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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very cute and apt Prati...
Loved it!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice first chapter, Pratiii 😃 Very intense! Do update soon 😳

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Thank you all for wonderful comment 🤗
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Part 2

Anandi is is helplessly watching rain fail over… the something in heart stuck as well. She thought its good if she able to take all her pain like this rain…. she remember his hurt face.. how much she hurt shiv this time.. But she hurt as well..she closed her eyes in pain and the she recall that She this is the time of ds medicine.. she walk towards ds room.. And suddenly she heard voice coming out from ds room that picks her interest

She saw the door is ajar.. And ds is talking with someone on phone

DS " are chora tu achanak aise kaise chala gaya?" " mhare ko batya bhi nahi. Apni dadiko ko inta bhi batankar nahi ja sakta to.. ki tu kahi jave hai"

Shiv others ide on phone still fuming but control as he is polite with dadisa always

Shiv" ji dadaji wo jana jaruri tha.." " maa se milna than a muje" wo intazar kar rahi hogi mera .. abhi airport par hu.. thodi de baad filght pakdni hai fir baat nahi ho payegi isliye phone kiya tha."

He stopped for sometime as he wanted to asked something.. But couldn't.. . He wanted to asked about anandi how she is.. But then how can he just asked about her.. anandi asked him to stay away from her life isn't it.. Then.. But still his love is more then anything over her anger..

He asked ds slowly

"dadiji wo anandi kaise hai"

Ds slowly smiling realizing that how much shiv care about her..

"anandi thik hai.. apne kamre mai hogi…" "pata nahi kabse bahar hi na nikli chori kamre se" dadis complete in worried tone

Shiv immediate feel restless as he heart that..

"kyu dadisa.. tyaabye to thik hai na.. ?'

" ha ha tabyet to thik hai chori ki.. ho sakta hai thaki hogi aaram kar rahi hogi.. batt karoge us se"

Anandi is hearing all this smile at her name mention. .whe she heart shiv asked about her.. she feel good that he is stil care for her.. but then feel bad that she hurt him but at the same time she Is very angry over him as well.. because he left without meeting her..

She is fuming at herself..

"aise kaise chale gayae" " bade aaye gar jane wale.. batakar nahi ja sakte the.. mai ghar ja raha hu.. itna mushkil hai batana.."

But when she heard dadisa asked him if he wanted to talk her.. her heart start bit fast immediately.. Almost race in excitement she don't know where this strong feeling come from.. but yes she wanted to talk to him to here his voice.. she look at hopeful at dadisa.. even enter in her room almost fast to for taken phone from her hands

Shiv replied to dadisa immediately knowing anandi still mad at him..

He thought to himself " kahi annadi isa no soche ki mai jabardasti uski jindagi mai gusne ki koshish kar raha hu, muje us se baat nahi karni chahiye naraj ho jayegi wo mujese"

"nahi dadiji.. aap use aaram karne dijiye.. mai fir baad mai baat kar lunga accha ab mai phone rakhta hu.. aap bhi aaram kijye"

"thi hai shiv beta.. rakhti hu.."

Anandi stood there confuse as she saw. .daidsa kept phone down instead handling to her… pain seem run in to her vein as she realize that he refuse to talk to her.

Dadisa look back at her surprise and tell her in excited tone

"are abhi shiv ka phone aaya tha… wo havaiadde par hai wo ab.." "thodi de mai udaypur ke liye nikal jayega choro." "tune baat ki nahi us se"

Anandi is angry that he don't want to talk to her. Almost replied

"dadisa ye lijiye aapki davai.. aur ye raha pani.. pi lijiye.. mai aapko davai deni aayi thi.. aur vasie bhi aapke ladle shiv ko jab mujse baaat karni hogi kar lenge.. abhi mai ja rahi aap der tak jagyi mat so jayiye…"

Dadisa look at her surprise.. she notice something is not right.. but decided to keep silent as this is matter of them..

Anandi come to her room and started thinking deeply.. Why shiv don't want to talk with her.. she thought herself…

"shiv ne mere bare mai pucha par baat nahi karma chahte aisa kyu?", "kya maine uanka dil itna dukhaya jo wo meri aavaj bhi sunna nahi chahte.. , nahi sab unki galti hai.. aane do wapas.. ek to pehle bataya nahi ki ja rahe hai aura b ja rahe hai to baat karma nahi chahte… itni nafrat ho gayi mujse achanak.. wo aayge to mai baat hi nahi karungi.. par fir bhi to yaha to hai bhi nahi hai.. to baat to ek hi hai..

She Is annoyed at him but more then herself.. she hated it that now he don't want to talk to her anymore… she thought against to herself.. "abhi tak wo airport se nikle bhi nahi aur muje abhi se unki itni yaad aarahi hai.. ek hafta kaise reh pavungi mai bina unse mile" she look outside rain in still failing.. she look at rain sadly and wish. Shiv will be soon back to jaitsar again…

Other side shiv is in airport.. Thinking about anandi.. and wanted to see her at least before he leave airport.. he close his eyes and imagine anandi in front of him . her smiling face give his heart relief.. he is realize he is already wish this week end will soon. Then he will be back to his anandi …

Edited by DonIsback - 13 years ago
QuagMyred thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely...awesome...
wish it happens in the show too...😃👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome, Prats!!!!!
Anandi missing Shiv!!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great work👏👏. Please continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Prati its really good😊😊😊 Pls update soon😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
as usual u r superb writer
lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good ne prati👏👏
continue soon

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