AnSh OS - 'The Bullet Shot'..(Last part-pg 8)

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Khusi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: tistaa

<font color="#ff0033">Phew dis time Anandi didn't get shoted...thank God or Khushi 😉...ek kaam karna chahiye Shiv ko...usko nah Anandi ko ek bulletproof jacket de na chahiye...because Anandi the superw woman really need that ASAP 😆😆😆 very nice OS 👏👏👏next part kab update karogi? jaldi karna 😳 I am dying to see Shiv's seva 😳thanx for the sweet treat 😊</font>

thanku😆
meri story main..no serious physical injury..😆...this time..anandi did call the local police but didnt get help...

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Khusi

@khusi_*

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: GoldenDew
Awweee.. hyper Anandi and very guilty Shiv and Jagya... I am sure Anandi will tell him that he's not the reason for her stress. and Shivjee will sambhalo his Ajee bade pyaar se😳 bohot sweet story hain yaar.. loved it.. this is for ya🤗

yup..kind of sou...😳...esa hi kuchh hoga...thanku

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Khusi

@khusi_*

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: piya_anshian
Anandi ji - Shiv ji's supawoman! 😆

Very different update di! Loved it 😳
Didnt got the reason for A's restlesness. 😕 Maybe she has realised that she too loves Shiv and was scared of the mere thought of loosing him ? 🤔

Update next part soon! 😡 😆

thanku piyu
ab woh suspense hai piyu...see her cs is confused too...😆

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AryaS

@AryaS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Khushi - wow...kya superb likha hai...so intense...I wanna see something like this in the show too.

Mai to ekdum se engrossed ho gayi thi story me ki zor ka jhatka laga jab pata chala ki tune adha hi likha hai. 😆 Kyon Khushi, itna interesting mod pe aakar rok diya...plz. continue soon. 🤗

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saviani

@saviani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Hey Khusi, Awesome dear. loved it. Please update the next part soon, can't wait for it 😊

Bechara Shiv, Anandi kitna tadpaati hai usse... 😃

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Suchi-

@Suchi-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

wow aweeesome Kushi!!!!

please continue soon!!

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roberoi

@roberoi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

To be continued 😕

Mujhe samajh nahin aa raha is waqt Ajee zyada restless hai ya hum sab 🤣

HUM AAAH BHI KARTE HAIN TO HOJAATE HAI BADNAMM; WOH KATL BHI KARDE TO CHARCHA NAHI HOTA...

samajhdaar ko ishaara kafi hai 😉

loved it to the core...unusual idea and beautiflu story line itna to sach mein ANSH nahin pyar karte honge ek doosre se jitna hum log karte hain unse😛

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Uma

@adi2512

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

WOW...Khushi.,

This is so amazing...👍🏼

Such a beautiful picturization.,👏

I can so imagine Anandi in her restless state and Shiv in a concerned state...

Its so beautiful., and endearing ...Anandi wanting to be at HER home with HER husband..wonderful potrayal of subtle emotions...❤️

Shiv will indeed be an amazing husband in taking care of her...and Yes., at the end of it he will be the happiest person in the entire universe., 😳

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Bulbul

@Bul3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

aakhir Anandi itni restless kyun hai??..great start..please continue soon!!..

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chumki

@chumki...

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

mindblowing...too good..excelent...nahi kahungi khushi...sirf itna kehna hai...kal hum soch hi rahe the ki kafi sare OS parhe jo shiv aur anandi ke after marraige love life pe likha hua hai...defintelt sare bahut achche hai...per kal dil me aaya ki kash koi aisa OS likhe jis me anandi ya shiv dono me se koi injured ho...aur aaj dekho tumne woh kwaish puri kerdi..., aur kwaish poori hone se insaan jitna khush hota hai aur uske dil jitni duayee deta hai woh saued ... mindblowing...too good..excelent... se jyada hi hai...love uuu and waiting for yr next update...do it ASAP...👏👏👏👏👏

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