Ansh FF- Wilted Rose - Completed & Closed

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Myraa Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Debbie!

The story is unfolding so nicely

You are awesome!

Loving it!

update sooner!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: umam
Debbie,

Another moving update from you. Both Anandi and Shiv went through such a painful childhood, shouldering responsibilities at an young age to become successful individuals and stand by their families..

Anandi's mom - salute her spirit!!!

Thanks Uma, please also let me know what you not like or anything missing. You can always suggest ideas for me to improve 😊

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debbie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: HemaG
read the last 2 updates and they are wonderful...i really dont know how u imagine such situations...they show ur hardwork...u r spending so much of ur precious time to create awareness among us...i salute u for this...keep going on...coming to the updates...it was awesome yaar...shiv and anandi have such an unpleasant childhood...the difference between 2 moms...on one side anandis mom-strong and bold enough...on the othee side shivs mom-weak and innocent,insecured too...loved the way u potrayed it...thanks for bringing such a story to us...i really wish women to be strong as anandis mom and not so weak as shivs mother...excellent updates...continue soon..

I feel elated as you like my work. I purposefully showed 2 different mothers as opposites. Part of it is their inherent nature and partly their conditions.

Shiv's mom had poor parents, they did not support her and she was not educated. The 3 evils led her to such a depressing state.

Anandi's mom was from a middle class family, well-educated and was supported by her parents at the face of disaster.

What I tried to show is our actions are determined by our past as well as background. No lady can be a Jhansi ki rani without the support system 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: sbadam
Debbie dear! A big tight hug!!!🤗

One of my favorite updates so far in this story!!!

I know even in this age and year...even the educated and well off ppl think this way...that is the sad truth of the society...

Though I didnt have such a painful experience but I do have something to share...

I was so excited when I first got pregnant...since I live in US, we can choose to learn about the gender of the baby...and I wanted to know it so that I will be well prepared with all the baby stuff 😛...In my heart I was hoping it will a girl...even my hubby was hoping it would be a girl as he didnt have any sisters while growing up...When we got to know the gender..it was a girl...We were so excited...when we told the same to my mom-in-law...her first reaction was "aiyyo" (telugu word equivalent to "haila" in hindi)...when I heard her reaction...I cried for days...but then I decided that it shouldnt matter to me what the hell she thinks about my baby...it my baby...and we are very happy about it...to this day whenever I think of it...it pains me somewhere deep...

I cant even imagine how these women face such kind of shit in real life..they are real heroes!

sorry about my rant😃

Dear Saumya, thanks for your lovely comments and sharing your own experience related to the subject. As I said women from all different spheres of the society face this issue. I myself have faced it too. Though not from my husband and in-laws but from extended family. If you have read my previous FF, 'Gone with the wind' I have jotted down my own dialogues i.e. how I gave a befitting reply to one of my Tai-sas (mother-in-law's elder sister-in-law) who was the eldest lady in our extended family.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Kurup
Hey did i miss somethng or is it that u din mention it...I think jagya is a past history now in anandi's life right and wehn u wrote about anadi's past, y dint jagya come in there...is it meant for future updates or am i wrong in assessing...

Dear Sumeet, thanks for my regular reader 😊. Most of my readers are females, with one exception. I really like the feminist in you, and its rare.

You didn't miss anything dear. Anandi has not shared her deepest agony with Shiv yet. Its just the beginning of their friendship. Unlike others in this person, I am a rather slow person in creating romance you see 😆. Call it my age or experience 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks Surish, you brighten up my day with your colorful ways 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: riya_ss9
Oh Debbie, what a update, but thanks for bringing up this bitter truth about our society especially if it concerns the educated people.

I hope all the ladies voice out their opinion where their daughters are concerned. Waiting for next update.🤗

Riya my dear, you are a sweet heart. Thanks for being there for me always.

Well having a WARIS is an age old story. In ancient culture, queens used to pray and live a life full of anxiety and anticipation to create heirs. Even today most of the business families in India still got the same thoughts. In last thousand years their mentality has not changed a bit.

Its only we, the working middle class are least affected by this issue.