AnSh OS - 'The Bullet Shot'..(Last part-pg 8)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awsome Khushi..👏 But y Anandi behaving like this😕 do continue soon can't wait now to read next part😆

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Nandita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

awesome os... eagerly waiting for the next part.

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Khusi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: AryaS
Khushi - wow...kya superb likha hai...so intense...I wanna see something like this in the show too.

Mai to ekdum se engrossed ho gayi thi story me ki zor ka jhatka laga jab pata chala ki tune adha hi likha hai. 😆 Kyon Khushi, itna interesting mod pe aakar rok diya...plz. continue soon. 🤗

😃😆...areey maine title main likha hai...1st part naa😆...

interesting mode...yeah😈😳😆

Originally posted by: saviani
Hey Khusi, Awesome dear. loved it. Please update the next part soon, can't wait for it 😊
Bechara Shiv, Anandi kitna tadpaati hai usse... 😃

thanku😳

bechara🤔...Ajee ka hero bechara kese hosakta hai😉😆...he is NOT😆

yahan anandi paresan hai..akela woh nehin...😆

Originally posted by: Suchi-Virmanian
wow aweeesome Kushi!!!!

please continue soon!!

thanku suchi😆

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Khusi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: roberoi
To be continued 😕

Mujhe samajh nahin aa raha is waqt Ajee zyada restless hai ya hum sab 🤣

HUM AAAH BHI KARTE HAIN TO HOJAATE HAI BADNAMM; WOH KATL BHI KARDE TO CHARCHA NAHI HOTA...
samajhdaar ko ishaara kafi hai 😉
loved it to the core...unusual idea and beautiflu story line itna to sach mein ANSH nahin pyar karte honge ek doosre se jitna hum log karte hain unse😛

thanku

y 😕??😆...last part baaki hai naa...

haan main samjhdaar samjhi...ab dusre samjhdaar ko bol rahi hoon...vedo yaa ginu ka SS read karo jake...mere se nehin hoga🤣

nah they do love each other that much too😆

Originally posted by: adi2512
WOW...Khushi.,

This is so amazing...👍🏼
Such a beautiful picturization.,👏
I can so imagine Anandi in her restless state and Shiv in a concerned state...

Its so beautiful., and endearing ...Anandi wanting to be at HER home with HER husband..wonderful potrayal of subtle emotions...❤️
Shiv will indeed be an amazing husband in taking care of her...and Yes., at the end of it he will be the happiest person in the entire universe., 😳

thanku adi😛.HER home...HER hubby...😆...aur full on haq jatao mood pe😆

Originally posted by: Bul3
aakhir Anandi itni restless kyun hai??..great start..please continue soon!!..

wohi toh suspense hai...thanku😆

Originally posted by: chumki...
mindblowing...too good..excelent...nahi kahungi khushi...sirf itna kehna hai...kal hum soch hi rahe the ki kafi sare OS parhe jo shiv aur anandi ke after marraige love life pe likha hua hai...defintelt sare bahut achche hai...per kal dil me aaya ki kash koi aisa OS likhe jis me anandi ya shiv dono me se koi injured ho...aur aaj dekho tumne woh kwaish puri kerdi..., aur kwaish poori hone se insaan jitna khush hota hai aur uske dil jitni duayee deta hai woh saued ... mindblowing...too good..excelent... se jyada hi hai...love uuu and waiting for yr next update...do it ASAP...👏👏👏👏👏

thanku so much sweet comments😳...but here they were not seriously injured...its more abt metal pain...and trauma ...

Edited by khusi_* - 12 years ago

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Khusi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: vasanthimrao
Awsome Khushi..👏 But y Anandi behaving like this😕 do continue soon can't wait now to read next part😆

thank you😆...poor gal is under shock

last part ka wait karo😆

Originally posted by: nandita.jana
awesome os... eagerly waiting for the next part.

thanku so much...will update soon😳

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anshurg5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

khushi awesome start👏

anandi in superwoman mode again , poor shiv

i think --anandi is restless because now she understands the value of time and of course her shivji.

sometimes you dont have enough time to express your feelings to your loved ones.so make use of every moment.
please continue soon.😛

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Pri_kinmuk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Oh I absolutely love it !!!!Cannot wait to read the next part !!! :-)

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Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Wowww Khushi...I think i am the last and the late one to read this beautiful update, but as its said better late than never...

This was a superb work yaar, very different and very possessive from ur past scripts...THis was truly outstanding...The possessive anandi was a treat to watch..ooops read...

I think she is scared of losing shiv as he was scolding her when she was collapsing, is tat the reason for her possessiveness that she wants nobody near her and dont want 2 even go to her haveli...

update soooner khushi...this is reallly very very awesome...dont take ages to update the next part plz...

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Khusi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: anshurg5
khushi awesome start👏

anandi in superwoman mode again , poor shiv

i think --anandi is restless because now she understands the value of time and of course her shivji.

sometimes you dont have enough time to express your feelings to your loved ones.so make use of every moment.
please continue soon.😛

thanku😳

here poor anandi..she is struggling...😆...u r almost there in guessing😉

Originally posted by: Pri_kinmuk
Oh I absolutely love it !!!!Cannot wait to read the next part !!! :-)

thanku😛

Originally posted by: Kurup
Wowww Khushi...I think i am the last and the late one to read this beautiful update, but as its said better late than never...

This was a superb work yaar, very different and very possessive from ur past scripts...THis was truly outstanding...The possessive anandi was a treat to watch..ooops read...

I think she is scared of losing shiv as he was scolding her when she was collapsing, is tat the reason for her possessiveness that she wants nobody near her and dont want 2 even go to her haveli...

update soooner khushi...this is reallly very very awesome...dont take ages to update the next part plz...

thanku ohh no..u r not that late...😆.yeah u got it right..its lil bit of diff..i never show anandi like that...ur guess🤔...NO..its not the exact reason😆

Edited by khusi_* - 12 years ago