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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Oh I'm loving this Prithvi guy all the more with each update...😳 Hayee. You are building his character so strongly appeasing to my senses. He raises my curiosity & interest in knowing all about him. He has this type of personna that is charming as well as forbiding all at the same time. Your explaination about him having two extreme personalities within him, both defining & justifying their seperate presence & need in his dealing with life. I'm afraid as the story progresses I will favour & strongly like Prithvi more than Shiv.

Mytreyi ... hmm ... she's the HER, the reason for all that despeartion & helplessness poured out in form of rage & unreasonable lashing out...

They are working in the same environment... & what pain are they both hiding behind in their past... I guess Aanandi will be the one who will unfold this past between the two also experience a different pain & agony.( I guess I'm going all haywire with my assumptions... 😆😆 Please overlook it...) Their story & reasons for the distance & anguish seperating P-M... will somewhere also give wings to Aanandi's realisations & freedom to her own inhibitions & demons...

Lovely one... I still can't get Prithvi out of my mind... 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Prithvi making an impact more than Shiv? Wow, now I have my work cut out to make Shiv just as much appealing, if not more.

A lot of revelations are in store for the next update. Although, I can guarantee that Shiv is not going to be making a lot of appearances while its still first person narrative.

Edited by Lahari. - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Ch 5:

Wings... apt title.

The journey away from home..

In the olden days, this was part of a ritual that boys went through. Even in the Ramayan, all the princes had to leave the comforts of home to seek knowledge in a humble manner.

Most of us who have done it have truly been enriched by the experence. As nerve racking, scary and exciting as it is, it is needed to grow. To view with a fresh pair of eyes what the world is all about. Create perceptions which make us take that piece of clay and mold it into our world.

Lovely chapter...

Catching up with you H

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Lahari.
Prithvi making an impact more than Shiv? Wow, now I have my work cut out to make Shiv just as much appealing, if not more.

A lot of revelations are in store for the next update. Although, I can guarantee that Shiv is not going to be making a lot of appearances while its still first person narrative.

Hey H.

You will have to work very hard for it to be so. As for now I'm all for Prithvi... he has me hooked onto this SS. He has that all so attractive & awestruck personna. You have to feel the aura around him & the vibes he gives you can't escape you, try as hard you may... I guess I better shut up on my bak bak with Prithvi & make myself aware that I haven't as such met him in real but he's just a fictional character...😳...

Will be waiting for those revealations...

As long as Prithvi makes some what appearance I'm fine with less of Shiv as of now...😉... yet curious to know it all... (You know you make me look so greedy & wanting for more of your writings...😆😆)

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: had2bu
Ch 5:

Wings... apt title.

The journey away from home..

In the olden days, this was part of a ritual that boys went tbrough. Even in the Ramayan, all the princes had to leave the comforts of home to seek knowledge in a humble manner.

Most of us who have done it have truly been enriched by the experence. As nerve racking, scary and exciting it is, it is needed to grow. To view with a fresh pair of eyes what the world is all about. Create perceptions which make us take that piece of clay and mold it into our world.

Lovely chapter...

Catching up with you H

Avi ... 🤗 Agreed completely.

It all is part & parcel of life & enriches your learning expereince. The new horizons fill you with new zeal & enthusiasm to do everyhing on your own, learn the hard way out & value your lessons from mistakes committed, explore new dimensions of living, broaden your prospective on life & relations... & drives you to excel & achieve all that is in & beyond your expectations & perceive the world through a renewed lens.

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Why so serious? The thread can use some buzz...

Fine! Let me post a sneak peek...

"I don't agree that the Lotus hall is the right venue for Shringara. I'm moving its placement inside. More private. We could switch it with a rajasthani backdrop originally planned for one of the suites?" There was a question in her voice and he still wouldn't look at her.

"I'm speaking to you Prithvi. I want these changes finalized now." She didn't raise her voice this time, although a fine insistence had come to a head.

It was a few seconds before I heard him speak and he eventually turned around to throw the brush on the table and began focusing on the folds of his kurta sleeves. "If you knew your preferences are immaterial to me, then you shouldn't try demonstrating your stupidity by sending them my way," he said with all the venom he could muster then.

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Uma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Lahari.,

Finally managed to catch last 3 updates at one go...after 2 days of No Net...😊

So., a new entry - Prithvi...

My thoughts on him - I can't think on a soapy drama POV...am' extremely inexperienced in same..😆

Prithvi is a dear friend to Shiv...and is a GENIUS...

And all genius are eccentric...😆...with their own idiosyncracies...

Bringing in Prithvi in Anandi's life is a strategy of Shiv...?

She sure needs some eccentricity to be rubbed on her from Prithvi and Prithvi needs some calmness to be rubbed on by Anandi...😆

So., 2 birds at one shot...IMO..

Well., I must say., I'am very bad at predictions...so., I may be wrong...😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: adi2512
Lahari.,

Finally managed to catch last 3 updates at one go...after 2 days of No Net...😊

So., a new entry - Prithvi...

My thoughts on him - I can't think on a soapy drama POV...am' extremely inexperienced in same..😆

Prithvi is a dear friend to Shiv...and is a GENIUS...

And all genius are eccentric...😆...with their own idiosyncracies...
Bringing in Prithvi in Anandi's life is a strategy of Shiv...?

She sure needs some eccentricity to be rubbed on her from Prithvi and Prithvi needs some calmness to be rubbed on by Anandi...😆

So., 2 birds at one shot...IMO..

Well., I must say., I'am very bad at predictions...so., I may be wrong...😉