AnSh FF: NO GREATER LOVE: Chapter 15 p42 12/06

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@DrModel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: sbadam
wow Sheena...well worth the delay!👏

Oh my that heart wrenching scene between ANSH...was so perfect...⭐️...no words of me will explain how I felt...ANSH they are so perfect together...they complete each other and compliment each other

hey if you send out PMs can you send me one too when you update next😳

Sorry about the delay, I was quite busy and I couldn't place how exactly to make Shiv realize that something is wrong and A needs him and then this idea came to me😊

I think AnSh are an amazing jodi and I agree A ke bina S adhoore hain and vice versa

I hope I can write more such scenes

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@DrModel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: umam
Your writing is so visual 😊 that I could feel every emotion/ thought process that Ansh are going through!!

I would love to see some of my scenes acted out but alas; that is perhaps why Iw rite them out in so much detail because Iw ant my readers to visualize them

Thanks😊

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@DrModel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: jazz89
Wow dear 👏
your story has a gripping pace. Update next part soon 😊

Yes I will..well I need to get back to present day soon as there is a lot awaiting AnSh on that side of the story

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Tulasi14

@Tulasi14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#294

Awesome and lovely up date!thank you.

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@DrModel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: Tulasi14
Awesome and lovely up date!thank you.

thanks😊

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rdjha

@rdjha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

awesome!!! the pain, helplessness, anger, hate, greed, love, care, faith ...every emotion brought out so well@!! Shiv and Anandi two extremely strong charecters bringing them out beautifully!!

update soon !!👏👏👏👏

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@DrModel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: rdjha
awesome!!! the pain, helplessness, anger, hate, greed, love, care, faith ...every emotion brought out so well@!! Shiv and Anandi two extremely strong charecters bringing them out beautifully!!
update soon !!👏

Thank you

I wanted a story with a strong jodi and thats what I have tried to deliver so thank you for appreciating that

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Tulasi14

@Tulasi14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

pl update!😊

Edited by Tulasi14 - 12 years ago

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Payali09

@Payali09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

My dearest Sheena! 🤗 Thank you for the update and the message! I'm so sorry it's taken me four days to reply. Got busy with assignments and work and couldn't be active on the forum.

You know I love your stories but still such a wonderful update! 👏

I'm so glad that Shiv is finally aware that something unusual is bothering his precious Anandi. There's been so much happening with S that I was worried he wouldn't realize till the very last minute

For me, Anandi's urgent need to talk to her mum is a sign of just how desperate and desolate she's becoming. She's struggling to hold it together and protect Shiv at the same time. Desperate times call for desperate measures. Eep. Loved the way you set up the scene with A gazing at the stars for guidance and S gazing at his north star. Yikes how much does this family have to deal with...daddu's funeral and the cops as well...ugh...I'm foreseeing much more trauma.

Can't wait for the next update! Pick up the speed my friend, we're heading for a crash.