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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! 😳
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Originally posted by: Vedo

Awesome update! 😳

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from past two days i'm reading it Chahat..awesome.. :) i cant explain with what interest i was reading it..each moment was lively and i can imagine pratyusha and siddharth enacting the scenes... :) awesome work.. just keep it up! eagerly waiting for more updates.. :) just pm me whenevr u have any new update..❤️
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Originally posted by: tina_17

from past two days i'm reading it Chahat..awesome.. :) i cant explain with what interest i was reading it..each moment was lively and i can imagine pratyusha and siddharth enacting the scenes... :) awesome work.. just keep it up! eagerly waiting for more updates.. :) just pm me whenevr u have any new update..❤️

hey thanx

I update this FF daily

It like day to day episodes BV comes MON- FRI but I am here MON-SUN

I hope you have read it from the beginning

Well do enjoy I will keep posting even if there is madness like precap shown on friday

do comment I always enjoy reading messages😃


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wah... Like always awesome part... I love shiv's this new gift- kadas... Nd I just love this cutttie thoda rutha-rutha Shiv ... Aur Anandi ka use pyari si trick se manana... Hw sweet... Fantastic part... Yeh tumara har choti-choti khusiyo ke palo ko sanjona hamesa hi mujhe bahot bahot achha lagata hai... 😊
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Originally posted by: Manshi

wah... Like always awesome part... I love shiv's this new gift- kadas... Nd I just love this cutttie thoda rutha-rutha Shiv ... Aur Anandi ka use pyari si trick se manana... Hw sweet... Fantastic part... Yeh tumara har choti-choti khusiyo ke palo ko sanjona hamesa hi mujhe bahot bahot achha lagata hai... 😊

Thanx😃

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C - literally made an account so I could tell you how amazing your work is - its proven to distract me quite a couple days from my MCAT studying! Truly wonderful ease update soon !!
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They sit and do some talking while waiting for Shyaam and Nandu. Shyaam and Nandu come to take Anandi. He comes and goes running to his jijusa. "Nandu ye kya tujhe bas apne jijusa dikhayi dete hain? Jiji ko ek hi raat mein bhool gaya." Anandi gets jealous of Shiv. Her teeka is done before leaving. "Jijusa aap nahi challenge jiji ke saath?" "Nahi Nandu beta tumhaare jijiusa nahi aa sakte." "Lekin kakisa jijusa ko aane do na hum cricket khelenge. Mahi bhaisa aap bhi aayenge na? Jijusa toh mere dost hain aur mere saare dost mere ghar aate hain. Ab ghar par mujhe koi na rokega khel ne se. Bade daadusa bhi chale gaye warna wo mujhe apne time ke khel bataate." On hearing about Bade daadusa gone Shiv looks at Anandi and raises his eyebrows. She shakes her head in a no. She takes blessings from all and leaves. Shiv goes to the door to bid her good bye.

Anandi reaches haveli. She is welcomed at home. She goes running to Dsa but notices a change in her behavior. She sees that Dsa is very sad and had also become short tempered. Jagat and Gauri as usual are heard to be bickering. The peace of the house that was once maintained by her was long gone and that too in one day. It finally registered to Dsa that her chidakly had come home for her pag pachcha rasam. She hugs Anandi and cries. She complains to Anandi like a small child. "Accho kiyo chori tu aa gayi. Dekh thaari ma aur taiji maahro itto so bhi khyaal na raakhe. Tu aayi hai na ab sikha ki hi jaana inko. Kuch naa aave inko." Anandi hugs Dsa. She understood that Dsa would be the one most affected by her not being at haveli. "Theek hai Dsa ma aur taiji aapka dhyaan nahi rakhti hai na toh main unko acche se daant ke hi jaoongi." "Haan aiso hi keejo tu."

She comes to the kitchen and apologises to Sumitra and Gehna. "Mujhe maaf kar dijiye meri wajah se Dsa aapko itna daant rahi thi. Main hi jaane se pehle kuch kar nahi paayi. Mujhe bhi sochna chahiye tha mujhe aap dono ko sab kuch batake jaana chahiye tha." "Arre nahi lado teri koi galti nahi hai. Ma sa ki umar ho chali hai iss umar main toh waise hi log bacche jaise ban jaate hain aur teri bidaai se ma sa sabse zyaada khush bhi hui hain aur udaas bhi. Itne saalon se tu hi toh unki sakhi sangi thi na is liye. Shiv aur tumne bahut accha kiya Jagat aur Gauri ka byaah karake par shayad unko yahan rakhna theek na hoga. Kal se dono bas lade hi ja rahe hain use ma sa ko aur takleef ho rahi hai. Kya kya socha tha unhone uske liye par apni karni se sab kuch barbaad kar raha hai."

"Jiji jaane dijiye ye sab humaari beti pag pachcha karne aayi hai toh bas hum toh issi ki khushi ki baaten karengi. Ma sa ki daant toh hum shahad mein ghol kar pee jaayengi." They have some mother daughter talks and then they hear a sudden uproar of laughter from the living area. They could hear Dsa and Shiv's laugh. It had not been half an hour since she had come to the haveli. "Hey Bhagwaan maine mana kiya tha ma par dekhiye phir bhi aa gaye." She goes out of the kitchen and sees Ashi, Mahi, Saachi and Shiv. She wants to scold Shiv for coming but then sees the huge smile on Dsa's face. He was truly her ladesar. She remembers Dsa's face when she had arrived and now the look on her face it was a complete change. She goes and sits next to Dsa. They have flanked her as always.

They all sit and have fun family moments. Ashi, Mahi and Saachi fill the Singh's with every details of every rasam that happened after the bidaai. They are very happy to hear about their lado being so happy in her saasra. Anandi gets up and goes to the kitchen and Shiv follows her. "Kya hua Anandiji? Aap naaraaz hai ki main yahan aaya." "Nahi pehle thi par ab nahi. C S aapko pata hai jab main aayi tab Dsa ka chehra kitna udaas tha par aapke aate hi raunak aa gayi unke chehre par. Aap sach mein unke ladesar hain. Ab kabhi aapko Thank You nahi kahoongi yahan sab ka khayaal rahne ke liye kyunki aap iss parivaar ko apna maan kar sab karte hain. Aap mere liye itna karte hain par main kuch bhi nahi kar paati aapke liye. Pata nahi kabhi kar paaoongi bhi ya nahi?" She was indicating at her not reciprocating his love and not being able to be intimate with him.

He put his finger on her lips. He cupped her face in his hands. "Anandiji aapko pata bhi hai aapne mere liye kya kiya hai? Aapko andaaza bhi hai ki aapne mujhe aapka saath dekar kitni badi khushi di hai? Aapki dosti mere liye bahut anmol hai. Anandiji main bahut pehle aapse keh chukka hoon ki main pehle aapke mann se judna chahta hoon. Wahi mere liye sabse zyaada zaroori hai. Humaara jo aaj rishta hai jaisa hai bahut khoobsoorat hai. Maine kabhi iss baat ki shikaayat toh nahi ki na ki aap mujhse pyaar nahi karti. Hum best friend's hain aur jab tak aapko mujhse pyaar nahi ho jata tab tak humaari dosti aur mera pyaar more than enough hai. Jab jab aapko aisa lagega ki aap mere liye kuch nahi kar paati tab tab main aapko ye baat samjhaaoonga."

He brings a smile to her face. He was the only one in her life who could bring a smile to her face even in the toughest of times. They go out and join the others. Dsa receives a call from Daddu. He had a request to make that if it was possible to do Anandi's bidaai after the pag pacchha rasam at an earlier muhurat. He had promised that Anandi would do her pag pacchha rasam again once she returned to Jaitsar. They had to leave by early evening in order to reach Kesarbuag by Sunday morning. There had been a change in plans as the other elders of the family had informed them that Anandi's 'griha pravesh' at the ancestral home can't be done in the evening.

Dsa informs everyone that Anandi's bidaai had to be done early. They all go to have lunch. Jagat and Gauri are also asked to join them for lunch. Shiv asked Jagat to take care of Dadiji while he and Anandi were away. Anandi and Shiv are continued to be teased. They take it all with good heart. They blush and their cheeks could lend their color to beetroots to make them much redder in color. After lunch Anandi and Shiv are given gifts. They are given gifts for everyone in the family. They take blessings from all and leave for their home.

Anandi and Shiv reach home and they give the gifts to everyone. They all sit together and enjoy themselves. Anandi was getting adjusted to the new ways of her family. "Anandi beta tumne apna sammaan unpack toh nahi kiya na?" "Nahi mummyji wo kal raat ko aur aaj subah waqt hi nahi mila." She genuinely did not get time but Mahi and Ashi giggle at her statement. "Badi ma aap bhi kitni innocent hain? Kal raat ko bhaiyya ne bhabhi ko unpack nahi karne diya hoga aur aaj subah bhabhi ke paas khud unpack ke liye waqt nahi tha." He teased about the suhaag raat and her towel nikaalo abhiyaan. Anandi blushes and looks timidly at Shiv. He gets up at once and starts running behind Mahi to teach him a lesson.

They all go to their respective rooms to pack their luggage. They would leave by 6:30pm to reach Udaipur by early morning. Anandi and Shiv were in their room. Anandi takes a small stool and gets up on it to get Shiv's bags from above the cupboard. She was about to trip when Shiv holds her. His tight grip on her waist sent a jolt in her body and she shivered a little. He always noticed something in her when he came close but thought it was his imagination. He got her off the stool. "Anandiji ye aap kya kar rahi hain?" He got his bags down and placed it on the bed. "Dekhiye ab aap baaton mein time waste mat kijiye mujhe packing karni hai. Sirf do ghante hain aur phir mujhe tayyar bhi hona hai. Aapka kya hai bas kapde pehen liye aur ho gaya. Aapka saamaan pack kar deti hoon. Aap hi ne kaha tha na ki main help kar doon. C S aap ek kaam kijiye apna saaraa samaan yahaan rakh dijiye main pack kar loongi." Shiv gets all his clothes, his accessosories, his toiletries, etc. and places them on the bed. Anandi very neatly packs his bags. He sat cross legged on the bed and obsereved her very carefully. He assisted her in her task. "C S ye bag band nahi ho raha. Ya toh samaan kam karna hoga ya toh aur bag leni hogi." She had closed one bag but the other was not closing. He passes a typical pati wala comment and she could not help but give him the wifey look. "Nahi bas teen bag mere liye kaafi hai main ladkiyon ki tarah truck bhar kar samaan nahi le ja sakta. Aap ek kaam kijiye bag par baith jaaiye main band kar deta hoon. Dariye mat aapka wazan itna bhi nahi hai ki meri bag toot jaayegi." She sits on the bag and he claps the locks of the suitcase. She places his toiletries and other nick knacks in another small bag. She opens the first bag again. "Kya hua bag kyun khol rahi hain aap? Phir kahengi ki time nahi hai." "Maine packing kar di hai ab aap baaki ka samaan pack kar dijiye. Aapke rumaal aur socks pack nahi kiye hain aap kar dijiye." She hinted on packing his briefs and vests. He did his remaining packing. Her bags were already packed and sent to the cars.

Ira and Meenu come with a new joda for her to wear. "Ma ab ye kya hai? Anandiji ko phir se aisa bhari bharkham joda kyun de rahi hain aap. Aapko pata hai shaadi ke jode mein khadi bhi nahi ho pa rahi thi." "Shiv beta kal Anandi ek bahu ke roop mein Kesarbuag mein pravesh karegi. Wahan saare bade buzurg honge unke saamne humaare parivaar ki nayi naveli bahu halke kapdo mein nahi ja sakti. Shaadi ke jode jaise hi jode mein Anandi ka jaana theek rahega. Anandi beta agar baat sirf humaari hoti toh hum nahi kehte par beta sab honge wahan. Tum ye pehenkar tayyar ho jao. Meenu tumhe tayyar kar degi." "Ji mummyji main tayyar ho jaati hoon. C M main khud se tayyar ho jaaoongi aapko aur bhi tayyariyaan dekhni hongi na?" C M and Ira understand that Anandi needed to calm down her frantic husband.

"C S ye aap kya kar rahe hain? Kyun choti choti baaton mein pareshaan ho rahe hain? Dekhiye C M aur mummyji sahi keh rahe hain aise mauko par log choti si baat ka batangad bana dete hain. Iss parivaar ki bahu ke saaj sringaar mein koi kami nazar aayi toh jhat se suna denge. Mujhe thodi si pareshaani hogi par theek hai par main ye bardaasht nahi kar paaoongi agar koi mere parivaar ke bare mein kuch kahega. Aap chote bacche ki tarah behave karna band kijiye. Baar baar aapko chote se baby ki tarah samjhana padta hai." "Aur aapko nahi samjhana padta?" They remember that they make each other understand some things.

"Aap tayyar ho jaiye main aapke kapde nikaal deti hoon." She saw the look on his face. She remembered the same look had appeared on his face the first time she said this to him at her room in her maayka. The day they had come for lunch and Ashi and Mahi had come. "Main aapke kapde cupboard se nikaal deti hoon aap tayyar ho jaaiye." She explained clearly to him. He has a naughty thankful smile on his face. She pushed him to the washroom to take a shower. She opened his cupboard and removed a sherwaani for him. He too like her had to wear shaadi type clothes for the journey. She saw the packet of long lasting essentials and checked the expiry date. She did it unknowingly. She heard the door of the dressing room open. Shiv put out his hand and asked for his clothes. Anandi smacked herself on the forehead. She shyly handed him the clothes.

He got dressed and she too after her bath got dressed. This was the third change of clothes for them in one day. Shiv was in the room when she came out after wearing her clothes. She had a smile on her face showing relief. He signed her 'What?' "Ye joda mere shaadi ke jode se halka hai." He was looking very handsome. She had the same reaction she had on seeing him at the wedding venue. She came to him and touched him behind the ear. "Kya hua? Kya tha?" "Nahi kuch nahi wo kaala teeka lagaya kisi ki nazar na lage. Bahut acchhe lag rahe hain." "Handsome nahi?" "Nahi kaha tha na aaj bahut acchhe lagenge aur kal handsome lagenge." They laugh at their childish comments and compliments of each other. She did her hair and make up and wore her jewelry. She filled her maang. He was admiring her from far. He came behind her and took her kajal and put a kala teeka for her too. They admire their post wedding couple look in the mirror.

They are to leave for Udaipur. Anandi goes around the C H and sees her home once before leaving. Daddu, Alok, Ira and Meenu get in the decorated Hyundai Elantra with the driver. Anandi and Shiv sit in the back of the decorated Maruti Suzuki Dzire. They were waiting for the driver. They would get to talk on their long journey to Kesarbuag. Mahi gets in the driver's seat and Ashi sits with him in the front seat. "Tum dono yahaan kya kar rahe ho? Driver ko bhej." "Bhaiyya wo ek driver Daddu ki gaadi mein hai, ek driver ko pehle kisi kaam se Kesarbuag bhej diya gaya hai aur ek driver luggage ke saath Scorpio mein hai. Aaj toh aapko humaare saath hi safar karna hoga. Maza aayega hum chaaron ko bhaiyya please aapko full privacy milegi aur haan please thodi humen bhi de dijiyega." Shiv and Mahi give brotherly smiles while Ashi and Anandi blush.

There was a knock on Mahi's window. "Bhaiyya main toh reh hi gayi. Main peeche Shiv bhaiyya aur bhabhi ke saath baith jaati hoon." Saachi was feeling left out ever since she found out about Ashi and Mahi. Saachi gets in the back with Anandi and Shiv. Anandi and Ashi share a look from the rear view mirror. "Hey Anandi I want to sit with you and talk main back seat par aate hai. Shiv you come and sit with Mahi." Mahi and Shiv both get irritated. "Chal Mahi Suffer ki shuruaat karte hain." Ashi and Anandi give a please understand look to Mahi and Shiv respectively. They did not want Saachi to be left out. They make her sit in the middle. She is enjoying the royal treatment her bhabhi's are giving her. "Thank you meri dono sweet bhabhi's aap dono mere bhaiyyas se toh bahut acchhe ho." "Acchha hai ab rakhi aur bhai dooj par aur shopping karne ke liye bahut sweet bhabhiyon se paise maangna." They travel for sometime and Saachi falls asleep resting on Anandi's shoulder. Ashi and Shiv take the chance and shift places. They do not get to talk because of sleeping beauty but the partners share occasional eye locks and pleasant smiles.

Edited by chahat11 - 12 years ago
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Hey readers,

I have reposted the part

Sorry there must have been a glitch

please read and enjoy

I am working on an OS based on Friday episode and Precap

Edited by chahat11 - 12 years ago
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Hey,

I enjoy reading both your works...sorry for being a silent n thankless reader😛...i have not been on this BV forum for a long time so!!!!
Just wanted to drop in a word...so u know your work's admired!!

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