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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Manshi

Oh...dear hw can u even think that I don't like ur update!😲, are..Dear...res...means - "Reserving the Comment", when a reader read ur post nd can't comment at that time in wtever reason either he/she busy or need a time to give full length comment, at that time we res our comment for some time. OK,
now in my case,
when I woke in the morning first thing I do was, read this PART 😛, I just open my eyes, took the phone, went into BV forum nd start reading ur today's update😆😛, so I need time to comment.
nd the thing is that as u know in each nd every part of ur story, I hv so...so...so... many things which I loved it in each part nd even I loved to mention all those things...so for that I need a time so I can't comment on early...sry..dear😭,
Now, come to the main comment for "this PART"
yar...kash...kash..kash...BV valo ne bhi aisa kuch bataya hota😭, but koi bat nahi tumne sach hi kaha tha tu hamare DIL ke sare arman pure kar rahi ho, thank u dear🤗,wah...wah...kya ACT dikhaya hai..👏👏👏, Yai...SMS vala IDEA to bahot...bahot...hi ,mast tha..😆, I love DADU nd MAHI's comments:
"Arre bhai kya baat hai ye dono msg msg khel rahe hain. Jhagda hua hai ya maun vrat hai dono ka? Abhi ke jaise phone par baat kyun nahi kar rahe? Itni chuppi kyun saadhe hue hai dono?" 😆😆😆, nd Shaadi ko paach saal ho gaye aur meri bhateeji teen saal ki? Kya baat hai bhai aur bhabhi ne do saal tak family planning ki?"😉, nd Ansh bichare☺️, but very adoreble
nd wow...Ansh have cute little Daughter who is naturally very smart like her parents😉, kya mast answer diya hai apne PAPA ko
"Toh aap kyun towel bhool jaate ho? Ma has to come to give it to you roz morning and nighty night ko bhi."😆😛, nd aye...haye...my Naughty cute Shiv : "So what hum dono milke humaare zille ke 2000 logon ko sambhalte hain toh 20 ke barabar 2 ko nahi sambhaal pyenge? I am sure we can do it. So what say Anniversary gift main hi de deta hoon aapko." 😉😛,
So for this whole Damakedar Act pls accept my 🤗
🤗🤗 Chahat...
nd U know one more thing as we know Ansh r very shy kind of couple (actually naughty but its only their SECRET) so I can literately imagine wt their reaction after watching this whole ACT,its like ☺️, koi hame muh chupani ki jaga de do..pls...😛😉.
LOVE u dear for this SANGEET DAMAKA PART 2
nd ya I hv to mention one more thing dear,
jaise tune Kurup ko kaha:

BV waale slow slow karte shaadi tak pahuch gaye and I am still stuk on sangeet

Now they are on a jet train and I am on a bullock cart,

to mai tuje bata du ke Dear, aisi JET TRAIN kis kam ki jo hame hamesa Ansh nam ki "GAJAR" latka kar jaghead ko sir pe mare ja rahe he😡, ham betabi mai bethate hai ke,kuch pyare Ansh moments dekhne ko mile us mai bhi DS ke woh FB scenes😡, are...Hame unka pyara sa wo eyelock- dance , wo to enjoy karne do...

So my all Hope is on U, kyu ke tumhi to ho jo hamre Arman pure karogi, wo sare Ansh moments de kar, jo ham dekhna chahte hai, so in short I LoVE ur "bullock cart",nd thank u for this 🤗

nd I m eagerly waiting ke ye...BULLOCK CART hame age konse destination par le jati hai...nd Im 100% confident next destination current wale se bhi badkar hi hoga..👍🏼 so...PLS...update soon...






Thanx for the explaination and a big thanx for your comment

Anandi and Shiv are actually very naughty

She is just not able to do so beacuse of her painful past and he does some but in restraint not ot hurt her

I can't write only about AnSh I have a compulsion to include all only then my story will seem real

Yes when they will have a child boy or girl will be smart and naughty like the parents

Yeah I will update by tommorrow sangeet ka last part you will love it too

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Posted: 12 years ago
that was one sweet , lovely bit to read
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: umam

that was one sweet , lovely bit to read

Thanx

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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar chahat i am reallly not surprised with what i am reading coz u r such gifted talented writer that i am sure that u cant compromise in anywyas as far as the x-factor of the update is considered..I so so so wish that CVs end up reading ur scripts and add ur contents in the show,
Every part ws so beautifullly written, how suguna and shayam were enacting to the comments of daddu and maahi and how ansh were blushing and the kid everythng so perfect,,,
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ur imagination is fulltoo on...👏

Shyam aur Sughna bhi bahut boldmho gaye hain 😉 Loved it ...waiting for more as always
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roberoi

Ur imagination is fulltoo on...👏


Shyam aur Sughna bhi bahut boldmho gaye hain 😉 Loved it ...waiting for more as always

thanx

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Posted: 12 years ago

Important note: please read b4 my next part


hey guys

here is the last and final part of AnSh sangeet

Ok so this part was written by me almost 2 weeks back

It is not an attempt to get back at Saachi

This is just for another fun filled day

so please read and enjoy

do send ur lovely messages

Edited by chahat11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Reminder Note: This scene was written by me a long time back. Not an attempt to get back at the bitchy act done by the Saachi.

Everybody with huge smiles turn to look for Anandi and Shiv's reaction. The jhula was empty. They felt so shy after seeing their future that they had run away from there. They were hiding under the stair case to avoid being teased. Mahi and Ashi bring them out. "Arre ye dono toh seedhi ke neeche chupe the. Itne sab ke baad bhi dono saath saath hi chupe the. Sharam ke mare bahar he nahi aa rahe the. Kheench ke laye hain. Abhi toh dhamaal baaki hai. Inhe pakad ke rakhiye warna phir se bhaag jaayenge. Humaara bhi performance baaki hai." They were made to sit back on the jhula.

In the sangeet ceremony there was one more special surprise for Anandi and Shiv. A skit was prepared by MAASH. Ashi played Anandi and Mahi did the role of Shiv. They enacted a few scenes of events that had happened in AnSh life. They had done their research very well. It was a treat for all. The guests almost rolled with laughter when they saw some scenes.

The scenes were of the mango dinner witnessed by the Singh's, the champy scene witnessed by B S, the engagement ring scene witnessed by the Shekhar's, the mirchi scene witnessed by Ashi, the temple and bike scene witnessed by Mahi and a very cute event of them playing hop scotch by Nandu, Varun and Shagun. (Mera idea hai.)

Mango Dinner Scene: They very cutely show how much Anandi(Ashi) had teased him when he had come for dinner. They way Shiv gorged on more than two bowls of the halwa she had made. The eating capapcity Shiv had. He readily ate mango even on a full stomach. They all laugh when Shiv (Mahi) was shown eating mango like a small child. Daddu comments," Bhukkad hai bachpan se hi poore pet par bhi aam khane ki rat lagata tha. Bageeche main aam toh jaise sirf isi ke liye ugate hain." Shiv feels very shy. Anandi giggled on Daddu's comment. Ira looks at her and signals her not to laugh on her hone waale beend in front of all.

The Champy Scene: The first time Shiv had seen and experienced Anandi's parwa. They way she did his champy and how well he was enjoying it. Bheem Singh walks in on them and Anandi(Ashi) asked him to get multani mitti. They even had Bheem Singh say his line. "Sir toh itne gore hain toh unhe aur gora kyun karna?" There is a thunder like sound of laughter in the entire haveli. Bheem Singh apologized to Shiv and Anandi and said "Mahi sar ne kaha toh karna pada. Unhe mana karna khaane ki khichdi todhi hai."

The Engagement Ring Scene: The seen began with Anandi and the Shekhar's going to Jaipur. The Shekhar's Mahi and Ashi put up this scene. Daddu's comment was shown as he had asked Shiv to concentrate on his driving. "Arre kya kar raha hai jawaan nazar saamne dhyaan driving par." Anandi and Shiv's eye lock through the rear view mirror was also shown. They show their connection when they selected the same ring for Anandi.

The Mirchi and Dupatta scene: They showed how Anandi and Shiv had won over the people for the nahar project. Here Saachi played the role of Ashi. They show how Ashi had told Shiv that Anandi has magic in her and he in his lost/dreamy voice had yes she does have magic in her. They show how Anandi had made food there and Shiv was admiring her the entire time. They had sat next to each other and Anandi's warning of not having mirchi. Shiv had it anyways thinking if Anandi can 'Why can't I?' She tells him to eat gud and this was how she took care of him. Thye then continue to show how they had gone to the market and seen the katputli dance. Shiv was shown to admire Anandi when she was smiling like a child seeing the dance. They show the dupatta being stuck on Shiv's watch. Anandi and Shiv try to remove it and have an eye lock. They break it only when they here the click sound of the camera.

The Bike scene: Mahi was played by Lal Singh. They show how Mahi had helped his brother Shiv to take his lady love to confess his love to her. Anandi blushed when Mahi(Lal Singh) said the dialogue to Shiv(Mahi). "Bhai meri bike ki laaj rakhna. High way par traffic mein ride karoge. Break zara sambhalke.." and had winked at Shiv. They also showed how Anandi(Ashi) had not understood that the two brother's had planned the bike ride. She was also shown to innocently say no to go on the bike with Shiv and was willing to call her family back. They show Anandi and Shiv ride into sunset.

The Hop scotch scene: One day late afternoon after the sagaai when the Shekhar's had gone back to Udaipur. Dsa and Gehna had gone to the temple. Basant and Bhairon had gone for their work. Anandi was baby sitting Nandu, Warun and Shagun. They were playing hop scotch and insisted that she join them too. She was reluctant at first but seeing the masoom faces she agreed to play with them. It was her turn and she was playing. She was skipping and jumping from house to house and then picked up the stone. She turned and saw a smiling Shiv. She did not know how to react. She was feeling extremely shy that her would be husband saw her a grown woman play the kiddie game. She was about to loose her balance and fall when Shiv lept forward and had caught by her waist. They had an eyelock. They were forced to break it and were brought down to planet Earth by the kids.They then had played hop scotch with Nandu, Warun and Shagun.

Anandi and Shiv could not help but blush all the time. After the act was done Anandi suddenly giggled when she thought of the towel event at the C H. Everyone looked at her and Shiv too. She looked at him and he got what she had just thought of. He signed her to keep quiet.They were very happy that such a beautiful thing was done for them. They thank everyone for making their special day even more special. 'When did they get time to prepare and reherse for it' they wondered. They also thanked their stars as there were many more events which were not witnessed by anyone.OR ELSE they thought. The sangeet ceremony was successful. One more ceremony and one more day ended. Now there was one day less before Shiv and Anandi become husband and wife. They were getting married day after tomorrow.

Edited by chahat11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww amazing as usualll...he hop scotch scene was good...the rest were goood but since witnessed those scenes live on show not explaining its beauty..since the hop and scoth one is an imagination saying that...
anandi'g giggling on the towel scene was goood, wish that was also enacted,,,
great going chahat...have to wait till tuesay or wat for the wedding to happen or is it even longer...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kurup

Wowww amazing as usualll...he hop scotch scene was good...the rest were goood but since witnessed those scenes live on show not explaining its beauty..since the hop and scoth one is an imagination saying that...

anandi'g giggling on the towel scene was goood, wish that was also enacted,,,
great going chahat...have to wait till tuesay or wat for the wedding to happen or is it even longer...

Thanx

I know that the rest of the things were shown in the show but too much imagination would not make it real

I am showing the story as I want to see in BV so had to include the scenes from the show

the scenes were with POV to show to the guests at the sangeet unhe nahi pata tha na in scenes ke baare mein so I wrote

As I had already mentioned that I am a bullock cart as to where my story is concerned yes so you will have to wait longer for the wedding but the wait is cute and beautiful

not being a donkey praising its own tail but I have written something beautiful

hope you like it too and enjoy the story just like the show can now be enjoyed

Edited by chahat11 - 12 years ago

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