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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesum one prati ⭐️
how could i miss this one 😭
waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful!! Can't wait for the nxt part! You portrayed both characters beautifully! Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you...

Originally posted by: funky_junkie

lovely...awesome...

wish it happens in the show too...😃👍🏼


i expect that for too... anandi show some feeling for shiv too.. 😳

Originally posted by: di_vya

Awesome, Prats!!!!!

Anandi missing Shiv!!!!!!! 😳


Thank you yaar...

Originally posted by: mmishra1

Great work👏👏. Please continue...


thank you..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: J.LO

as usual u r superb writer

lovely update



Thank you jeevi.. 🤗

Originally posted by: .Ritushree.

good ne prati👏👏

continue soon


thank you 😛

Originally posted by: khusi_*

Lovely...seems so bechara here...lol


yes khushi he is again bechara here.. i know anjna dont belive in manufacturer evidence .but still lfor me he is bechara.. 😆

Originally posted by: sushiani

Awesum one prati ⭐️
how could i miss this one 😭
waiting for the next part 😊


aww my sweet friend its ok.. i will pm you next time... ok 😉

thanks for lovely comment dear..😊


Edited by DonIsback - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~sweet Ash~

Beautiful!! Can't wait for the nxt part! You portrayed both characters beautifully! Thanx for the pm


thank you for sweet words.. yes i will try to update soon... 😃


sure ., but need sometime for update
Edited by DonIsback - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow ! Great 👏 loved it ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oye jaldi update kar...next part
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part 3


Next day in morning anandi does her regular work.. she still upset that shiv leave before telling her. but more then her restlessness that she is unable to meet him and miss him too.


Even today no one at home.. dadisa and bapusa goes some ware gods know for what reason and seems.. taiji and tavusa also find time themselves.. Suddenly she hear phone ring in hall.. she look at time and realize must be shiv reach udaypur. She run to hall to received phone in excitement thinking its shiv

She holds receiver and utter words kind of breathlessly almost herself

"shiv"

Shiv is other side thinking call to them or not to call them , and praying its not anandi who receive his call and get upset over its but instantly his hand reach to his phone and he dial no.. When first he heard click of sound of phone.. And then he heard her breathless whisper.. "shiv"

Shiver running down his spine as he heard from her..

Did he said her name loud he asked to himself.. then how she know that him on phone. He wonder to himself.. but he find more amusing and tempting its her voice.. the way she whisper his name almost want him to run to jaitsar and embrace her..

He keeps one hand on his chest as he trying to figure out that his heart is same place or not'

Anandi other side heard no response to him and get impatient and whisper again

"shiv aapne hi phone kiya hai na' boliye .. aap baat kyu nahi kar rahe hai?" " aap thij to hai"

She is become so panic to thinking why he not not talk with her

Shiv almost loss his balance as he herd those word form her mouth..

Shiv though for himself and come in to conclusion that he is imagine thing. Because his love for her' so heard whisper in her voice. And passion because he wanted that.. she is just trying to polite.. may be'

He stammered and liitle " ji..ji.. mai thik hu anandi" " wo bus maine isliye phone kiya tha kyuki wo dadi ji ko batana tha.. ki mai udaypur pahoch gaya hau" , " aap unhe itna bas bata dijiye mai..

Anandi cut him between as she set back again her mood to hearing his voice.. plus when she wanted to talk to him badly he jus trying to running away again' what was happening why he is behave this way to her.. so she just went on her frustration over him'

"aap apne aap ko samjte kya hai? , is tarah se koi bhala bina bataye chala jata hai.., aap ghar ja rahe hai inta nahi bata sakte they aap" " muje mera matalb hai sabko aapki kitni chita ho rahi thi jante hai aap." " sabko pareshan kar diya.. aap kaha gaye kyu gaye ye bhi batana jaruri nahi samja aapne"

" aise baat nahi hai, maine kal dadiji ko bata diya tha, aur jana bhi jaruri tha'tum kaise ho?" he is not sure about outburst when she clearly told him that he have nothing to do with her.. they why she reacting this way.. he surprised himself..

Anandi suddenly feel bad to shouted on him she realize that how innocently he repled back to her.. its her who told him not to interfere in her matter.. but when its come to him. She behave otherwise..

"waise batayei aapne ghar jakar kaise lag raha hai aapko.. shiv.. yaha ki yaad aayi aapko"

Shiv is amused her question.. but don't have dare to answer it. Like he miss her.. so much and wanted to be with her all the time' but this is not right time to expressing to her..

Anandi is bemused at his silence.. she wanted to herd from him that he miss her .. and waiting for his response

"ji muje jaitsar ki bahot yaad aagayi.. yaha ke log sabhi itne aache jo hai.." "dadiji ko bata dijiye.. mai ek hafte mai wasp laut raha hu"

Anandi think to herself.. " ha kyu nahi jaitsar ke logo ka yaad kiya tha to yaha ki mitti.. school ..janvar sabko yaad kar lete.. muje yaad karne ki kya jarurat hai." She is fuming at herself he did not mention her' nor even said that he is missing her.. he always brought extreme emotions in her. Whether its anger or love.. she react extreme with him..

But then she realize its all because of her.. he is keep in check his boundaries' she smile fondly to receiver as she holding..she wanted to asked him about his family.. but dont know how he will react.. she is not going to giving him any hint about her approval.. he need to win her over.. she thought to herself...

"aap jaldi nahi laut sakte agar aapka kham khatam ho gaya ho' mera matlab wo school ka kaam bhi karma than a isliye"

Shiv heart running in excitement.. he feel like to just run to her.. but keep himself in to check as he don't want made her upset..

He is in cloud nine to here her response.. Seems for him things are going to be ok with him'

"jee fir mai mai juru jaldi chala aavunga.. aapke liye mera matlab hai aapke kaam ke liye to aana padega hi na' mai jarur aavunga.. yaha par kuch kaam nipta lu.. shayd 3 din mai vapas aajavunga" " abhi mai rakhta hu.. muje abhi bahar bhi jana hai. Mai tumse baat mai baat karta hu"

"ok shiv"

Shiv stand the same place as he complete his conversation with anandi.. ..for him she is seems different today.. and he like it lot to.. " kya wo muje miss kar rahi hongi.. he asked himself and and then thought no .. shiv you are gone case your are imagine things now' and heading toward his work..


Anandi still frown over 3 days.. but happy at least he will be back in jaitsar' she smile at herself dreamily and think how he don't what to admit that he miss her' he even not asked if she is missing him

"kya pata agar puch liya hota to shayad mai ha bhi keh deti.. ki muje unko bahot yaad aarahi thi.. ye chance to gaya unka'" and she blush and run to her school in happiness to complete her daily procedure..


Edited by DonIsback - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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(shiv family will introduce letter.. i will take my quality time to born new character.. in this ss.😆.)
Edited by DonIsback - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome!!!!!
Anandi saying Shiv before he said Hello... 😳
Too good👏...already waiting for next part!

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