

"They clouded over her, wanting to engulf her in fire. The music changed to a fierce one. The lights changed into red...she was trapped... She was scared. They continued to sway around her in a circle...she wanted to escape...she couldnt go near the fire, it would swallow her...she couldnt run out of it, she couldnt stay where she was, it would catch her soon...She fell with a thud to the ground...she slipped back into her own memory...that day too she was surrounded by fire...only difference was, on that day, she did not even attempt to escape, but today...she will..she had gathered courage to fight out whatever was there in front of her...if only he would come back to help her to come out of it, she thought..."

It was so effortless for me to imagine what Anandi was experiencing and all kudos goes to your writing...

Cannot wait for the next one!

Hero was a bit late latif but still managed to get there when he was needed 😆

Originally posted by: Hiral_Halwa

I was wondering...kittheey gayi meri chandni😛 and finally aa gayi Madonaa🤗

Thank u yaaraa for the kind words❤️

Haa even when Ansh met for the firshht time in BV, anticipation for hero ki entry took quite some footage, before he barged in with the SUV😆 hero ka aisa hi hai😉😛😆