AnSh FF: NO GREATER LOVE: Chapter 15 p42 12/06 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
this isn't weak... Surely isn't weak... The story is still as gripping in its plot as is in its emotions... Look fwd to more frequent updates... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
beyond good.. its a really touching and deep episode u wrote down.. anandi's emotions, shiv's strength and love. its all very minutely written. loved it completely.. hope we get the update sooner next time around!! keep it up!!👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SmilenShine

this isn't weak... Surely isn't weak... The story is still as gripping in its plot as is in its emotions... Look fwd to more frequent updates... :)


Thank you..😊

As far as the plot goes, as a writer a gripping plot gives me the ability to maneuver the stoty further in the next update.
The emotions.,,this story is based on the characters in the show but it is not a visual medium and so when I write it I like to be expressive enough so that my readers can imagine the actual actors enact it

if that makes sense

hope I can update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooww dis is so good
shv can read A's expresn ...hate dat jagya...hw cud he evn thnk of such cruelty 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: QueenbeePallavi

beyond good.. its a really touching and deep episode u wrote down.. anandi's emotions, shiv's strength and love. its all very minutely written. loved it completely.. hope we get the update sooner next time around!! keep it up!!👍🏼


I am glad you liked it and saw what i was trying to portray; that AnSh were each other's strength and would always be there for each other in all circumstances.
It was necessary for characterizations and future updates that this episode turn out this way and that Shiv realizes that something is wrong
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Sheena...well worth the delay!👏

Oh my that heart wrenching scene between ANSH...was so perfect...⭐️...no words of me will explain how I felt...ANSH they are so perfect together...they complete each other and compliment each other

hey if you send out PMs can you send me one too when you update next😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your writing is so visual 😊 that I could feel every emotion/ thought process that Ansh are going through!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow dear 👏
your story has a gripping pace. Update next part soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice yaar

very nice story line😛

try to give frequent updates😊
Edited by HemaG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aakanksha_7

wooww dis is so good

shv can read A's expresn ...hate dat jagya...hw cud he evn thnk of such cruelty 😡


I think AnSh have a strong bond and that needs to be expressed through words and off course on TV (which we won't get to)
As for Jagya, i always found his characterization in the show very indecisive; and he needs to be a stronger villain because a stronger villain will bring about an even stronger hero and an even greater love

hope that makes sense😆

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