AnSh OS: close call

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Disclaimer: Very very optimistic OS, mostly never going to happen 😆 but hope its not too bad 😊

Badi Haveli:
Shiv, Choti Ma and Sanchi do all the necessary rituals for the pag-phera rasam and now its time for them to go back to Circuit House as Anandi gets to spend the whole day with the Singhs.

S: Acha.. Toh hum chaltein hain. Anandi, main aapko shaam ko lene aata hu..

Anandi nods her head. 😊

Circuit House:
Shiv is standing at the window and thinking of Anandi.

S: Main Anandi ko call kar leta hu!

But just then he gets a call from Bheem Singh that he needs to come to office for an important meeting. The Department of Health has sent over an officer to go over the details of the Pathology Laboratory that the Chief Minister had promised.

Jaitsar District Office:

BS: Sir, yeh hain Riya Chaudhari Madam.. Health Ministry se aayi hai.

A pretty, young woman dressed in formals reaches out to shake Shiv's hand.

S: (taking her hand) Good morning, Ma'am. Please have a seat.
R: (sits) Thank you. Please don't be so formal, Sir. Aap mujhe Riya bula sakte hain.
S: (smiles) Sure. Aap bhi mujhe Shiv bula sakti hai.

They outline all the important details of the Path Lab plan. Shiv thinks of calling Anandi but then feels that her pag-phera better not be interrupted again. At any rate, Riya and he work out the plan without any trouble.

R: So, Shiv, ab mujhe chalna chahiye. Mujhe Jaipur bhi pahunchna hai.
S: It was nice working with you. Aap agli meeting ke baare mein Bheem Singh se baat kar lijiyega. Toh hum jald hi milte hai.

Just then, Bheem Singh enters.

BS: Madam ji, woh aapka driver keh raha hai ki aapki gaadi kharab ho gayi hai.
R: Oh no! Mujhe ab taxi ya car karni padegi.. Jaipur jaana bahut zaruri hai.
S: Um.. Aap ek kaam kijiye, apni car yehi chod dijiye aur meri le jaiye. Meri dusri car ghar par hai. Aapki car repair karke bhijwa denge aur aap meri bhijwa dijiyega.
R: Oh thank you so much! Urgent kaam nahi hota toh main kabhi aapko bother nahi karti.
S: No, no, its ok. Yahaan itne short notice par dusri gaadi milna bahut mushkil hota aapke liye.
BS: Par Sir, aapko Anandi ji ko bhi pick up karna hai!
S: Oh! Haan..
R: Anandi?
S: My wife. Woh apne maayke gayi hai and I have to pick her up (looks at his watch) right about now.
R: Oh that's ok. Mere paas thoda time hai. Why don't we pick her up and I'll drop you both home and then main Jaipur ke liye nikal jaungi.

Shiv agrees that this would be best. On reaching Badi Haveli, Riya and her driver sit in the car as she doesn't want to intrude. Shiv tells the family that he has important work to do and cannot linger but promises to come over for dinner the next evening with everyone. He quickly explains the car situation to Anandi. In the car-

R: Hi Anandi, I'm Riya.
A: Namaste. 😕

Shiv and Riya keep talking about work on the way. They also talk about London as Riya turns out to be Shiv's junior from business school. Anandi feels quite petulant. Actually, the whole day, she was missing Shiv a lot. Though it was fun to be back home, she was used to Shiv now. She had been hoping that he would come over early but he hadn't even called her, not even once! And apparently, this was the reason!

A: Yeh dono kaam kar rahe the ya poore din gappe hi haak rahe the. Hmph.

When they reach Circuit House, Shiv bids adieu to Riya warmly and they exchange numbers. Anandi is polite but frosty. A suprise awaits them inside- Mahi! Mahi has come to take Choti Ma and Sanchi away on Sanchi's insistence. They leave after dinner.

S: Bye Choti Ma, bye Sanchi. Mahi, theek se jaana aur pahunchkar phone karna.
M: Sure Bhaiya.
A: (touches Choti Ma's feet) Bye Sanchi, bye Mahi Bhaiya. Collector Sahab aur main bahut jald hi ghar aayenge.
M: (laughs) Thanks Bhabhi! Bhaiya nikaaliye 500 rupaye. (laughs even more) 😆

After extorting the money, he leaves with the ladies. Anandi and Shiv head inside.

S: (smiling) Anandi, aapne phir se mera nuksaan kar diya!
A: Main toh hu hi aisi! Ekdum bewakoof. 😡
S: Kya? Kya baat hai? Jab se aap Haveli se aayi hai, pareshaan lag rahi hai.

They've reached the bedroom now. Anandi is picking out a different sari for herself and getting ready to freshen up.

A: Oh! Toh ab aapko pata chala ki main kahi gayi bhi thi. Saare din toh aapko mera koi khayal nahi tha! Ek phone bhi nahi kiya. Saara Path Lab ka kaam bhi khud hi kar liya.
S: Arre, aap naraaz mat hoiye. Woh main aapko disturb nahi karna chahta tha. Aur Riya aur maine sab kuch manage kar liya tha, so-
A: (sarcastically) Haan haan, woh toh aapki best friend hi hai na ab. Dekh liya maine gaadi mein ki aap log kitna kaam manage karte hain. Main toh jaise thi hi nahi. Main toh aapko gale bhi lagati hu toh aapko farak nahi padta aur Riya se toh handshake pe handshake kare jaa rahe the! 😡

Shiv begins to smile. Now he understands the source of Anandi's problem- why she wants to come near him but doesn't. She feels scared and insecure and inadequate.. She's so cute when she's jealous! 😳

A: Aap has kyu rahe hai?

She hits him on the shoulder with her tiny fist. He holds that hand and pulls her close. Looking into his eyes, all her struggling stops.

S: Anandi, jab se maine aapko dekha hai, aapko samjha hai, aapko chaha hai, mujhe aapke alaawa kuch nazar hi nahi aata. You are my life now and I love you more than anything. ❤️

The honesty in his eyes makes Anandi's heart melt. In that second, she realizes that before this moment, she had not trusted him completely. But now she does- she trusts him with her whole heart. As she looks into her heart, she realizes that she already loves him but didn't want to admit it, fearing that he too would hurt her. But now, she knows that will never happen. With tears in her eyes, she hugs him.

A: I love you too, Shiv! 😳

This time, Shiv doesn't hesitate and engulfs her in his arms. That night becomes their special night!

Next morning-
Shiv is lying in bed (shirtless!) while Anandi is sleeping on his arm. Soon, she wakes up but Shiv pretends to sleep. She blushes, thinking of last night and looks lovingly at her husband. She caresses his hair and kisses his cheek. As she begins to get up, Shiv pulls her close and refuses to let go.

S: Good morning! (kisses her cheek)
A: (blushing) Good morning. Chaliye, chodiye, mujhe nahaana hai..
S: (smirking) Akele-akele?
A: Dhatt (playfully hits him on the chest)
S: Arre! Mujhe bhi nahaana hai! Main toh waqt aur paani bachaane ke liye keh raha hu..
A: (laughs) Acha theek hai..
S: Yes! (punches the air with his fist)

He lets Anandi go but she laughs and runs into the bathroom.

S: Anandi! Cheating!

But his wife just giggles. He laughs and moves into the living room. When Anandi returns (with wet hair, no pallu), he's sitting on the dining table (still shirtless!).

A: Yeh kya? Ghar mein itne bathroom hai aur aap ab tak nahi nahaaye! Jaldi jaiye, tab tak main naashta banati hu. Aapko office bhi toh jaana hai.
S: (making a puppy face) Nahi, nahi, mujhe nahi jaana office.

Anandi laughs and comes close to him. He's sitting at the head of the table. He pulls her closer and she ends up sitting in his lap with her hands on his bare chest.

A: Kyu nahi jaana aapko office? Ghar par kya karenge? Bore ho jayenge!
S: Aap itna bhi nahi pakaati hai! Ouch- 😆

Anandi hit him on the head. He takes her hand and kisses it.

S: Karne ke liye toh bahut kuch hai na, Anandi.. 😈
A: Shiv!
S: Anandi..

As he begins to pull her close.. There's a giggle at the door!

Gulli & Phooli: Namaste Jijusa!

The lovebirds jump apart. Shiv had opened the door to take the newspaper but had forgotten to shut it. His 'sweet' sisters-in-law couldn't resist the temptation of disturbing both of them but they regretted it too. Shiv is so embarrassed to be found shirtless with his wife in his lap! All three women begin to giggle. Shiv fumbles-

S: Main Anandi ko yehi pooch raha tha ki mere kapde kaha hai! Sachchi!
Phooli: Haan haan Jijusa.. Woh toh dikh raha hai!
Gulli: Anandi jiji, aap Jijusa ko kapde de dijiye warna unhein thand lag jayegi.. Hum baad mein aate hai! 🤣

Both go away giggling. Anandi can't stop laughing looking at Shiv's plight.

S: Bahut hasi aa rahi hai aapko?

He moves towards her but she begins to run around the house. Finally, he catches hold of a panting Anandi- her eyes are bright, her cheeks are flushed and she looks happier than ever before.
Looking into his eyes, she realizes that Shiv has effortlessly brought back her bubbly, childlike nature through his love. She places her head on his chest with a contented sigh and he puts his arms around her. They both finally have everything they need and everything they want- each other.

THE END. ❤️

Thanks for reading! Hope you liked it. Comments are welcome.

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Piyuu_SRK thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Michelle beta...OS toh bht mast hai 😳 😆

But srzly sab kuch bht jaldi ho gaya... 🤣

If this would have happened in show it would be totally different. Instead of only saying ''Namaste'' Anandi would have invited Riya on dinner 🤣 and gifted her a lehenga choli too 🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Good one 😊

Waiting to see the bubbly, childlike A back on screen
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
😳☺️❤️Michelle..
Its very very sweet and cute...⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was lovely!..thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣 🤣 Bechara Collector Saab..Its just superb😉
Edited by vasanthimrao - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it ...
want something like this to happen in the serial tooo...
tooo goood...beyond words to apppreciate this beautiful work..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
This was very cute.. Very nice Michelle.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Mishu this was so sweeet!! I love jealous Anandi! 😆 😆
Awesome work! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Very beautiful !

So cute and so believable except I somehow feel that CV's will have plans to torture for atleast another month before this cute scene !! 😛

More imaginations please !!

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