Hot Little SS-AnSh&Mahi- Udt 9a & 9b pg 24 10/2 - Page 9

Originally posted by: adi2512

Zarna.,

I really liked their interaction in kitchen...

Not only A's even my heart skipped a beat too reading it...😳😆

...ohhh... It was so beautiful, lovely nd romentic...I just loved it yar... The kitchen romance, Shiv's love nd care for anandi nd Aji niharing.. Shiv... ...all this was so awesome, superb... Nd I m egaerly waiting for next part... Pls update soon...

Originally posted by: Manshi

...ohhh... It was so beautiful, lovely nd romentic...I just loved it yar... The kitchen romance, Shiv's love nd care for anandi nd Aji niharing.. Shiv... ...all this was so awesome, superb... Nd I m egaerly waiting for next part... Pls update soon...

Thank you so much you are too kind !!

Zarna it is awesome!!! Beautifully written!!! Please update soon!!! 👏

And thanks ...you know why! 🤗

Wow Zarna... its so beautiful and romantic...

Originally posted by: saviani

Wow Zarna... its so beautiful and romantic...

Kitchen romance was really good...

The way you have written I was feeling like I am reading m & b... beautifully written dear...

Thank you so much! I hope to continue to write well to please you

Originally posted by: Serviana

Zarna it is awesome!!! Beautifully written!!! Please update soon!!!👏

And thanks ...you know why! 🤗

It's not a problem at all hon, it takes me a shorter time in English. Also I'll provide translations for any future Hindi parts. I hope you liked it!

Zarna this is just beautiful, really loved it. Now waiting for the next..

Zarna -

Originally posted by: Vedo

<div align="center">Haaye Zarna, Loved it! 🤗 It was cute, funny, romantic and a bit touching all at the same time!😳</div><div align="center">The kitchen/laddoo romance part reminded me of my fav jodi...Prem & Preeti from HSSH!</strong>❤️<strong></div><div align="center"></strong>👏<strong>👏 Awesome...do continue soon!</div>

Thanks vedo! I'll update soon! Meanwhile please update ur ss


And yes! I was watching that movie with my family and thougt It was a beautiful scene to incorporate! I also used the veil separating their bed from Jodha Akbar and the pallu scene from kuch kuch hota hai. Like I said my creativity isn't all that great because inhabit he romantic side of a squirrel but I'm working on new lines!!
Thank you once again and please get to updating your ss I'm dying waiting yaar