Hey guys I'm writing this fan fic once again ' it won't be as long as my first part but I hope it is just as good. I'm so nervous about my medical entrance exam that I literally can no longer focus on what I was reading and decided this was my one time to sit for 45 minutes and just breathe and relax and go to sleep (its night time in the US!) Also I was looking through my inbox and I got pm's suggesting maybe I should write about their suhaag raat and to make my stories a bit more hotter'I had a question about this actually ' I thought I wasn't allowed to post anything that would be too detailed? And even if I do describe it vaguely should I have a disclaimer for those who are underage? Sorry for the plethora of questions but I just had some questions as I'm fairly new to the forum'without further ado my fan fic!!
This was inspired by Chahaat's writings, she is amazing - check out her FF that inspired me to write!!
Recap: AnSh had shared a sweet moment as they were both covered in chili powder and Mahi, who had come for a visit, had cleaned them up with water, leaving them both drenched. S and M were walking inside to finally eat some pakodes'
S: Mahi you sit here and wait for me to eat the pakodes, see how I said WAIT? That means don't gobble them up all before I even have the chance to grab a morsel.
M: you snooze you loose bhaiya. Hurry up or they'll be all gone. Where's bhabhi gone to anyway?
S: She might be changing considering you both got us soaking wet!
M: aap toh mere charnoe (feet) chune chahiye ' I did you a massive favor by creating the most romantic scene ever.
S: ha, par most of the time tu hi hamare beech aa jata hai! Us ka kya?
M: nothing doing ' hurry up and get changed so the three of us can eat these delicious padkodas. Wah kya khusbu aa rahi hai ' mein to bas apni bhabhi ke haat ke pakode khayonga ' aap us corner mein bhet ke jaal na.
S: As if I'd eve'*ACHOOO*
M: haha hurry up and go get changed fatoose varna lal singh se injection'
S goes to change and walks toward his room muttering under his breath " yeh lal singh aur mahi doono meri vaat lagayenge!" He stops short of entering his room as he sees his wife in a pale pink sari. Her pallu wasn't tucked in this time in her lengha but hung over her shoulder. She was drying her hair. As he saw those eyes that made his heart do a summersault he halted. For this is how he'd always preferred her. Her eyeliner was a little smudged, just how it got after a long days of work. Her cheeks flushed as she was antsy tending to her demanding devar, and her hips swayed lightly as she toweled her hair from side to side. He saw from behind that she had forgotten to tie a doori at the top of her blouse. Slowly he inched toward her ' her slender figure, her anger, her attitude, her smart-mouth all that he had displayed today seemed to be tethered to him like a rope pulling him closer to her.
As if she could sense him, A " jaldhi aap change your clothers, otherwise you'll have to go see lal singh'"
She stopped short as she felt cool hands on her shoulders. She froze, her heart might as well have gone into cardiac arrest, her nerves firing impulses left and right, her brain confused, should she stay ' or should she move? She opted for her current position as she couldn't determine if her legs were attached to her anymore ' they felt like jelly. She realized in a faint corner of her brain that Shiv was fastening the doori of her blouse. But the rest of body was too busy buried in taking in his presence, his aroma, his heat, his tender touch'
S "kuch bhi ho jaye par mein lal singh se madat nahi loonga. Mere pas aap jo hai mujhe theek kar ne.
A turned around, her towel hung lamely draped over her shoulders. What was wrong with her. She had never felt this nervous around her. Perhaps because he had never been this forward with her since the night of their suhag raat. But they had come a long way from that night, reached a new understanding. Built a new bond. But this was different from their suhaag raat. It felt different ' it felt different to her.
Moraliaa tune esa kya lagaa'*their song starts playing*
He inched in closer his eyes searching for an imperfection ' anything that could maybe indicate that he was mad for being so obsessed with her beauty. He saw the drops of water that still clung to her eye lashes- so delicate he thought. He inched his hand a little closer and her eyes began to close.
She shut her eyes ' she couldn't handle being this close to him. Something had definitely changed ' but she couldn't put her hands on it. He touched her eyes ever so gently that she began to sway ' her legs had truly started to give away
He caught her as she was about to collapse ' and scooped her up in his arms
*Mare Hiwda mein jagi dokari'*
he knew that this wasn't because she was tired. His wife was finally experiencing something he had longed for her to feel'and he would wait more until she was ready. He smiled at the thought of her being so nervous that she could no longer stand the proximity between them. He gazed in her eyes and she at his. Again loosing track of time'they only broke apart to a very loud "BHAIYA." Mahi was calling them from the dinning room.
He was thoroughly annoyed now. He put her down on the bed and picked out his clothes for him to change into. "sarpaanchji ' aab apka rule nahi chalega. Next time no Mahi wahi."
A snapped out of her reverie. "No I want him here ' who else is going to help me redecorate this entire house while you are out all day having a date with lal singh?"
S: I'm not on a date we're working closely on the new laboratory project. Ab mein to doctor nahi hoon. So I need his advice!
A: okay go change I'll go see what M wants.
A walked into the dining room to see mahi petting his stomach. She looked puzzled ' and saw that he had eaten all the bhajiyas!
M: I told him bhabhi, you snooze, you loose.
A Giggled and turned to go into the kitchen and ran straight into her husband. She fell backwards but mahi caught her in a hero's pose. He quickly let go of his bhabhi as he saw the scowl on his brother's face.
S: A can you pack these to go? Lal singh needs me right away at the project site ' there are some workers who are injured and some of the machines are now damaged. Just put them in a'..(he notices the lack of pakodes) HE ATE THEM ALLL?! Mujhe pata tha! Ab what do I eat??
A laughed and went into the kitchen while shiv put mahi in a headlock. "CURSE THE DAY CM HAD YOU ' MAWALI!" A returned with a box of what seemed to be bhajiyas.
A: I had put some away especially ' I know how Mahi Bhaiya is (she grabs his ear)
M: Sorry bhabhi mein inta hungry tha!!
S: theek hai ' mein jar aha hoon. TRY TO BEHAVE! She is MY wife. MINE. Not yours MINE. MINE MINE MINE.
As shiv stalked off Mahi muttered under her breath "sharing is caring bhaiya." A giggled and turned around to clean up the kitchen. After she was done she joined Mahi on the couch who was watching his latest cricket match.
M: wah! Kya shot diya hai mene! Okay but no more fooling around ' Bhabhi do you have the samples I gave you last month? Let's get started on the renovations or else bhaiya will think im just wasting your time.
A: yeah they're in my room ' come on.
They both walked in her room and A went to the cupboard and pulled out carpet swatches, wall color pallets, some drawings, a bunch of files with estimates, and turned around and her smile faded. Mahi was staring at the veil that she had not put up this morning because she was in a hurry. Now it hung there lamely dividing the bed. She looked at mahi's face ashamed as to what he was thinking and mahi continued to stare intently at the divider in the bed. He understood at once that even though his bhaiya stomped around and claimed that bhabhi was his ' they had not become one just yet. He looked at his bhabhi and found her crying silently near her cupboard looking at her feet. He walked gently towards his best friend and grabbed her by the shoulders and made her sit on the bed. As he sat down next to her ' she broke down crying. Sobbing as hard on his shoulder as perhaps she had once done when she found out about jaigya's infidelity. Mahi just held his best friend ' at this moment she was no longer her bhabhi but his friend who was deeply confused and hurt and lost.
After what seemed hours ' Ahad finally expelled all the built up emotions she had kept and looked slight relieved and looked up to see tears in mahi's eyes. She was about to say something and tears dripped down again seeing that she had not only hurt Shiv but her Devaar too.
M: Statue Bhabhi (She froze) You know Shiv and I grew up together. And ever since we were little kids I always looked up to him. Admired him and his courage. I didn't have a father bhabhi so bhaiya became my brother, my friend, mera dad. When it was time for him to get married bhabhi ' he looked at so many girls but it never clicked. You know how serious he is. I began to worry bhabhi. See bhaiya has always had the weight of the entire family on his shoulders ' he has always had high expectations to meet and his wife would have to meet them as well. So when I heard that Bhaiya had chosen a girl for himself I ran to Jaitser to see what kind of girl had captured his heart. But before we came to meet you bhabhi he told me ' he told me about you and your past. And for the first time in my life I found my self admiring someone more than I did my bhaiya. The way he talked about you as if you were the center of his gravity ' the force that always pulled him towards you. The chemistry you two shared was more than that of two people who are engaged ' it was that of two people who admired and respected one another. Then came the day where I've perhaps never seen anyone as angry as you
M continued: the day bhaiya broke of his engagement with you ' I saw something in your eyes ' a fire and a passion to tell him anything that came to your heart. And right you did, you told him off so good I was astounded. Yet you took him back ' but not before scolding him hahahaha. I've seen you two bhabhi the way you move it's as if you are in sync with each other. But all that aside ' bhabhi I know what it must feel like to lose the man you once loved ' your ex husband. I saw my mother break down ' absolutely shattered after my father died and I can only imagine how hard it is for you to accept bhaiya after your intimacy with your first husband lead to him leaving you in long haul. But bhabhi today I speak to you as a friend ' not S's brother. Today ' I need you to close your eyes and listen to your heart. I'm not saying proceed physically ' but bhabhi this, this veil. Is an insult to bhaiya. He wouldn't dare touch you without your permission. Moreover, I doubt he'd touch you EVEN WITH YOUR PERMISSION. You might need to take out an advertisement in the times of india, have a billboard hung outside his office, yah get sonu nigam to sing it to him 'but he would never cross his boundaries with you before that time when he is a 1284739357% that you are allowing for your proximity.
M sighed and knelt down before his bhabhi: bhabhi ' close your eyes. And ask your self ' do you trust this man. Don't let the past cloud your judgment, think from your heart. This isn't Jaigya. This is Shiv Raj Shekhar. The man afraid of needles, who has such big muscles but will bow down to your will, the man whose heart now belongs to you. Ask your self, do you trust this man ' to be your husband? To be your friend? Then bhabhi please don't be afraid. Take things slow ' Bhaiya will die a 40 year old virgin if you ask him to ' but please open your heart to the idea of your being married and starting your life over again. Aur please ' don't ever scare me like this by crying like this. Talk to me. Not as your devaar but as your friend. I won't be able to bear the pain you showed by releasing all those hidden emotions again bhabhi. I love you too much to see you in that much pain.
Heee eehhh ' choti si ummmar * Balika Vadhu theme song starts playing*
Mahi wipes his and his bhabhis tears. He puts his head in her lap as if he was a little kid waiting for his treat. "Off" he said. A couldn't help but smile. No more tears fell out of her eyes. She patted her devaar on the head.
*Music from theme song continues*
He lifted her head to see his bhabhi flushed but smiling. She kissed him on the forehead and nodded. He was right. It was time she opened her heart to love.
To be continued'.
Hey guys I would really love some comments, suggestions, and feedback!! PM me if you want me to take the story in a particular direction or want to see a scene you have in mind written: I would love to see collaboration on this!!
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~Zarna J
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