AnSh OS - 'The Bullet Shot'..(Last part-pg 8)

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"Anandi ko goli lagi thi Mumbai main…...sirf aur srif mere vajah se…aur aaj anandi ki yeh halat meri vajah se hai….."………the line is like a storm hitting hard inside him…shiv is sitting on the chair near anandi's bed in the hospital cabin…… He takes a deep breath and looks at his wife. She is lying on the bed, her innocent face is shine less, he sighs n hold anandi's hand which was injected for saline. He slowly caresses her forehead…thinking of jag's words abt the bullet shot accident "itna sab kuchh saha anandi ne bachpan main…aur kismaat ki ajeeb baat yeh hai ki main kahin aur apni khusiyon apni duniyan main gum tha, aur meri jeevan sathi apne zindegi se lad rahi thi….itna sab kuchh hone k baad v anandi ne apne aap ko kavi tutne nehin diya toh aaj"…..suddenly with a jerk anandi holds his hand tight, starts mumbling something which is not audible to shiv, he panicked call out for doctor. Jagiya rushed in, checks her. He asked shiv to take rest as anandi's condition is steady and he will be here near her as he can keep an eye on her health in every minute. Shiv didn't want to go but feels may be its better, a doctor can do it better at any sudden issue!! He is abt to move, suddenly heard "shiv"…. anandi mumbled , his wife is still holding his hand tightly. Shiv sighed. Words r not needed to understand, jagiya understood and moved out of the cabin saying he will check in regular intervals.

Jagiya in his cabin….thinking…. …"shiv ko toh pata hi nehin hoga..us bachpan k hadse k baren main..kya soch raha hoga who..mera esa boldena theek raha kya"

Shiv …caressing anandi's forehead….."kya sach main us bachpan k hadse se yeh halat hui hai ….yaa fir aaj meri baton se…..kya main zimedarr hoon…mujhe ese nehin bolna chahiye tha…." A tear rolled down….he recalled few hours back…how anandi was muttering his name in half consciousness clutching his arms…..on the way to hospital from saktigardh. He curses himself……! "mujhe anandi ko jaipur akele nehin jane dena chahiye tha school ke kaam k liye….agar main saath hota toh yeh sab nehin hota sayad….nah bich rastey saktigardh main horaha who bal vivah k baaren main anandi ko pata lagta…nahi who wahan akeli jati…aur nay eh sab hota unke sath….." His heart skips a beat every time when he got the Fb that anandi was abt to get shot again…in the saktigardh today!!! He thanked god for unlimited time for saving from disaster. He kissed her forehead.

Next morning, at hospital….jagiya's cabin…. shiv, ds n bhairon were lil bit relieved knowing the fact from lal singh, jagiya, that anandi is much better now…nothing to worry! But she collapsed due to extreme stress n dehydration, taking rest is much needed. DS knew that jagiya spilled out anandi's bullet shot accident in childhood…She tried to say something abt it to shiv…suddenly a nurse came running there and informed anandi is completely restless………All rushed to anandi's cabin…..

"Maa batayeena shiv kahan hai….woh yahan kyun nehin hai…." All heard anandi's panicking words to sumi while entering into the cabin. All stunned. She is not letting sumi to speak, keeps asking for shiv. Sumi was panicked….tried hard to calm her down but no result. Rest are dumbstruck. shiv rushed towards her…holds her shoulders "Anandi main yahin hoon..kahan jaunga main…aap itni paresaan q hai…kya hua….". Anandi looked at him as if she got her life back…she was shivering..in a chocked voice…"kahan the aap …yahah q nehin the…jab main apne akkhen khholi toh..aap yahan nehin the…kyun" before shiv cud speak…sumi told her that she forced shiv to get freshen up as she will be here for few hours and he was here with her whole night . Anandi then looked at all who were very much tensed for her. She understood, s he acted very strangely. She calms down a bit, sat on the bed and let LS and jagiya to check her. Ls asked everyone to go outside as they will check her health . All move out. Shiv was abt to but realized anandi was still holding his hand tightly. He looked at her. Her eyes were telling him clearly not to go from there. Shiv felt something very usual in her. He assured "baas 5 min anandi…doctors tumhe check karenge naa..main yahan rahunga toh theek nehin hoga..baas main bahar hi hoon…baas 5 min". Anandi unwillingly released his hand. While moving out ,shiv realized anandi is still looking at him..not wanting him to go.

Outside the cabin, All r tensed at anandi's sudden behavior. Shiv got the Fbs of saktigardh incident…

he suddenly got a call from bheem singh who informed him that anandi went to saktigarh for stopping a val vivah, he got the news from a local ppl. Shiv got tensed coz that area was a very sensitive area..law n order were miserable there. local police of that area may not co operate with anandi for stopping the val vivah. He tried to call anandi but call was unreachable. He instantly headed towards saktigarh with the police force . He reached with the police at the time when a man from bride's side was pointing a gun on anandi's head…telling her to "pray to god for last time". Just then shiv managed to divert the gun point. Then after a serious chaos n firing…..the police brought by him…. able to handle the situation, he got injured slightly in the fighting. He recalled how anandi wanted to sooth his injured arm and he got hyper on her for taking risk….kept asking her y she came here without any support knowing the fact that it cud have been a lethal one like she faced almost in jyothi's val vivah…..he was indeed very hyper on her…just that time anandi collapsed in his arms….!!...

Shiv was brought back to his sense by Ds's who jerked ….seeing him so silent. She thought shiv was disturbed by the childhood accident of anandi…

chhora, tujhe pata toh chaal hi gaya jagdeesh ki baton se ki anandi ko goli lagi thi bachpanch main…..aur kaal v use goli lagnewali thi..isi wajah se anandi esi thodi darr si gayee hai….mujhe pata hai…tu use sambhal lega…..beeti baat bhulane main uska saath dega jese ab tak diya tune….Ds said that anxiously..trying to read shiv's thoughts!! Shiv looked at DS…cudnt find anything to speak….in his mind…"kya bolun main dadi jee…..jo mujhe khudd ko samajh nehin aaraaha…aapko kya keheke samjhaun….." Just then LS called them inside.

LS told them that she is fine, nothing to worry. Ds asked shiv to take anandi to haveli for few days. They can take care as in CH both will be alone n shekhars r out of state. BUT

"mujhe apne ghar jana hai dadisa…haveli nehin"….those words from anandi stunned everyone…"shiv mujhe ghar le chahiye naa…mujhe ghar jana hai…abhi k abhi…aap le chaliye" anandi's words again….left Ds shocked….DS tried to say again about haveli but LS asked her not to force anandi. Seeing anandi's restlessness again…without losing a second, Shiv convinced Ds that he will take her to CH, nothing to worry. He took anandi to CH. On the way to CH anandi dozed off on his arm by clutching it tight …making shiv even more concerned about her………………………

Last Part-page 8😊

*Plz ignore my errors*😳

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Don_theEvil thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome khushi.. but why this restlessness.. anandi bahot panik hai shiv ko lekar.. use pata chal gaya kay ki jagya ne bullet ke bare mai shiv ko bata aur wo use khone se dar rahi hai.. but mast likha hai.. jaldi continue karna ok..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: DonIsback

awesome khushi.. but why this restlessness.. anandi bahot panik hai shiv ko lekar.. use pata chal gaya kay ki jagya ne bullet ke bare mai shiv ko bata aur wo use khone se dar rahi hai.. but mast likha hai.. jaldi continue karna ok..


😳..thanku😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ye anandi sudhregi nahi...akele he chali jati hai kahi bhi 😡
anyways Its awesome..n i love caring shiv 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nniks

ye anandi sudhregi nahi...akele he chali jati hai kahi bhi 😡
anyways Its awesome..n i love caring shiv 😉

haan jab val vivah ki baat aati hai...her junoon over takes...
uska CS😳..yeah..woh toh hai😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khushiji... this one is so different!

I loved, loved, loved it!!! Jaldi se doosra wala likho...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye anandi ko shiv ki chinta ho rahi thi ki wo injure hoga yaha isliye panik huve hai ab samji.. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: VerboseG

Khushiji... this one is so different!


I loved, loved, loved it!!! Jaldi se doosra wala likho...

diff laga!!🤗
thanku...ginu...hmmm...will update the 2nd part later...my signal was got mixed with muku...😆

@don...galat jawab😆
Edited by khusi_* - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khushi - This is so diffeerent from what I expected...I thot S will be in hospi par yahan to Ajee 😲 Loved how she is so scared and attached for him n her home...but the pocesssesiveness can be an issue for any man.But I am sure he will handle it v sweetly.Update soon 😳
Edited by Malika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Malika

Khushi - This is so diffeerent from what I expected...I thot S will be in hospi par yahan to Ajee 😲 Loved how she is so scared and attached for him n her home...but the pocesssesiveness can be an issue for any man.But I am sure he will handle it v sweetly.Update soon 😳

thanku🤗...
@bold...yehi mujhe chahiye tha...😳😆
i was lil apprehensive abt showing anandi...like that...so discussed in AT...in a diff way😆
glad that it didnt look OTT😳

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