Index:
Part 1 (Page 1) - Hot Chilli Moment
Part 2 (Page 2) - The talk
Part 3 (Page 5) - The Dinner Date
Part 4 (Page 7) - Tuje Mein Raab Dikhta Hain
Part 5 (Page 11) - Utrayan
Part 6 (Page 13) - The Kiss
Part 7 (Page 16) - The Broken Moment
Part 8 (Page 20) - The New Anandi
Part 9a (Page 24) - The Aftermanth
Part 9b (Page 24) - The Talk
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Hey guys this is my first time writing a fan fiction here on the forum and I am fairly new to the site as well. I am writing from the US so my hindi might not be very good and you may have to bear with my Hinglish language J
It is night time at the circuit house as Shiv sits on his cozy chair by the fireplace of his and A's bedroom. It had been around two weeks since they had moved out to Jaitser again and A and him had settled into a daily routine. He could see his wife from across the room through the sheer curtain that blew in Jaitser's cool wind. She looked pale in the moonlight and tense as she sat on the bed making an knitting a scarf, a replica of the one that she had made him last week. He smiled at the thought of someone catching a cold in the desert heat but he had decided not to argue with his wife. He had wanted to make her comfortable especially after the fiasco of their suhagraat. But after misconceptions had been set aside ' they had reached an even stronger point in their relationship.
A saw her husband working from across the room as she finished her scarf. He looked tense. She walked across the room and stood behind his chair and saw that he was looking at the budget for the new medical laboratory they were introducing to Jaitser. She put a hand on his shoulder.
Instantly he felt the jolt of his wife's presence, smelt her fragrance as the wind blew her flowery scent to him, invigorating all his senses.
A: CS bahaut dher ho chuki hai. Hum ko sona chaiye ' aur kaal to subah jhali bhi utna ho ga ' mahi bhaiya jo aa rahe hai.
S: hai bas paach minute'
A: Paach vaach kuch nahi. Abi. Chaalo!
A strut across the room turning down the bed as S reluctantly closed his laptop and muttered in his breath, "aap Jaitser mein aap ka time waste kar rahi hai. Aap ko to military main hona chaiye tha! Itne demanding hai na!"
A: Kya?? Aap ne kuch kaha kya?
S: Nahi who baas'
As shiv approached their bed he climbed and the couple said good night to one another. A turned around and slept as S pulled down a drawstring that instantly dropped a sheer curtain in between them dividing the bed. After several couches collapsing under his weight and many days of sore backs this seemed to be the only viable option for the couple. He lifted the veil slightly and saw the curvature of his wife's spine above her deep U blouse leading down her waist. He saw the dark hair that contrasted her rosy complexion and a smile crept up on his cheeks. He promised him self that he would never do anything to disrupt the peace that A felt at this moment, her utter serenity. For it would break his heart to ever hurt his wife. And thus he would wait until she was ready to give herself to him, mind, body, and soul. He dropped the veil and closed his eyes dreaming about the promise of tomorrow.
A woke up the next day with a jolt. She had been so tired. As she felt less groggy she looked around for her CS and was shocked to see that he wasn't there! She quickly got up and looked at the clock which read 10 am!
A: Arre baap re! mein bahut late jagi. Yeh CS bhi na'kahan gaye?
She wandered out looking for him in the living room and when she didn't find him there she glanced in the dining room where she saw a closed note for her. She opened the note and read,
"Anandiji, jab taak aap yeh note read kar rahi hon gi mein office paauch gaya hoon ga. I didn't have the heart to disturb your peaceful sleep ' aap jitna chaiye data lena par aap bahut ghere neind me thi. Mahi ka phone aya tha wo 12pm yahan pauch jayega. Aap ke liye mein ne breakfast banaya hein ' please eat it before you rage a war on the house and clean like a crazy woman. Aapka CS."
A smile crept up on her face as she read her husband's note. He always took care of her ' a feeling foreign to her as she was used to taking care of others. She took the tea cup on the table and went to warm it up in the kitchen. There she noticed a pile of toast and another note "Sorry ' mujhe aur kuch bana nahi atta hai." This time she couldn't stop the hearty laugh that sprung in her heart. Such a genuine gesture combined with such innocence made her heart melt. She finished her breakfast and went to her room to shower. She randomly grabbed a pale yellow sari and tossed the pallu over her shoulder and tucked it in her lengha. She finished getting ready and adorned her self with her sindoor kept in a special box gifted by CS on their wedding day. She looked at her self and reached over for her scarf absent mindedly and wrapped it once around her neck and ran to work
She started with the living room cleaning out all the dust from every nook and cranny around the tables, atop book selves. And she dashed to the guest bedroom to clean as Mahi bhaiya needed to be in a comfortable room (it was the first time he was staying with them after their wedding.) From the room's window she saw the back yard and she noticed that the clothes lines had fallen. She quickly jutted over to the kitchen and through an adjoining door into the backyard, closing the door behind her. She was struggling to put the wire back up due to the her short stature but she was determined to get it right.
As A struggled with the wire ' S parked the jeep up in the front. He smiled in anticipation because he was about to get yelled at by A for not waking her up in the morning. He had an extra bounce in his step and he stepped foot inside the CS and was shocked at what he saw!
There were long winding pieces of yarn everywhere. Puzzled as to what this was he called for A. When she didn't reply he went to his room to put down his bag. There he saw what seemed to be the beginning of the yarn trail in the same peach color of his scarf. He suddenly released that his paagli wife probably got so absorbed in her cleaning that she didn't notice her scarf was unraveling!! He smiled and shook his head as he winded the yarn around his fingers and began to follow the trail. He followed it into the living room, around the corners of the tables, and upstairs to the guest bed room mahi would be staying in. There he saw his wife struggling in the back yard with the clothes line. As she reached up top he could see her bare mid abdomen from halfway through her back to her hips he saw the smooth skin he longingly wanted to touch. He quickly looked away slightly embarrassed for looking at A with such a nazaar. He followed the trail to the kitchen where the yarn was shut in the door leading to the back yard. He opened the door and inched closer to A.
A could sense her husband's footsteps and instantly began to unleash her wrath. "Aap mujse baath hi maat kareye ga! Aap mujhe utha nahi saak te the? Aap bhi na CS ' muje kitne der'" She turned around and stopped mid-sentence puzzled by the ball of yarn S was holding. "Yeh kya'?" Her eyes followed the trail and she realized what had happened. They looked at each other and instantly burst out laughing. They laughed heartily until there were tears in their eyes.
A: aap chailye aur muje madaat kar dijiye. Yeh line gir gayi hai!
S: mein madaat nahi karta. Jab dekho aap apna hukumb hi chillah karte hai. CS yeh karo, CS kyon yeh nahi kiya, mein thaak gaya hoon. Can't a man even get a thank you once in a while?
Mahi: But that's your duty javaan aur duty par koi bhi aapko thanky nahi bole ga'hain na bhabhi??
A: Mahi Bhaiya! A exclaimed and ran to give her best friend/devar a hug!
S thought to him self: bas ye hi baki tha. Aa gaya kabana mein hadi walla mera bhai. Is nalayak to mein'CM ko bhi ek beta hona that? Kyon bhagwaan ek shant aur shushil sister nahi di? Kam se kam at least woh meri band no nahi baja ti is jungle ki tera!
Mahi: whats up bro? what are you thinking about?
S: kuch nahi. How are you?
M: Bhookya aur pyaasa. Bhabhi kuch garma garm pakoode ho jaiye? Tab taak mein aur bhaiya apka clothes line fix kar te hain.
A: theek hai mahi bhaiya. A stuck her tongue out at her husband and ran in the kitchen.
S: paanch minute aye nahi ho aur mere biwi par order bhi mar diya?
M: tumhari biwi ho gi, pehle mere bhabhi hai. Aur anyways we both know she loves me more.
S scowls and gets to work. Inside the kitchen A is struggling with the box of mirchi she needed for the pakoode ' it wouldn't budge. She went to take it outside for S to open fidgeting with it along the way
A: CS yeh aap open kar diye AHHH!!!
A tripped and there to catch her were strong arms. They caught her as she was about to fall face forward and scooped her up as if she were a doll. Her husband held her ad she clutched his shirt in support. However the mirchi box went flying covering both her and her husband with the spicy chilli powder of Rajasthan. They both closed their eyes and mouths immediately afraid to open them and experience the intense burn that would come with it.
Mahi came around laughing heartily. Aap done bhi na ' bilkul baache tara hain! Ab stay here ' don't move or talk and ill find a solution.
*the theme song mare hivade mein jaagi...starts playing*
They stood there frozen as mahi looked around the house. Weather they stood there for hours, minutes, seconds, or several days they didn't know as they were lost in each others arms. A's breath quickened realizing how close she must be to CS. Shivs arms held her bare midriff with his strong fingers cupping the small of her back. A tilted her head and realized she was leaning on his chest where she could hear a steady beating heart of her strong husband. Unknowingly she had nuzzled her self deeper into his body ' and along with the chilli ' their bodies became undistinguishable. Where one started and another ended it was hard to tell. S hoped that this moment would never end.
As if on cue. He felt something being put on A, was it a blanket? And suddenly he could feel droplets of water clearing out his face. When he thought it was safe to open his eyes he did to see that mahi was spraying them with water with their garden hose. He saw his wifes face tense ' eyes shut close and saw the chili powder clear away little by little revealing her beautiful face. As she too opened her eyes she saw the piecing stare of her husband looking down at her. There was something more in his eyes than normal ' a desire, and a longing. She shied away from his gaze but looked up when a drop of water landed from his locks onto her cheek. The water defined his chiseled body clearly.
"Her sari is clinging to her delicate frame" Shiv thought. He realized how truly beautiful she was as her hair quickly became drenched. He pulled her up closer to him as a smile crept up on her lips. She saw something in her eyes ' and as if god had put him on this earth to stand between him and A ' mahi stopped the water and yelled: "aab toh aap dono safe hai. Please yeh eyes ka romance ban karye aur kuch boliye bhi! Mein all day appka water boy to nahi ban sakta hoon! Aap kuch action vaction bhi'
S: Mahi!! Shiv scolded as he put his wife down. He saw that mahi had covered A in his leather jacket ' knowing that soon her sari would become see through - for that he was both thankful and upset.
M: chaliye ab michi bina bhi sahi par mere pakoode??
A: laughed "abhi laye bhaiya" She walked away from the two but shiv couldn't help admire her from behind. As the sari clung to every curve. He saw the water drip down her bare back and arms as she walked into the kitchen and disappeared.
Mahi noticing shiv staring at his wife cleared his throat loudly. For the umtenth time shiv was sure mahi had been put on this earth to be nothing but nuisance and wished for a sister again.
M: toh ab line fix kare yah app ko koi dosri line ko follow karna hai?
Shiv scowled and fixed up the line with mahi smiling to himself about the sweetest moments he had shared with his wife. The brothers soon finished up and headed into the kitchen to eat some delicious treats that awaited them.
Please leave comments!!! I might turn it into a SS if you like? I'm in the middle of studying for my MCATS so I might not update every day but any feed back comments suggestions are appreciated!!
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