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Posted: 12 years ago
Had a smile on my face when reading this --Kitni sweet, natkhat Sangeet ceremony thi 😊--
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaaar CHahat...this was soo so so so so so wowwwlicious, fantabulous, and right from the start to the end of this chapter there was a broad and a wide smile on my face that after I finished reading the side effect is that i was smiling and was searching for words to appreciate and i am still in that process of thinking and u wont beleive but i have read this part 7 times so far only to think of few words to appreciate but i am speechless yaaar...and my jaw is paining now coz my smile just got broader and wider everytime i read it...
awesome dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vedo

You were right, I do love it! It was awesome! 👏 👏

Thanx

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: umam

Had a smile on my face when reading this --Kitni sweet, natkhat Sangeet ceremony thi 😊--

thanx

Par 2 parts abhi bhi baaki hai

bahut natkhat honge wo parts

U will love them

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kurup

Yaaar CHahat...this was soo so so so so so wowwwlicious, fantabulous, and right from the start to the end of this chapter there was a broad and a wide smile on my face that after I finished reading the side effect is that i was smiling and was searching for words to appreciate and i am still in that process of thinking and u wont beleive but i have read this part 7 times so far only to think of few words to appreciate but i am speechless yaaar...and my jaw is paining now coz my smile just got broader and wider everytime i read it...

awesome dear...

Thank you very very much

if you loved this the 1 I will post 2morrow I don't know what you will think of me

BV waale slow slow karte shaadi tak pahuch gaye and I am still stuk on sangeet

Now they are on a jet train and I am on a bullock cart

par 2 parts abhi bhi baaki hain

mera story slow ja raha hai par trust me I have written really good stuff

I am not being a donkey praising its own tail but I am sure u will love what is coming up next

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Posted: 12 years ago

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The lights in the hall go off. Sugna and Shyaam had planned one more surprise act. They show Anandi and Shiv's life five years later. It was 30/11/2017 Anandi and Shiv's 5th wedding anniversary. Anandi and Shiv both were eager to see what their life would be then.The early morning sunlight coming through the curtains spread light in a bedroom decorated in a modern and ethnically blend. Anandi(Sugna) and Shiv(Shyaam) are asleep with the huge smile which never ceased to fade post marriage come what may. There was a little vertical bump in the middle of the two. Their hands softly placed on the bump. Shiv wakes up before Anandi and as his daily practice he is admiring her. She wakes up to the sound of the wind chime and sees his smiling face. She gives him a huge smile. They mouth good morning and I LOVE YOU to each other. He takes her hand in his and places a soft kiss on it.

Shiv picks up his phone and sends a sms. Her phone buzzes. She picks it up and replies to the msg received. It was from him. They send and receive messages. Their expressions are shown to change from time to time. There was shyness, naughtiness, happiness and eagerness shown in Anandi and Shiv while sms ing. The families are shocked that they have been shown to send and receive messages and not chat the way they do now. Even Anandi and Shiv are wondering what the matter is. "Arre bhai kya baat hai ye dono msg msg khel rahe hain. Jhagda hua hai ya maun vrat hai dono ka? Abhi ke jaise phone par baat kyun nahi kar rahe? Itni chuppi kyun saadhe hue hai dono?" Everyone laughs at Daddu's comment. The families know that Shiv and Anandi can't stay without speaking to each other.

Shiv and Anandi are shown to come close for an anniversary sp. kiss. (Everyone is on the edge of their seats to see what happens next. Anandi and Shiv also become restless while seeing the scene done by Shyaam and Sugna. Mahi and Ashi are constantly staring at Anandi and Shiv to get their reaction as they both know that they are in love and have sexual tension between them. But Anandi was still not acknowledging it and considered him her best friend so Shiv too never gave it a second thought.) Their lips are shown centimeters apart and suddenly the blanket covering the little vertical bump between them rises along with a three year old baby girl saying," Ma susu aayi hai." Anandi and Shiv leap back to their original places in bed. Everyone burst out laughing as they realize that the sms ing was to avoid waking up their daughter. They can spend some quality time as husband and wife before taking up the role of papa and ma. Anandi and Shiv blush on hearing Mahi's comment," Shaadi ko paach saal ho gaye aur meri bhateeji teen saal ki? Kya baat hai bhai aur bhabhi ne do saal tak family planning ki?" They were feeling so shy that they did not even lift their eyes to see each other.

Shiv looks at his daughter and in a loving fatherly voice says,"Beta ab aap 3 years ke ho gaye ho. You are now a big girl. In some days aap school jaane lagoge. (He sees her get a bit scared.) Shh its ok aap yahan kal raat ko soye because aapko school ka bad dream aaya lekin it is a very good place. Ma aur papa ko school bahut pasand tha so you will like it too. Aap ma-papa ki beti ho na? So go yourself ma nahi aayengi aap ke saath." They have a cute father daughter convo. He picks his daughter and gets her off their bed. He points her towards the wash room. "Papa aap bhi toh big boy ho na?" Shiv nods a yes. "Toh aap kyun towel bhool jaate ho? Ma has to come to give it to you roz morning and nighty night ko bhi." She is shown to run towards the wash room leaving her blushing parents.

She returns in a moment. They pick her up and are to give their little bundle of joy a good morning kiss. She wants a simulteanous kiss. They agree and she closes their eyes. When they reach her cheeks she ducks and the end up kissing each other. She runs away from there. They look at her and together say," Ye humaari hi beti ho sakti hai. Pakki baat hai hospital mein nahi badli. Hum apni hi beti ko ghar lekar aaye hain." People around them would find her to be very naughty as Anandi and Shiv are so composed and mature. But they know the truth about themselves more than anyone. She is as naughty as the two of them were in their child hood and even now they were naughty. Shyaam and Sugna have first hand seen Anandi as a naughty child and they extracted info about Shiv's naughty childhood from C M.

"Aap aisi hi badmaash thi na jab choti thi?" Shiv asks Anandi. "Main bhi aaj hi papa ko kehti hoon aap ka bachpan mujhe dekhna hai toh anniversary gift mein mujhe saare video chahiye aapke bachpan ke." "Arre papa ko kyun pareshaan kar rahi hain aap. I can help you with that. Main aapko apna bachpan live dikha sakta hoon." "Live kaise?" "Jaise main dekhta hoon aapka bachpan." He points as their little daughter playing with her doll. Anandi is shown to get it that he is talking about having another child maybe they will be blessed with a boy as she wants to see his bachpan. They have an eye lock. "Ma doodhoo." their daughter shouts. They break their eye lock on hearing her. "Abhi ek awaaz aa rahi hai phir do aayengi. Ye ek hi 10 ke barabar hai keeping in mind isme hum dono ke gunn hain." "So what hum dono milke humaare zille ke 2000 logon ko sambhalte hain toh 20 ke barabar 2 ko nahi sambhaal pyenge? I am sure we can do it. So what say Anniversary gift main hi de deta hoon aapko." He pulls her close as their daughter left to go play in the garden. The lights are turned on.

Edited by chahat11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chahatji,tussi great ho yaar, what an update, think it is better to quit watching the serial and read your updates...loved it, Kash serial main Asia ho!!!! can't wait for your next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh...dear hw can u even think that I don't like ur update!😲, are..Dear...res...means - "Reserving the Comment", when a reader read ur post nd can't comment at that time in wtever reason either he/she busy or need a time to give full length comment, at that time we res our comment for some time. OK,
now in my case,
when I woke in the morning first thing I do was, read this PART 😛, I just open my eyes, took the phone, went into BV forum nd start reading ur today's update😆😛, so I need time to comment.
nd the thing is that as u know in each nd every part of ur story, I hv so...so...so... many things which I loved it in each part nd even I loved to mention all those things...so for that I need a time so I can't comment on early...sry..dear😭,
Now, come to the main comment for "this PART"
yar...kash...kash..kash...BV valo ne bhi aisa kuch bataya hota😭, but koi bat nahi tumne sach hi kaha tha tu hamare DIL ke sare arman pure kar rahi ho, thank u dear🤗,wah...wah...kya ACT dikhaya hai..👏👏👏, Yai...SMS vala IDEA to bahot...bahot...hi ,mast tha..😆, I love DADU nd MAHI's comments:
"Arre bhai kya baat hai ye dono msg msg khel rahe hain. Jhagda hua hai ya maun vrat hai dono ka? Abhi ke jaise phone par baat kyun nahi kar rahe? Itni chuppi kyun saadhe hue hai dono?" 😆😆😆, nd Shaadi ko paach saal ho gaye aur meri bhateeji teen saal ki? Kya baat hai bhai aur bhabhi ne do saal tak family planning ki?"😉, nd Ansh bichare☺️, but very adoreble
nd wow...Ansh have cute little Daughter who is naturally very smart like her parents😉, kya mast answer diya hai apne PAPA ko
"Toh aap kyun towel bhool jaate ho? Ma has to come to give it to you roz morning and nighty night ko bhi."😆😛, nd aye...haye...my Naughty cute Shiv : "So what hum dono milke humaare zille ke 2000 logon ko sambhalte hain toh 20 ke barabar 2 ko nahi sambhaal pyenge? I am sure we can do it. So what say Anniversary gift main hi de deta hoon aapko." 😉😛,
So for this whole Damakedar Act pls accept my 🤗
🤗🤗 Chahat...
nd U know one more thing as we know Ansh r very shy kind of couple (actually naughty but its only their SECRET) so I can literately imagine wt their reaction after watching this whole ACT,its like ☺️, koi hame muh chupani ki jaga de do..pls...😛😉.
LOVE u dear for this SANGEET DAMAKA PART 2
nd ya I hv to mention one more thing dear,
jaise tune Kurup ko kaha:

BV waale slow slow karte shaadi tak pahuch gaye and I am still stuk on sangeet

Now they are on a jet train and I am on a bullock cart,

to mai tuje bata du ke Dear, aisi JET TRAIN kis kam ki jo hame hamesa Ansh nam ki "GAJAR" latka kar jaghead ko sir pe mare ja rahe he😡, ham betabi mai bethate hai ke,kuch pyare Ansh moments dekhne ko mile us mai bhi DS ke woh FB scenes😡, are...Hame unka pyara sa wo eyelock- dance , wo to enjoy karne do...

So my all Hope is on U, kyu ke tumhi to ho jo hamre Arman pure karogi, wo sare Ansh moments de kar, jo ham dekhna chahte hai, so in short I LoVE ur "bullock cart",nd thank u for this 🤗

nd I m eagerly waiting ke ye...BULLOCK CART hame age konse destination par le jati hai...nd Im 100% confident next destination current wale se bhi badkar hi hoga..👍🏼 so...PLS...update soon...






Edited by Manshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

I am not aware of the many terms used here

what does res? is it good or bad

please explain meaning

bad with abbreviations

I just hope you have liked it

would be sad to disppoint sum1 who has always appreciated my work

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful, as usual... big smile!

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