ShivAn FF UPDATED Prt 3B-Pg.8 SORRY NO PM :(

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masked2011

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

so he is actually disturbed... lets see how things developed between them

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Pratiksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

its nice but why so short.. can you please update bigger then this... a very short update make me little disappointed... you write really well and i am just taking about short update. so don't misunderstand.

Edited by DonIsback - 13 years ago

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Kehkasha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Thank you for the pm dear
It was very nice and well written...n i think u r giving me complexity by writing so wonderfully :)

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Preeti Ravindra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Lovely Update!! Though short but its the content that matters nd that was awesome!!! 😃
I hope sth like this happens in the serial 2...well he's gonna meet Gulli nd the other students! Eagerly waiting 4 Monday nd 4 ur Part-B!!
Thank U 4 d PM...nd Update Soon! 😊
Keep Smiling nd Keep Rocking! 😃

Edited by TanyalovMusic - 13 years ago

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

a very nice conversation between gulli and shiv.. oh my, he got to know abt the marriage and he is feeling affected... that was totally good! thank you for the update and also the PM! please update soon!

Edited by arul01 - 13 years ago

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

nice update. good that at least shiv got to know partial facts about anandi.

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Ayushi Budhia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: mjht_ArVi4ever
Thank you for the pm dear
It was very nice and well written...n i think u r giving me complexity by writing so wonderfully :)

Me n copmplexity comeonm... jann u r the best... 😉 😊

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Ayushi Budhia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: DonIsback
its nice but why so short.. can you please update bigger then this... a very short update make me little disappointed... you write really well and i am just taking about short update. so don't misunderstand.

I know sweetheart and i wanted to update a long one this time sachhi but i ws kinda lacking ideas and i wanted to update before theactual shiv's viit to A's school in serial sooo... promise i'll try to keep it longer next time

and misunderstandings dont stand in the case dear coz i welcome each n every criticism... u can tell even if there's something i need to improve about my writing skills 🤗