Together..AtLast!!-SS-pt 3 updtd pg.10 - Page 12

Originally posted by: 5cents

UMa, ⭐️ ❤️You have surely liberated them in rain all the pain is washed away. WOW! Loved the ecstasy of love... you have weaved such a sensuous lagaav ka roop

Love is a bird which can't fly by a single wing...love always demands commitment, passion and intimacy!!! Thanks for giving us this in your story. 🤗

Uma...What an ending to the OS...indeed together at last!

Uma - I didnt know what was I missing since so many days...I feel so stupid!Gosh this is something else.Its beyond words.I think I am too insufficient to even comment on something so incredibly beautiful!

I am just at total lss of words.The way u described her fera in the second part...how she is afraid that one day if he sees the bitterness withing her, he too might leave and she wont be able to survive that ...it just made me so touchy.And the last part it was oh ho sensuous romantic and beautiful...☺️ The way he washed away all her fears with his tender and passionate lo9ve...I just cant get enough of it.

I can just say that u r one of the finest writers I have ever seen...u write even better than the actual romantic novelists.And ur vocab...I am envy of it! 😛 Really as I say I am a die-hard fan of ur writing.

Thanks so much for making me read it🤗...I cudnt bcos of one reason or the other...but now I feel glad that i finally read it.It was a sumptuous TREAT! ☺️

Originally posted by: Malika

Uma - I didnt know what was I missing since so many days...I feel so stupid!Gosh this is something else.Its beyond words.I think I am too insufficient to even comment on something so incredibly beautiful!

I am just at total lss of words.The way u described her fera in the second part...how she is afraid that one day if he sees the bitterness withing her, he too might leave and she wont be able to survive that ...it just made me so touchy.And the last part it was oh ho sensuous romantic and beautiful...☺️ The way he washed away all her fears with his tender and passionate lo9ve...I just cant get enough of it.

I can just say that u r one of the finest writers I have ever seen...u write even better than the actual romantic novelists.And ur vocab...I am envy of it! 😛 Really as I say I am a die-hard fan of ur writing.

Thanks so much for making me read it🤗...I cudnt bcos of one reason or the other...but now I feel glad that i finally read it.It was a sumptuous TREAT! ☺️

i m in ansh lala land...
it was so so great...
its over?kitna jaldi khatam kar diya..
but pls write more ansh ff...loved ur writing...

Uma! it was mesmerizing 😳

i can visualize all the things happening in KB.

glad that finally Anandi was able to break all the barriers of the past and achieved the desired freedom, Sjee has washed away all her pain with rain and his assurance that he is not going anywhere leaving her behind.
liked the way Anandi said-- pata hai --ab dikhaiye.😳.

she became bold like you,😉

i loved your diwangi very much.😃

thanks for showing our dear ansh in their poised romantic land.

i am going to read all three part together when i will have more time.😛

Wonderful ending to the OS.

Originally posted by: bhavi_shiv

i m in ansh lala land...
it was so so great...
its over?kitna jaldi khatam kar diya..
but pls write more ansh ff...loved ur writing...

Originally posted by: anshurg5

Uma! it was mesmerizing 😳

i can visualize all the things happening in KB.

glad that finally Anandi was able to break all the barriers of the past and achieved the desired freedom, Sjee has washed away all her pain with rain and his assurance that he is not going anywhere leaving her behind.
liked the way Anandi said-- pata hai --ab dikhaiye.😳.

she became bold like you,😉

i loved your diwangi very much.😃

thanks for showing our dear ansh in their poised romantic land.

i am going to read all three part together when i will have more time.😛

Originally posted by: NDDgirl

Wonderful ending to the OS.

Loved every bit of it