Ansh FF- Wilted Rose - Completed & Closed - Page 24

its short and sweet...😊continue soon...😛

Debbi,

Both are lovely updates.

First about Mere ghar ayi eek nanhi paree...

Loved how Anandi's mother saved her lil angel and decided to stand again the whole family.

It is true what Anandi has said if a women decided not to abort a girl child no one in the
world has power to do so.

The Past Returns:
Looking forward to story of Dr Jagdish and Anandi. Eagerly awaiting for night update, will
defiantly login to check

Debbi, I always miss out on complementing you for chapter title
They are always in perfect sync with chapter content.

Originally posted by: debumonty

First of all many thanks Jaishreeka for suggesting me the song 'Mere ghar ayi ek nanhi pari !'

I could not put it as a lullaby as that was not part of my story hence I made it a title😊

hmmm...so you didn't find the update emotional? Ok, in that case I would try to make it in the final version. However to me, it does not sound as emotional as Shiv's story for many reasons.

1. We heard Shiv's story from Anandi, the narrator. Hence we could see his movements, his expressions.

2. Anandi's part is more like asoliloquy. We just hear, we don't see her expression. Thats something Shiv witnessed. Anandi could not even realise when he held her hands.

3. Anandi has not yet revealed her deepest sorrows 😉I have kept her emotions intact till then😊

love

Debbie

I could relate to Anandi's mom more than anandi emotionally...and that was required..
@1 and 2- I concur..
@3 - That's wot i wanted to say...You said it all...
And abt The Past returns...
Lovely update..
Aww...Anandi making puppy faces..she wanted to talk to Mr. SRS..!
And He staying away from her..kyun ?
Current lag gya kya seeing her looking that ravishing in lehenga..!
🤣
What did saanchi whispered in his ears that made him blush??
🤣
hmm..So Jagdish has made an appearance now.. Looking forward to see the other facet of the story!
Me luved this update..

Originally posted by: nniks

Nice update Btw I hava doubt its saachi's roka ceremony?? She's already married right?? Roka is done before marriage right?? Its godbharayi which happnes during pregnancy.
Am I missing something ??

It's Sanchi's S-I-L 's roka,if i remember..

Hey Debu, very short update :( .. however i dont mind.. since you keep on updating every day, some time twice a day..

Hey Debu, very short update :( .. however i dont mind.. since you keep on updating every day, some time twice a day..

hai..deebbss...

Just like SRS is curious to know about jagat,,,me tooo am curious to know...continue faster plzzz...i know tat u r already doing it fast, stilll i am saying it coz its tooo irresistable...

Originally posted by: debumonty

Dear Sumeet, thanks for my regular reader 😊. Most of my readers are females, with one exception. I really like the feminist in you, and its rare.

You didn't miss anything dear. Anandi has not shared her deepest agony with Shiv yet. Its just the beginning of their friendship. Unlike others in this person, I am a rather slow person in creating romance you see 😆. Call it my age or experience 😛

I'm late !!!!