Hot Little SS-AnSh&Mahi- Udt 9a & 9b pg 24 10/2 - Page 19

Originally posted by: chumki...

before i started reading...a big 🤗 to u and lottts of love just to keep my request..."thank u.is a very small word...i love u.is better...😉 aur baqi parhne ke baad👍🏼

read it all!!..AMAZING would be an understatement!..especially the last part have left me speechless truly..! what you have written and how you have expressed Anandi-Shiv relationship is commendable!it shows your maturity about relationships..WONDERFUL! BV Cvc need to show this kind of maturity in dealing with Ansh!.. how Anandi shared her true feelings with Shiv and his understanding makes it lovely!
Loved these lines :-
"Love is just that. Giving someone the power to break your heart, but trusting them not to do so."

Today seemed to be the day where the ridiculous, immature moments they had shared during the first couple days of their marriage were going to be left behind.

Today ' he felt Anandi's past fears came to surface ' as did the meaning of their marriage. He had hoped that one day she would be able to sit down and maturely talk to him about all her troubles ' and today was the day.

Today was the day milestones in their relationship had been achieved ' never had Anandi been more truthful with shiv. So open. So honest. So revealing.

Today was the day he promised never to break his wife's heart.

PS-your comic sense is great too!lovely comedy in all parts! MAhi-Anandi relationship is BEAUTIFUL!

This is how they shud shown in BV also 👏

Zarna its just superb dear.. A big hug for you🤗

Very emotional one.. anandi's pain visible in each and every words.. just speechless..

Now waiting to see how our collector courts her😳

awesome write up

I am disturbed after reading this😭

Superb convo dear👍🏼 ... its very..very.. touchy nd much needed... well done..👏
thanx for such dil se part nd pm...😊

I so much so much want this Convo b/w AnSh...really dear you've made me emotional 😭 How beautifully you've written Anandi's feeling...I wish everybody can analyse like you ...loved it 👏

😊Dear Zarna, I loved your story from the beginning. I always looked for your updates on the forum, since your awesome writing capture my heart.

Today's update is so beautifully written, it capture the essence of Anandi's fears that are blocking her from going closer to Shiv.

I really do hope that in the serial also, she will talk with her husband, sharing with him her fears, and that their conversation and his understanding will finally bring her to the happiness she deserves so much.

Lokking forward for new updates, and I am happy that your hand is better now.

That's exactly cv's need to do, make her talk. Wonderful