ShivAn FF UPDATED Prt 3B-Pg.8 SORRY NO PM :( - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
nice update next time make it long and thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Thank you all! 🤗
And next time pakka i'll keep the part up to your expectations 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
nice update!!!
liked shiv n gulli's convo...he know something abt anandi now.
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭 I WROTE THE WHOLE PART MY PC CRASHED AND I COULDN'T SAVE IT 😭 SOME MORE TIME TO UPDATE GUYS SORRY
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3-b

He turned towards the door.

"Collector sahib!!" She called out.

He turned back to him looked at her and lovingly said aap mujhe SHIV bula akti hain" and gave his perfect smile.

She smiled too and said, "aap toh umar or aude (age and designation) dono mein mujhse bohot bade hain main aapko naam se kese bula dakti hun?"

"Toh thik h, tum mujhe Shiv bhaiya bula lo??" his tone and voice were so full of love (worth dying for!!! But girls control your emotions!!!!)

He smiled wider and said "Chalta hun".

"Shiv bhaiya!!" she called out again making him turn towards her once again. "aapko pata hai mera koi bhai nahi hai."

"meri bhi koi behen nahi hai na…emm, nahi thi. Ab tum ho naa"

They both smiled at each other. "ab nahi gaya toh pehle hi din late office pohochunga!! "he showed fake anger and chuckled. "chalta hun"

She said, "dobara zarur aaiyega" and smiled wider.

"Sure" he said and went away.

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Anandi along with sugna and her kids was in the market. Smiling and joking with the kids. She herself looked a child while shiv saw her from a distance. His car was on the way to the D.C. office while he just stopped to confirm the way and as a guy told him the way he saw her and kept looking at the childishness in her. One Anandi he saw not more than 12 hours before, serious, sarpanch of a village responsible, mature and on and on… and another one was in front of his eyes now. He couldn't decide which one was real!

"Collector sahab! Samajh gaye naa aap raasta?" The boy said breaking his thoughts and making him come back in the reality.

"er.. em.. haan main chala jaunga Dhanyawaad! (Thank you)"

"ghandi ghamba" the boy said.

"Namaste" he replied politely.

He drove ahead. But gulli's voice echoed in his years. "Unka talaq ho gaya hai!"

"Talaq, and Sarpach in the vil;age in such a delicate age how old she must be??? Emm.. 23 or 24?" he thought to himself.

"fir bhi koi shikan nahi thji unlke chere pe! Kitne confidence ke aath unhone kal ka pura function attend kiya, Impressive!" he raised his brows as he thought while driving.

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I am sorry guys I could not PM u guys due to shortage of time with me i know its a short one but I really don't have anytime these days i 'm sorry I know I promised u a better part this time... 🤢

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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
no probs. but nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Good post ayushi .i was waiting for update ...
You just gave me a shock never n ever i imagined shiv anandi as bro n sis... 😆
hope you update soon this time
dont bother abt pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
You write very well 👏👏. Enjoyed it ⭐️.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you so much for the lovely update...just finished reading part 3A and 3B...nice going..and i am loving it!! 😳...do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
nice part...i was waiting for ur update and so decided to check for myself
it was a very nice part short but sweet and we are also getting an insight into shiv's mind
do continue soon

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