Ansh SS-'rain' (part 4updated on page 7)

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SS- Rain

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Shiv is very angry at himself.. to day he need to go to udaypur.. His flight will on today date.. he don't want to delay his flight.. but this is not the only thing making him away from jaitsar..Because of anandi.. The way she behave with him today made him hurt.. How can she think so low about him? I just wanted to help her and she said don't dare to interfere in her matter. Why don't she understand for the once I am in love with her.. I wanted to help her to redeem her pain. But no.. Why shiv who are you?. isn't that same thing she asked you.. . his anger is verge on explode.. don't know what hurt him most anandi indifference or may be she think him like stranger. He close his eyes frustration a silent tear escape from his eyes..

He remember just some days ago he teach her how to drive jeep.. How they are start slowly to understand each other. Even she accepted his friendship. But then now what made her think that she is behaving with him like this. Today he just asked her what happen you seems upset.. she exploded him for no reason and asked him not to interfere to her matter as he is stranger in life..

"Ajanabhi mai ajanabhi hu.. dosti ke layak bhi nahi samja usne muje" " aisa kya hogaya jo anandi ne aaj aisa bartav kiya mere sath , muje yaha se dur jana hi hoga. Ab ye dard mujse bardhash nahi hota"

"kuch di ke liye hi sahi mera yaha se bahar jana hi thik hoga"

He angrily walk towards his jeep and start driving towards airport.. he called bheem sing and inform hin that he is leaving jaitsar.. for week.. he will b come after week..

Anandi is other side is crying because of her weird behavior with shiv.. she know that from past days.. They are so comfortable with each other even become friends too.. but she don't know what happening to her when she is around shiv.. Something change in there relationship.. she love to be around him . She love to be close to him.. she enjoyed his proximity when he try to make her understand driving rules and all.. he look like stern teacher but at the same time cute kid inside him.. She wanted to be in his arms when he hold her so close to him.. she close her eyes shudder at the thought.. when he asked her what wrong with you she wanted to shouted at him.. Telling his that you are doing wrong me.. but unable. Instead she taken her anger over him because she is not ready for new relationship.. she is fear too feeling hurt again..

" muje maaf kijiye shiv. Lekin kuch hai jo hamare bich badal chukka hai.. pata nahi ye kya hai par mai is baat ko aage nahi badhana chahit.. isliye aapka dil dukhana jaruri tha"

She cried harder on this..

Lonely tear escaped from her eys.. as she feel that.. Her heart is shatter in million peace to remember hurt face of shiv..

"kyu shiv.. asia kyu ho raha hai hamare sath.. pata nahi par' muje tumai ek dost mila tha.. aur ab fires mai use pyar ke rishte mai bhadkar apni dosti ko nahi khona chahti.."

She look outside and saw raining heavily'she just closed her eyes in pain

"she hate rain.. this rain always brought bad memory of her life with jagya that she spend with him"

She is the one who first reject him and now she is the one who wanted to relationship with him.. but she is ready to loss her friendship over this new relationship..

She don't know that answer and she afraid to search for it..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Index page

Part 1 - page 1
Part 2 - page 3
Part 3 - page 5
part 4 - page 7

MY other work

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Prati🤗 You too writing SS😃...that was very sweet yaar😊😊...jaldi update karna😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice starting!!
continue soon
plz add me in pm list😊
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Prati add me in ur PM list and whenever update this PM me please... It is so so so nice...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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arre itna jaldi khatam ho gaya neways nice !! i was thinking to write smthing par yeh sab romantic cheez likhna mere baas ki baat nahin !! good Job👍🏼
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Hey i wanted pm list too.. so please hit like button of my second post as well index page.. so i can add you all in my pm list... i wanted to know who will love to read regular update of my ss
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very nice one.plz continue soon
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Wow!!..amazing start Prati 👏
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Lovely ...tu ss lihati ahe ...hehe ansh cha prabhav cont soon

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