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umam

@umam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Intriguing update!!!!

Now I wonder, does Anandi see herself, her struggle in Prithvi? Connected by inner pain...

Loved when she said ' I am helping him"-- There is this quiet confidence in her now..

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Uma

@adi2512

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Lahari.,

Hmmm...

Shiv is aware of Prithvi's painful past...where he would have grown apart from his love b'coz of outside forces...

A may def., help him to take one more chance in reviving his love story...and in process., may realize how she too can benefit from giving herslef one more chance...😆

Well., Let's see., what's in the author's / strategist's mind...😊

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Serviana

@Serviana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Wooow!!! Great one!!!!👏👏 Cant wait for the new update!

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tistaa

@tistaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

As usual superb update lahari 👏

Really eagerly waiting for more and more from you 😳

Thanx for the PM 😃

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Updated my comment...😊

I have gone overboard there... please overlook it, I tend to forget that I need to curb my flow of thoughts... & thereby curtail the length of my comments...

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-Mitra

@-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

I doubt anyone can go overboard with comments. There has been a dearth of it here and I can always use more.

As for playing cupid, I think I'm more with Shiv on his take in the next update than Anandi. You will see for yourself.

Edited by Lahari. - 12 years ago

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

just read your story.loved it.please keep going .really awesome job .

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Ch 6:

That must have been quite a setback for her. It is so hard to make a place for yourself whether it be in a new town or a new school or college. It does not help with the quota system that is in place, resentment would rear its head.

She reached out to Shiv. I was very surprised by that. His current crisis took her mind off what was bothering her enough to get her back to normal. I like him. I like how he did not try to lecture her but made her part of his khitchdi madness and then talked to her about it. Understanding versus Preaching. Fine line but he did not cross it.

Waiting to read about Prithvi next.

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Onir
PART 7: I really like this nutcase...😳 As I mentioned earlier there is something that gives a different aura around him. He has that all so stern & militarian way of dealing, so principled yet there's some kind of subtle softness in him; Like shelding self from world His loveable side. I know there was much else in this part... but somehow I just couldn't waver my mind away from Prithvi at all... an illdefined & unreasonable curiosity about him has seeped into ...😉.

His idli, dosa, vada demand & no roti stand... cracked me up..🤣... Just a off statement why so much obsession with south indian dishes apart from the fact being he's truely southie... Even I'm half southindian but after having idlis dosa & vadas everyday for breakfast since time immeorial I usually opt for other dishes outside if given a choice to just have a taste of variety...😆 (No offence meant to anyone..)

Waiting for more ...

Ha ha! We think alike Onir. Me too liking the nut case.

Wondering whose favors he was castigating aside. Looks like a female involved at the palace...

Curious to read next part.

Anandi's reading on the palace is so spot on for people in a town. They just think overpriced where as for someone who comes from so far away to look at the treasures in India it is priceless.

Off to next...