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tistaa

@tistaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Whoa I must say you are a very powerfull writer...I just loved each and every part so much...really I am looking forward for more 😳 and thanx for the PM 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Lahari.

May I ask why? This is a really short story. I'm not going to leave this one in a cliffhanger. 😉

Like me and my teaspoon of nutella for dessert!

Savoring...

No honestly don't want to rush through the story. I want to take a day each so I can truly enjoy it.

Cliffhangers😆, you know I have been there done that. Doesn't scare me anymore!😆

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ananhita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Beautiful, you really weave magic with your words!!!! Loved it!!!! Story is getting really interesting...how is Shiv going to put Anandis worries to rest???

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Manshi

@Mithi_vani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

wow... It was totaly diffetent... I like the new nd amzing twist in ur story... Superb... Thanks for this nd pm... 😊 nd I m waiting for next part... Update soon...

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roberoi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

What a plot 👏

Mast hai boss and so intruging...thanks a ton for brilliant updates everytime and the PM

Edited by roberoi - 12 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

I would love to know Shiv's POV too in this SS. There are so many things left unsaid & difficult to conclude between the two...

Part 6 : well written especially the loneliness & difficulties she's facing in this new journey of life where her wings of freedom are being halted by self-built inhibitons, self-expectations & pressure of coping with a new environment & different mindset of people around. Their midnight conversation over a bowl of khichdi was so sweet & explained so much of ease & friendly banter among the two. Sanchi as a character raises my curiosity to some extent as I somewhere feel there's more to the picture...

Prithvi... hmmm liked his persona as such explained in his intro by Shiv... & the picture you gave of him ... I don't know there's some uncalled for aura around that ozzes...

Have to read part 7 ...

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Onir

Prithvi... hmmm liked his persona as such explained in his intro by Shiv... & the picture you gave of him ... I don't know there's some uncalled for aura around that ozzes...

Thanks!

You don't have to wait long to know about Prithvi. Part 7 should tell you all.

PS about Shiv's POV, you will have to wait until the story reaches the present.

This personal account of mine narrates the events that led to the day of the kiss. A day I could not yet fully accept or curse for having come to exist. It has been two years since he left Udaipur, possibly after having taken a silent vow never to return while I stayed at his home.

Edited by Lahari. - 12 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

PART 7: I really like this nutcase...😳 As I mentioned earlier there is something that gives a different aura around him. He has that all so stern & militarian way of dealing, so principled yet there's some kind of subtle softness in him; Like shielding self from world His loveable side. I know there was much else in this part... but somehow I just couldn't waver my mind away from Prithvi at all... an illdefined & unreasonable curiosity about him has seeped into ...😉.

His idli, dosa, vada demand & no roti stand... cracked me up..🤣... Just an off statement why so much obsession with south indian dishes apart from the fact being he's truely southie... Even I'm half southindian but after having idlis dosa & vadas everyday for breakfast since time immemorial I usually opt for other dishes outside if given a choice to just have a taste of variety...😆 (No offence meant to anyone..)

Waiting for more ...

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Lahari.

Thanks!
You don't have to wait long to know about Prithvi. Part 7 should tell you all.

PS about Shiv's POV, you will have to wait until the story reaches the present.

This personal account of mine narrates the events that led to the day of the kiss. A day I could not yet fully accept or curse for having come to exist. It has been two years since he left Udaipur, possibly after having taken a silent vow never to return while I stayed at his home.

Yup just read part 7 ... have commented in the above post.

Oh yes will be waiting for the present yet at the same time curious to know what lead to such moments between them & the exile of Shiv since two years...😊

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago