AnSh SS: you are my destiny..!(last part on pg 10)

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MercurialMedusa

@MercurialMedusa

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! take a bow sweetie 👏 totally loved it.. and what an apt title You are my Destiny 👍🏼 yes Ansh r indeed each others destiny how I wish this happens in the show.. this is by far the best story u have written sweets 🤗 well done!!!!

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hooked

@hooked

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Amazing ! I just saw this thread and read it all in one go !!👏 👏

Simply beautiful ! and so sweet ! I love how you brought it all out with both the families present ! Beautiful timing, and so so very cute !!

You really must take up writing !

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Khusi

@khusi_*

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Aww thanku so much for ur sweet comments..feels so good...i will deffo write again...if i will get any new one in my mind...
This story is actually very close to my heart...
Thanku guys...

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

I must say Khushi tat u r a very fabulous writer. I reallly am short of words to appreciate ur work. The way u brought the past which happend reallly long back wen Anandi finished her 10th was reallly awesome. U truly deserve a bow for this thing and the best line I liked in this part was dadisa confessing her misdeeds towards Anandi in front of the whole family including the Shekhar's. The last part that happend in the garden with ANSH was reallly mesmerizing. Shiv is getting naughtier and hottier day by day.

Keep continuing writing dear. There are many who reallly luv ur work and want to continue reading it. So dont disappoint us.

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Peea

@pussycat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

👏So cute story ... love it...😆

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Monamie

@monamie111

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Khushi...i just read part 3 & the last part...and u made me speechless...so i will not be able to say anything more than this! 😆

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Monamie

@monamie111

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Okay...just kidding! 😉 😆 😆

the last part is just amazing...u know what..u actually told the TRUTH OF LIFE! 😳 it actually happens in real life too...i have seen many couples talking about some past incidents which relates them and that time they even did not know that they will be life partner one day..and just the same thing u have written here 👍🏼

how nicely u connected Shiv & Anandi...really brilliant idea! 👏 ⭐️...i hope CVs to show it..seriously i want CVs to get this idea...Shiv & Anandi r made for each other..and this is an awesome idea to connect them like this! 😳

i was really speechless for a moment after finishing the last part 😛..liked the idea very much how u wrote the old video part in grey 👏 loved it...ond of my fav SS on AnSh

and pls do PM me next time, when u will write an OS\SS or anything 😳

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Khusi

@khusi_*

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

aww..so sweet of u...i was kidding re🤗

u know what...i even lost the last part..the wrote it again...!!

kuchh dialogs miss hogaye

thanku for liking it...😳

pm..u know i am such kaam chor on that..will do it😆

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Pragya

@Siya_

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

What a beautiful story! I hadn't seen it until now, so I thought I would comment - all the ideas are so fantastic. From the fb to the halwa scene to the destiny connection. Ab to shaadi bhi ho gayi, I hope CV's can read this.

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